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Posted: 10 years ago

#91

Are mujhse bhi se bhi koi demand ho to tell me ..sabki mange puri hongi ..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#92

Meri demand ye hain ki no mu between naksh and ha uss kiss ki wajah se bilkul bhi nahi okei sweetu...

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: --pranu--
Meri demand ye hain ki no mu between naksh and ha uss kiss ki wajah se bilkul bhi nahi okei sweetu...

Ye kya mang liya princess ...mu to story ki dimand hai but I try ki naksh ki folt na ho...dont worry this wu ki not for kiss..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: ruchigarg

Ye kya mang liya princess ...mu to story ki dimand hai but I try ki naksh ki folt na ho...dont worry this wu ki not for kiss..

okeiii😊

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#95

Part-2

Akshu Took her hand on her pocket nd gave latter to rajshree

Raj-akshra hpy ye nani ka hai

Ak-yes mom put her hand on rajshree shoulder

Raj-mai pad k aati hu meri bachi abhi tu aacha kam bhi karti hai

Ak-yes mom but wb my cell phone

Raj-she is so hpy so she said yes

Akshu bacome more hpy to listen this yee dad nd throw all things here nd there ..

Ak -dad mujhe ye wala chahiye

Vi-oki beta

Suddenly rajshree came with anger

Raj-kya karu mai iska tujhe mobile chahiye tha to bol deti ye galt letter kyo diya

Ak-eee thought maa ko kaise pata ..kya mom nani ka hi hai

Raj -nani I love u betu nahi bolti khabhi aur tere mama ka phone aaya tha usne bola

Ak-mom ek to apko kush karne k liye I wrote letter aur aap hai mujhpe gusaa ho rahi 1 month se nani ka koi letter nahi aaya to maine soch nd cry ..went her room

Raj-akshra ruk to ye ladki kuch sunti kyo nahi

Vish-mana tarika galt tha par irada to sachi tha na

Raj-usse apni bat manvani thi mobile k liye

Vis-ek hi beti h dekhiye wo galt nahi hai sab bachpana hai thik ho jayga

Raj-mai uski maa hu usko sab jimedari lete dekhna chahti hu galt hai kya

Vi-nahi par thik hai

Here akshi in her room lay on bad

Ak-akshu ab kya karegi maa tujhse bhut gussa hai kal sry bol dungi bas ab soti hu ..

Than her phone ringing ...

Ak-helooo

In phone-hii akshu howz u

Ak-fine are smile itne dino bad

Pho-yess I know mai shadi kar rahi hu

Ak-muskan par tu kisse

Mu-yr alok se

Ak-what alok se waaw he is so smart tu bilkul sachi h uske liye vut his family

Mu-yr pyar sab sikha deta hai I know mere liye thodi muskil hogi but alok mere sath hai than sab thik ho jayga

Ak-yup I m hpy because my frd is hpy

Mu-tujhe aana hai oki no bahana

Ak-of course yr pakka 15 din pehle

Mu-bye hpy to listen this

Ak-bye

Nd slept in morning she wokeup 10 am ..

Ak-oo my dad se puchti hu wo mujhe shadi mai jane dege ya nahi nd say sry to mom

Than she saw her perents sit on

bad

Ak-mom dad aap yaha

Raj-put her hand on her hair nd said meri bachi

Ak-mom mujhe kuch nahi chahiye I m sry

Raj-smile esse kaise mai janti hu tum mujhe udas nahi dekhna chahti thi thabhi kiya na koi nahi dekh teri nani ka letter aa gaya

Ak-sit nd said waaw mom ab le lu cell phone

Vi-laugh lo beta nd gave

Ak-waaw waaw nd gave hug to both of them nd stoodup nd dance

Ak-yee mere mom dad no no mere bauji meri mata ji nd dance

Rajshree nd vish laugh to saw her pagalpan

Raj-ruk ruk kuch aur bhi manegi

Ak-doing dance yes mom

Raj-hum teri shadi k liye k liye ladka pasand kiya wo aaj aa raha hai

Ak-dance not listen properly yes mom

Raj-thik hai tujhe mila k usse thode din mai rishta pakka kar denge

Ak-apni masti mai yes mom

Rajshree becomes hpy ndcwent mai taiyari karti hu

Akshu is doing dance dont listen what rajshree said yee bhaiya mujhe mil gaya gya ab to diya tujhe batati hu mujhe challenge kiya na ab batati hu ..nd dance

Vi-beta mubark ho ab to apka band bajega

Ak-kya dad

Vi-said shadind went

Ak-dance nd thought baja what nd thought aaa vry loud voice shadiii 😆

Interval more part coming soon..

Edited by ruchigarg - 10 years ago

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Shadi ye maine kya kar diya stop sit on bad nd her hand on her cheeks

Ak-kya karegi akshu ab soch soch mom to tera baja bajwa hi degi kya karu uski cold drink mai karela mila dungi no no pichle bar kiya tha mom ne mujhe 1 month tak old drink nahi di got it jab wo aayega in door I put some oil wo gir jayga nd bhag jayga waise bhi wo forgien wala to bhag gaya tha no no but he is indian kya karu pehle to mom se puchti hu

Nd went in kichen

Ak-mom mujhe ladke se nahi milna

Raj-doing tayari nd all beta wo tujhe dekhne nahi aa raha h bas business k liye aa raha h

Ak-what pagal h kya ye kya hai business k sath ladki muft

Raj-no beta bat ye hai ki uske maa bauji chahte h wo shadi kr le par wo nahi manta so tere mama ne bola ki us ladke ko yaha rukao aur akshra se milao agar wo tujhe pasand kar lega to hum bat aage badayege

Ak-ye kya hai pagalpan hua ye to na mai ready hu na wo ready hai phir kyo

Raj-kyoki hum chahte h bacho ka ghar bas jaye

Ak-to hai to ye mera aur jo bhi uska nam h wo uska ghar what relation between wedding vry angry voice

Raj-tu haa boli na dekh tune pure 10ladko ko bhagaya hai ab essa nahi hona chahiye bas tu chup chap milegi

Ak-no mom meri life h ye agar chup rakhna to mujhe bolna hi nahi sikhate na

Raj-dekh ladka aayga tujhe pasand bhi karega agar kuch kiya to tu dekh lena

Ak-mom maifrd k yaha jaugi

Raj-rishta ho jaye to jana

Ak-maaa irritating voice mai uske khane mai jeher mila dugi

Raj-tujhe to bas baitha dungi khana pina sab mere hand mai hai aur kuch

Ak-uska room kon sa hoga

Raj -hamare room k bagal wala

Ak-man hi man shit yr mere room k bagal wala hota to mai kuch kar k bhaga deti

Raj-ab ja suit pehen le

Ak-no mai kefri pehugi

Raj-mar khaygi tu suit matlab suit

Akshu irritated noo went in room

Throw all things

Ak-mujhe kuch bhi karke usse bhagana hai bas nd thought somthing ohooo aao aao mister jo bhi ho welcome nd thought some nauthanki waaw ye akshu

Tu great hai shadi to tab hogi na jab wo tujhe pasand karega usse tokuch pata hi nahi hai essa hal karugi bhag jaoge ..than she went bagal room yes ladka room dhaniya clean d room

Ak-dhaniya ji

Dh-ji baby ji akshu di boliye

Ak-ho gaya room ready

Dh-ji hamare jamai saa yaha rahege

Ak-dont like this irritating oo god tu na mar khaygi

Dh-sry didi

Ak-didi ki bachi tera jo bhola se taka hai bata du mom ko soch le use nokari se nikal dungi aage se us ullu ko jamai saa bola to

Dh-sry didi put her hand on her ears ab nahi bolugi

Ak-gud aur koi jarurat nahi thik h room is dul mai reh lega to mar nahi jayga

Dh-mujhe malkin mar dengi aur ho gaya ye to saf mai jati hu

Ak-ooki ja dhaniya leave here akshu ka mission bagao coming soon what she did

Here vish nd rajshree did all preparation nd vry hpy

Raj-sab thik hoga na

Vi-sayad pray to god

Raj-is ladki mai itna pagalpan hai bas ye ladka ise pasand kar le

Vis-dekhiye akshu ki mom kuch wo iski kami ko pura karega kuch hamari bachi uski kami ko pura karegi tab dono ekdom made for each other ho jayge

Raj-wo to karega to aacha hi hai iske andar kubi hai hi kaha bas nutanki kara lo

Vi-kahi tohoga hi koi bhi insan perfect nahi hota hai kuch kami to hoti hi hai sab k under dekh lijiye ga jo iske liye bana hai wo kahi na kahi to milega hi ..than both heard some voice

Radhe kishna uncle aunty ji

Both turn saw a cutee boy wore jeans surt jacket ...hand jod k

Both throught are name to pucha hi

nahi

Raj-ji beta ye wahi hai kitna pyara hai

Ladka-ji mai natik natik singhaniya apke bhaine sayad bataya hoga mai yaha business k liye aaya hu

Vi-ji aaiye natik beta

Natik came saw big house nd gave smile than he touches vishmber foot

Vi-beta ye sab

Na-ji uncle apki pray k bina kuch nahi ho sakta aasirvad dijiye

Rajshree ki 100 vat ki smile

VisMber gave blassings than natik take blassings to rajshree

Na-aunty ji pls mujhe apna aasirwad dijiye

Ra-ji beta kub kush raho

Na-ji aunty nd gave smile

Raj-baitho beta

Na-ji pehle aap dono phir mai

Both becomes vry vry hpy to listen this

Raj-beta shdi ????????

Precap -natik becomes shocked to see akshi😆 akshi ki nautanki😆

So gys pls pls press like button if u like nd tell howz it waiting for ur comments ..pls batao story thik to hai na

Waiting waiting I know this part is not so gud I try to give next part interesting. .

Sry for mistakes

Edited by ruchigarg - 10 years ago

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_nakshi_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#97

Gud part sweetu story line is gud...

Its beginning wen story goes it will be Awesome I know...

This is short part na ??

Loved akshi bubbliness...

do update soon wanna see naksh bonding...

Edited by --pranu-- - 10 years ago

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hirannaksh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#98

nice part ruchi..
akshara ki shadi tension..i always love it..
naitik ki entry bhi good..
overall i enjoy this part
do update soon..
ya yaa chinta mat karo de rahi hu..
aaj *** / 5..

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: --pranu--
Gud part sweetu story line is gud...
Its beginning wen story goes it will be Awesome I know...
This is short part na ??
Loved akshi bubbliness...
do update soon wanna see naksh bonding...

Thanku dear for liking dis part😳tqq for talling about story I try to gave naksh bonding...yup me to like akshi this rup⭐️

But ye short part tha😲

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#100

Originally posted by: hirannaksh
nice part ruchi..
akshara ki shadi tension..i always love it..
naitik ki entry bhi good..
overall i enjoy this part
do update soon..
ya yaa chinta mat karo de rahi hu..
aaj *** / 5..

Yup thanku so much sonal fr ur sweet comments 😃

Yaa I will do update soon ..

But mere stars kam ho rahe hai😲