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Sameera Badar

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Posted: 10 years ago

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NYC part Ruchi dear...I don't have any words...after read ur ff part...plz update next part soon

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SA-SIMRAN

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Posted: 10 years ago

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nice part naksh romanceis awesome kya tum next part mein is the last part its sad

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: sameera_naksh
NYC part Ruchi dear...I don't have any words...after read ur ff part...plz update next part soon

Aww thanku so much sameera for liking my ff nd gave vry nice comments ..😳 I will do update next part soon dear😊

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: SA-SIMRAN
nice part naksh romanceis awesome kya tum next part mein is the last part its sad

Aww thanku so much simran ..for liking this part nd gave comments dear ..dont be sad ye end hoga to dusra aayga .😳

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hirannaksh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#835

awesome part ruchu...mindblowing...
naksh ka romance...always treat to read it...
very well written too...
good...
****1/2 out of 5

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: hirannaksh
awesome part ruchu...mindblowing...
naksh ka romance...always treat to read it...
very well written too...
good...
****1/2 out of 5

Aww thanku thanku thanku thanku so much sona for liking this part nd gave comments dear. .I was waiting for u ..nd thanku for stars😳 ..ab aachi bachi jaise u also do update next part ..😉

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Part-38

After two nd half years :-:)

Natik sat on bed ..akshi sat on his lap ..natik tickling on her stomach ..she is laughing ..these two years were dream love for both ..they were so hpy ..in their life..natik put her head on her nack ..nd kissed ..no one in house gy3 rajbanna.rashmi ..they went in wedding. .

Na-I love u akshi..nd kissed her nack..kitne dino bad ye moka mila hai ..hum akele hai ..

Ak-kya kar rahe ..tum bhul rahe ho ..hum akle nhi ..hamare sath..nd laugh..

Na-esse kuch bhi mat bolo.mera promise ..my time..

Mamma in totaly voice duggu say..yes naksh got perents before six month ago..now both became proud perents (remember our bannai said mamma)..

Ak-mera baby ..kissing on his cheeks. .

Na-aur mai ..kissing on her nack..duggu sat on akshis lap ..both r playing with duggu ..

Ak-aap to mere baby ke papa ..yad hai na wo din jab duggu hua ..laugh.

Na-ek hi bat hamesha ..din bhar tease karna ..usi bat ko lekar ..

Ak-haa us din lebarpain to tumko hua tha ..laugh..yad h mujhe..

Na-utho ..mujhe jane do ..wo mera pyar tha ..

Ak-aacha ji ..to ye mera par h .tumko tease karna ..

Duggu said mamma..

Na-ye papa kyo nhi bolta hai..mammy ka chamcha..

Ak-aacha ..mela baby ..mera pyara beta hai ..gande papa..

Na-aacha ..hamara beta ..

Ak-us din..

Na-phir..

Ak-haa yad aa rha h mujhe ..

FLASHBACK IN CAR:-

Ak-mujhe bhut pain ho raha hai..

Na-bas aa gya akshi ..

Ak-mai gai natik ...

In hospital ..natik took akshi in arms..

Na-baap re kitni moti ho gai ho..heavy ..

Ak-anger majak mat karo ..chalo ..ander ..batati hu bad mai ..shout ..little

But natik shouted more nd more ..

Na-pls sab hat jaiye ..jaldi jaldi ..

Ak-shout little but irritated with natiks shout. .

Natik put to akshi in wheelchair. .

Ak-aa shout ..

Na-pls hato mujhe bhut pain ho raha hai ..pls jaldi kariye ..

Every one saw nd laugh..

Ak-tumhe nhi mujhe pain ho raha in cry nd anger voice. .she hold her Tammy. ..

Na-didnt listen ..apni dun mai ..pls meri biwi ko bacha hone wala hai pls ...doctor ..

Ak-ye maa bhi piche reh gai ..itna mat chilao natikk pls ..baby dar jayga..

Na-ise to aane do mai batata hu..itna tang karta hai kya hai kya baby apni mammy ko..

Ak-in pain..plsss ..mere baby ko kuch mat bolo ..wo bhi to tadap raha hai mammy ki god mai aane ko..

Na-phir bhi ..aaa ..aa ..shout..

Akshi was in so much in anger😡ak-had hai ..mujhe pain ho raha hai ya tumhe ..😡😆😆

Na-bas aa gya ..

Doctor came ..

Do-pls sir ..itna halla kyo kar rhe hai aap..jisko baby hone wala hai wo to chila nhi rahi hai ..jitna aap chile rahe hai..

Na-pls mujhe bhut pain ho raha hai..

Do-kya

Na-matlab meri wife ko ..kuch kijiye ..he was really panic. .

Now nurse took to akshi in operation theater ..but akshi hold natiks hand vry tightly. .

Na-mujhe bhi jana hai..

Do-no no ..essa nhi hota .

Ak-pls .natik mat jao..mujhe bhut dar lag rha hai ..

Naksh went in o.t.:-

Under d ot..

Akshi shouted vry loud ..but natik hold her hand ..

Na-now natik cry so much..his eyes filled with tears ..pls aaram se doctor. .

Naksh shouted..but afer sometimes dey heard baby voice ..omg ..gr8 feeling ..akshi slowly went in sleep nd akshi went out...

He didnt say anything ..mixed emotions ..suprised ..confused ..he crying ..but happiness wali..mai papa ..put his hand on his mouth. .

AFTER SOMETIMES AKSHI WOKEUP nurse came..

Ak-mera bacha ..cry nd tears came ..

Nurse gave baby. .said its boy ..akshi hold her baby ..same feeling ..crying ..like in serial she held first time duggu ..

Ak-baby aap to bilkul apne papa jaise ho ..kisses ..he cried little but akshi made face nd smile ..bas bas sry mera bacha ..papa kaha hai..

Natik came in room ..saw baby nd akshi ..he cry smile ..nd vry hpy..

Ak-papa ..

Natik sat on bed nd lay beside akshi..

Ak-lo baby ko..

Na-ye kitna chota sa hai ..cry .nhi gir jayga ..tum rakho bas..mammy jaise pyare ho ..little playing..sry ..apko nhi maruga mai ..wipe his tears..

Ak-papa kitna pyar karte hai..mammy se jayada inhone hospital ko sur mai utha diya..

Na-thik ho akshi..

Ak-baby ko pyar to karo ..

Na-cry ..nhi bhut chota sa hai ..kuch ho gya to..

Ak-kuch nahi hoga ..

He kisses on baby cheeks ..again he hilofy ..natik saw nd became hpy..

Na-thanku mujhe sabse pyara gift dene ko ..pyar ka rup..mai iske mukable kuch nhi de sakta hu ..

Ak-haa ab do baby ko samalugi ..

Na-mai har chiz mai pura sath dunga ..ye hamara baby hai ..hum milke .iska khayal rakhege..

Natik gave kiss on akshi cheeks wen baby cry..

Ak-aww ..mera baby ..

Na-lo ..abhi se problems. Ise ..mammy ka chamcha. .

Ak-natikk..tumhare jaisa hi hai ..pura..

Both laugh nd hpy then everyone came gy3 rashmi etc..

FLASH BACK END

More parts coming soon

Edited by ruchinaksh - 10 years ago

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Na-but tum janti ho na ..I didnt see u in pain..mujhe bhi utna hi dard hota hai ..

Ak-mujhe pata hai ..hum dono ka dard ek hi hai ..thabhi to puri life tamhare nam kar di ..her face touches to him..I love u ..

Na-lao naksh ko mai sula deta hu..

Ak-par meri turn hai na ..

Natik took to duggu in his arms ..thy apart from each ..

Na-duggu bolo papa ..

Duggu silent saw to natik ..he sat on his tammy ..akshi Saw nd gave smile ..

Ak-tqq god ..meri life mai wo sab kuch dene k liye jo bachapan se kho diya tha maine ..par natik ne meri life mai puri tarah pyar hi pyar bhar diya aur meri family ne bhi ..mere bache ko dene k liye ..mai puri ho gai hu ..

AFTERSOME TIME AKSHI DOING WORK IN KITCHEN :-

Natik came but not shout ..

Ak-duggu so gaya ..

Na-gave hug.are yr ..phir pata chal gya ..kaise karti ho ..sab ..

Ak-tumhari to dil hi mera hai ..puri tarah se to pata chalega hi na .

Na-hmm ..aacha sab ho gya ..maine duggu ki cupboard clean kar di ..usko hull mai sula diya ..bottle clean kar di..pls tum mujhe deasion bana k dedo ..aur hamari cupboards clean karo ..khana ..

Ak-she hold natiks hand which he put ..on akshis stomach ..I love u natik ..hum apna kam hamesha mil k karege ..I m so lucky ..ki mujhe tum jaisa hubby mila.

Na-mujhe tum jaisi wife ..I love u too..kiss on her cheeks. .

Ak-aacha tum kisse jayada pyar karte ho ..mujhe ya apne bete se ..

Na-ye kya qu hai .dono se barabar ..

Ak-aacha chodo mujhe ..matlab mera pyar bat gaya na ..she push her nd went ..then natik hold her hand..nd push ..in rolling position ..both face became so close ..

Na-tum mere pyar ko ajmana chahti ho ..

Ak-nhi ..mai to majak ..her breath touches to natik. .he came close to her nack nd gave kiss ..

Now he sat on his kness..hold her stomach ..with d help of his hand ..I love u ..She caressing his hair from her hand .now he kisses on her bare stomach ..teasly touch ..this sarcastically touch make her forgot world ..in whisper voice she said natikkk. .but he stuck on her stomach nd kissed like mad ..this touch make her wild .now he entered his tongue .on her naval. .she hold his hair little tighty ..swlly he shaking ..nd akshi now gave signal that..I m also want u..solwy he came Upar ..nd kisses on her tammy ..she was moan ..Now he put to akshi little down but hold her on his hand ..nd kisses on her chest. .she cupped her hand one his nack..now natik sat on chair ..nd she sat on his lap ..she kissed on his cheeks right side..than on chin .he sprinted his hand on her shoulder ..now he went near on her nack nd bite her nack little hard ..nd kisses her on chest now this is too much for akshi ..she also gave respond she also starting kissing on his nack..both saw in each eyes ..than natik put her bottom lipe in his mouth nd shaking nd biting ..she also gave respond with d help of her tongue ..nd searching his tongue. .now both kissing properly to each like first time dey kissed to each ..now he hold her blouse ..she cupped her hand on his nack ..nd both gave passionate kiss to each ..now he want more nd broke d kiss both breath becoming ho heavy. .he kisses on her nack..than akshi felt ..duggu wokeup..

Ak-natik..kuch aawaj ..sayad duggu uth gya..wo aa jayga yha ..

Na-busy are so gaya hai wo..kisses

Ak-nhi ..

Than they heard some voice ..natik did free to akshi..

Duggu said paap..pa..he became vry hpy to listen this. .

Akshi stood ..he saw in his knees nd saw to his mom dad..akshi took to duggu ki her arms ..nd kissed ..

Ak-mera bacha ..duggu pointed his finger on natik.papa..pa..a.mme..like cutiee baby in totali voice..

Natik became vry voice took in his arms to duggu..

Na-gave kiss..Mera beta ..par papa ke pyar ka dusman ..duggu start crying. .nd gave hand to akshi..

Ak-aww ..mera baby ..took in arms ..bure papa..natik jayada mat bolo ..mera duggu ko kuch bhi .wipe his tears with her tumb..marege papa ko..

Na-duggu stop crying. Had hai chup ho gya ..abhi se itne tevar .kuch bol doto royege ..haa .pull his cheeks. .

Ak-bhut samjhdar h na .papa ka beta

Na-hamara beta ..thoda mammy jaisa thoda papa jaisa .naksh gave kiss to duggu..

More parts coming soon. .😉

Edited by ruchinaksh - 10 years ago

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Ak-pls natik chalo na isko pura family day banate hai ..

Na-matlab..

Ak-park mai ..chaloge na duggu ..hmm.he laugh nd clapping ..

Na-lo jab mammy ready ..beta ready to mai kon hu jo bich mai aau.

They reached in park.duggu pointed his finger on d side of jhula..

Na-ye kitna smart hota ja raha hai ..har jagah bas finger karke mujhe le jao.

Ak-mere bache lo najar mat lagao..aao duggu ..she went natik behind ..open akshi blouse dori ..akshi gavd anger look..natik said sry ..made sry face ..akshi said ..nAughtyy in giving signal..akshi sat to duggu in jhula ..he enjoyed so much..naksh look at each other nd playing with duggu... (song played .thoda hum bhi khelege thoda hum bhi kudege tere sang hum bhi tutlayge ghoda ban ke tera hum sair tujhe karayege ) they put to duggu in slip siddy.nd he enjoyed (tere naj sare hum uthayege ..ab har gadi tu hai plako tale dil teri atkheli mai koya ..sang hasa har din sang tere roya..jaddu tera chal gya)..

Akshi sat on table wer duggu was also sat ..natik went to take water..then one women sat to one girl near to duggu ..he saw nd laugh hold her hand ..both enjoyed ...

Natik came nd saw duggu playing with this girl ..nd laugh..akshi saw here nd there ..didnt notice..

Na-came..dekho ..apne duggu ko kitna flat kar rha hai..

Ak-akshi saw..aaj kal k bache.mera baby kel raha hai bas..than duggu gave kiss to girl nd she start crying. .

Na-laugh..dekho ..abhi ye hal hai ..bada hoke kya karega..

Ak-aao duggu..sab tumhare karan .sab ulta tum hi sikhate ho ye bhi.

Than girls perents took to girl..but duggu hold her hand didnt skip .nd cry..

Ak-baby ..aao ..ro kyo rahe ho ..took to duggu

Na-dekha isko..Bhut badmash ho gya..

Akshi hold his in her arms..

IN NIGHT. .

Akshi changed her cloth wore nighty ..

Natik came ...duggu playing with akshi ...

Ak-mera baby ..papa bola..enjoy liya aaj..

Na-kya bat ho rahi hai..lay near akshi..

Ak-kuch nhi ..meri aur mere bete ki private talks..

Na-mujhse kya privacy ..akshi ji ..apka hubby ka aap par pura hak hai ..in teasly voice. .

Ak-datt ..jab pehli bar dekha tha to esse lage jaise ladai karne wale ho..dhire dhire pata chala itne sweet ho..bad mai pata chala itne naughty ho ..pull his cheeks. .duggu playing with dall..

Na-aacha maine dekha to mujhe laga bhut ladai karne wali hai..phir pata chala ..kitna sweet heart hai ..lekin bad mai pata chala ..came near ears ..in whispers voice. .bhut tasty hai..

Ak-datt..tum bhi hamrsha ..dekha duggu ko bhi asar aa raha hai..

Na-mera beta hai ..apni mammy se pyar to karega hi ..gave hug to akshi ..put his head on akshis chest...duggu saw this nd crying. .

Na-kya hua..

Ak-lagi kya ..both broke hug..duggu stop..

Na-mai dekh raha hu ..jab bhi tumhare pass rehta hu rone lag jata hai..

Ak-laugh ..kya tum bhi ..papa beta jeko jeko..

Duggu came near to akshi nd hug her..

Na-jao so jao apne bete k sath..ab duggu aap bolna kuch nhi dilauga..turn face on other side. .

Ak-baby papa ko gussa kiya ...kisses on his cheeks ..dekho papa ko bhi huggi karo ..tino

Than akshi put to duggu on natiks stomach. .she slept ..natiks felt his baby touch..nd took to duggu in his arms..naksh playing with duggu nd he slept in palna..

Na-resting his head on her chest..nd gave tight hug..

Ak-I love u ..came near to his face gave sweet kiss on his leaps..tumne meri jindagi bhut beautiful bana di ..

Na-hamne milke apni life beautiful bana li..I love u too..hum esse hi sath rahege..both slept in each other arms. .

THE END:)

So guys after a long time nd long parts my ff completed ..hope ye ending sab ko pasand aaye ...thanku for reading my ff ..my best frds who gave me comment nd incourging me nd also thanku who press like button always ..nd my viewers ..bhut bhut thanku...

When u like this ending part pls pls press like button nd gave comments plsss...:) thanku

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Edited by ruchinaksh - 10 years ago