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Posted: 10 years ago
Natik sat on car..but his phone ringing. .
Na-hloo ..kya ..sach ..Mai abhi aata hu..
He went In hospital. ..
Akshi is crying continues. ...
Gy-late jao beta pls muna aata hoga ..she try to akshi on lying on bed..she is lying..natikk ..tears come in her eyes..
After sometime natik reached nd run:-
Went in room ...
No one is here ..he saw to akshi ..nd enter in d room..
Na-saw akshi in sleep .. feared ...but gy3 said she is fine now...but he thought he is waiting for her...nd slowly took back step..
Ak-natikkk in low voice
He turn nd his eyes filled with tears completely ..mixed emotions came in his face..sadness ..smile ...akshiii ...
Ak-deep breath ..natik...
Na-came near sat on table ..hold her hand ...haa
Tears came from her eyes ..but natik came close nd wipe her tears...bas ..bahut hogaya..
Ak-sry ..made puppy face..
Na-kis liye ..h...
Ak-janti hu bhut tang kara na tumhe..again cry ..sry natik.. in cry voice mai kya karu tumsi judi chiz se alg nhi hona chahti hu...sry natik I m really sry. ..
Natik gave hug to her ..his face touches to her ..both cry so much ..she is lying ..
Na-to kya meri khatir jan dedogi..mere bare mai sochogi bhi nahi tum ..haa ..tum bolti to sara din gale se rakhta ..mangalsutra ban k ..par ye bardast nahi kar sakta . .
Ak-haa ..sry ..mujhe nahi pata th ki ye sab...cry ..bhut rulaya na..har pal tute na..ek side duri ..ek side pass rehna
Na-bas ..nahi aur nahi...pls ..chup ho jao ..ab to tum thik ho na..
Ak-rone to do ..
Both cry after sometimes
Na-stop cry ..sat again ...mai mar jata tumhare bina
Ak-mai nhi jati ..kahi bhi nahi jati mai...kis mandir mai gye the
Na-shocked ..kya ..tumhe kaise pata
Ak-hath to dekho ..pair ...mai bhut buri hu na..cry ..maine kitna tang kiya na
Na-nhi ..bas tumse dur jana barsat nhi kar pa rahi tha ...I love u ..sooo much..
Ak-I love u too..mere pass aao ..pls
Natik came close ...
Ak-aur pass ...
He came more closer to her ..she gave kiss on his cheeks ...u r my heart ...he gave kiss on her cheeks..u r my life ...
He wipe his tears with d help of his tumb..

Both saw in each other eyes ..
More parts coming soon
Edited by ruchinaksh - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
After sometime akshi felt some pain in her stomach
Ak-aa
Na-kya hua akshi..thik ho na ..
Ak-haa ..wo bas ..stomach pain ho raha hai thoda
Na-manly to wahi lagi thi na to sayad ..ruko pani ..nhi ..ro mat isi liye ..ab sara din rest ..no rona ..bas ..
Ak-par sara din nahi pls na ..
Na-bola na rest to rest ..
Suddenly doctor gy3 ..rajbanna came ..
Doctor -mrs ..natik singhaniya ..kaisi hai ..aap ..its mirical..aap yha hai ..ap bhut lucky hai aspko in jaisa husband mila hai..itni duwao mai hi asar tha to aap bach gai ..
Gy-to hum isse jayada lucky hai ..jo iske jaisi bahu mili hai ..munna ki ek chiz k ke liye apni jan dav par laga di...ye meri bachi ...naksh saw to each other ...akshi felt hpy natik also..
Ak-maa
Gave hug ...
Gy-bas ab aur nahi ...tu meri beti hai ..koi aanch nahi aane dungi ab..jaldi se ghar aa jana ab...meri beti ..
Ak-maa ...cry ..
Na-bas kitni ..rotu biwi h meri ..din bhar rona bas..
Ak-maa dekhiye na
Gy-meri bahu ko kuch bola na munna..teri ghar meri bahu k room mai entry band ..
All r laughing madly ..
Raj-gy3 ji aap bhi na...dekh ke ..munna ..ab to tumhari maa ki pafty mai ek member bad gya..kahi hum dono ko hi bar bar bahar na nikal de ..
Akshi laugh 😆
Gy-jarurat padi to ye bhi kar denge ..kyo bahu
Ak-smile maa
Na-kya maa..bahu mil gai to beta gya ha..
Gy-haa ..
Na-maa ..
Gy-mere liye dono barabar ho ..natik came nd gave hug to gy3. .naksh saw to each nd gave smile...natik hold akshis hand...
After sometime naurse came with soup...
Natik took nd ...
Na-mai pilauga
He try to sit to akshi ..
Ak-aaa
Na-pain ho raha hai
Ak-nooded haa...:)
Na-took pillow ..put on her back ..nd sat to her ...
Took soup..took one spoon bowling ..akshi saw his innocent face..her love..lo dekh ke ..aram se
Ak-saw to natik ..cant listen. ..
Na-akshi ..lelo..
Ak-hmm
Na-soup...
Ak-haa..she took ..both saw to each..I love u akshi said
Na-I dont love u ..in teasly voice
Ak-haa..why..
Na-bas mera man ..pyar kyo ya nahi
Ak-aacha ...but still I love u sooo much..tqqq ..meri life mai aane k liye
Na-smile ...I love u too..took soup..bas late jao jayada der mat baitho..doctors ne bola hai stomach ka dhayan rakhna lete rehna ..oki..
Ak-aacha ...meri..stop
Na-kya ..
Ak-kissi make puppy face ..
Na-gave kiss in her cheeks ..
Ak-bas ..I want more
Na-kaha
Ak-jante ho na
Na-no nhi
Ak-jao mujhe nahi chahiye ..oki...mujhe leta do
Na-he came close ...nd gave soft kiss on her lips..she became hpy..he laying to akshi in bed..
Ak-mere pyare husband...than knock knock...
Gy3 -mai aa jau ander
Ak-ji ma
She came in room
Gy-kaisi ho
Ak-aachi hu
Gy-munna ja aur change kar le beta ..dekh kun hi kun..
Na-no ..akshi ko leke hi ?????
So guys press like button if u like this part nd gave comments I m waiting for ur sweet comments my frds...sry for mistakes
Precap-akshi ka greh prawesh in natiks real house ..but how...
Edited by ruchinaksh - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice part...
naitik ki belief and pain :(
But finally akshi is fine
and jiskelye akshi bachpan se w8 kar rahi thi finally she got it yaar...pyaar...
so lovely cute part
waiting for more...
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing part ruchu...
whether its madir wala part...
or naksh hospital scene...very nice...with full of emotions and love...
good now akshara is ok...and gayatri too became happy...everything is nice...
now waiting for akshara's greh pravesh...and hope to see naksh smp again...
ohhh ! i am so greedy naa...sorry for that...
ammm ur stars...
****1/2 out of 5
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: --pranu--

Nice part...

naitik ki belief and pain :(
But finally akshi is fine
and jiskelye akshi bachpan se w8 kar rahi thi finally she got it yaar...pyaar...
so lovely cute part
waiting for more...

Thanku thanku thanku so much my princess for liking this part nd gave comments ..I liked vry much😛yup now akshi got so much love nd care...yup I will do update next part soon princess. .😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: hirannaksh

amazing part ruchu...
whether its madir wala part...
or naksh hospital scene...very nice...with full of emotions and love...
good now akshara is ok...and gayatri too became happy...everything is nice...
now waiting for akshara's greh pravesh...and hope to see naksh smp again...
ohhh ! i am so greedy naa...sorry for that...
ammm ur stars...
****1/2 out of 5

Aww thanku thanku thanku so much sona for liking this part yr..I gave comments ...dont be sry tum log jo chaho bol sakte ho yr sab kuch milega but wait nd read 😃 thanku for stars
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Posted: 10 years ago
again again such a nicee part dear well done...plz cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sameera_naksh

again again such a nicee part dear well done...plz cont soon

thAnku so much sameera for liking this part nd gave comments ..yup I will do update soon. .
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Posted: 10 years ago
this part is with full of emotions.. every scene is nice.. mandir scene was so touchy.. then akshi ka thik hona magical.. and after that family bonding was superb.. waiting for akshi grihpravesh
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Pragati-naksh

this part is with full of emotions.. every scene is nice.. mandir scene was so touchy.. then akshi ka thik hona magical.. and after that family bonding was superb.. waiting for akshi grihpravesh

Thanku so much for liking this part nd gave comments misri dear..😳I was waiting for ur comments ...yup I will do update soon dear😛

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