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Posted: 10 years ago
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FRIENDS PLS FORGOT ABOUT THE PRECAP..

IF U ACTUALLY READ IT...

PART 38...

Its really a horrible night for any girl so as akshara...in morning naitik still in his sleep...so akshara found some courage and decided to move on in her life...without in knowledge in anybody...she wrote a letter in naitik's laptop and quickly ran from there...
and when naitik got up and found akshara nowhere...
nk to himself..why akshara ? why..? kyu kiya tumne aisa wo bhi phir se...pehle jhoot aur ab bhaag gayi..he smiles on him...and quickly pack his bags to go mumbai...
after some time..he came in his house again...
and got shocked to see the person in his home..
nk-bua ji...aap..?
bj-ha munaa mai...itne dini se tumse naa mili isliye socha ki kuch dino ke liye apne bete aur bahu ke paas reh lu..
nk-kyu nahi bua ji...
bj-par bahu kaha hai..mujhe usse milna hai...
nk-bua ji wo akshara mere saath nahi aayi..
bj-nahi aayi matlab..?
nk-matlab ki wo ab mujhe chod chuki hai..
bj-tu pagal ho gaya hai ke munna..ye kaisi baat kar raha hai..
nk-bua ji ye sach hai..aur mai ab iss baare me koi baat nahi karna chahta...akshara meri life se ja chuki hai..ab mere dil me uske liye koi jagah nahi hai hai..agar aapko apni bahu se milna hai toh aap uski photo aakhir baar dekh sakti hai..
and he angrily went from there..
bj-mara munaa aisa toh na hai..zaroor koi badi baat hai..par kya..?
AFTER FIVE MONTHS...
akshara's pain was increasing day by day and it was becoming intolerable for her..she did not know what to do she consulted the doctor again..the doctor advised her to go for a specialist..akshara did not know what to do as she did not have that much money..she started to take double dose for the pain and continued doing her work for mr.and mrs. surana..it had been noe 5 months for akshara living alone in jaipur and it was her five months of pregnency..it was a similar day for akshara and after she finished her work she went to her room..she was all lost in her thoughts when she felt a pain in her tummy..she tried to get up to take the tablet but the pain only increased making her more vulnerable..she could not move from her palce and at one moment she felt as if she would lose her balance and literally she fell down and screamed for help..mr. and mrs. surana came running listening to her scream and saw that she was lying on the floor holding her stomach and yelling in pain..they did not know what to do and took her to the nearby hospital...
the doctors immediately admitted her seeing her condition..the doctors did know the exact condition about her except that she was pregnent..they asked the surana's about they could not provide any other information except that she is five months pregnent..the doctors gave her a seductive for pain relief and she litterery went into a deep sleep..ut before that they did the required test as fast as possible..the doctors were hell shocked by learning about her condition and did not know what to do..
they learnt that she had a dangerous uterus infection and due to lack of treatment it had only worsened which had directly affected the baby..they knew the seriousness about her condition and could not take any risk further they informed the surana's abotu it..it was a shocking news for the surana's and did not know what to do..the doctors also told them that its a neccessary to take an urgent decision before its too late..
the same night akshara was in her worst condition..she could not tolerete the pain...the doctors further did some test and found that the baby had stopped reacting and its heartbeats were stooped..it was worst of all and they had to do an operation urgently..they did not know what to do but had to terminater the pregnency to avoid the further complications...
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after a search of about four months..nikhil had got some news about akshara..the decetive was just informed by his sources that a girl name akshara was heard about in jaipur working for an old couple named mr. surana..he also said that there was no family background about the girl and she hardly went out so he was not sure about it as she may be akshara naitik singhania or may be not..through nikhil had some news but he was not delighted as even earlier they were informed about such things and later left dejeccted..he felt bad for bua ji because she is the one who supports him to find out her bahu..so whenever they would get such news they would be happy but later would just cry out her heart for akshara..
so this time nikhil thought not telling his bua ji anything as she was even not keeping well..so he himself visiting jaipur though he knew that it would not yield any results..but still for himself and for bua ji and for akshara he had to visit...
he had taken the details about the surana's and he cought the next available flight to jaipur..as per the details nikhil reached the surana's address only find it locked..he was once again left with no result but still god was with him..he enquired about them with their neighbours and found out that they were at hospital as the maid was hospitalaized..nikhil showed them akshara's photo and than he felt his earth slipping away from his feet..when they confirmed that the maid is akshara..he quickly ran towards the hospital and enquired about the patient named akshara and later about surana..
nikhil met up with surana's with a heavey heart and heard them say..
mrs surana- pata nahi kya naseeb leke aayi hai...yeh yaha apni maut se lad rahi hai..aur na jane iska parivaar kaha hoga..
mr surana- pata nahi kaise bardast kar payegi apne bacche ka sach jaankar..bhagwaan kare uska baccha theek ho..
nikhil was numb by listening to their convo... he did not have guts to go inform of them and decided to wait as right not he would not be able to handle the stuation and called bua ji..he just told her that he had found akshara in jaipur..and she is not ready to come back..he asked her that he had already arranged a private jet for his urgent work but bua ji could sense something in his tone..but she became happy to know about her bahu..
akshara's operation was taking a lot of time as there were many complications and the hospital did not have so many facilities but they could not wait for so longer..as akshara's life was already in danger and it was much needed to terminate the pregnency though they had already found out that the baby was no more alive..the infection had resulted in the death of the baby..it was almost five hours now and there was no sign of any more news from doctor and nor bua ji had reached..
it was yet another one hour when finally the doctors were out of the operetion theatre just informing that the pregnency was terminated but akshara was very critcal..he also responding to the treatmant and medecines as if she knew that her soul was not with her anymore..
bua ji who had just reached there wondreing why nikhil called her back when she reached..she heard what doctor told just felt that the whole world crashed under her..nikhil heard her calling out to akshara and ran to suppot her..he made her relax as this time she should be strong for akshara..and they came near the doctor and said..
nik-doctor kya chances hai..?
doc-kehne ke liye bahut kam hai..now it has recahed its ladt level and theworst part is that she was carrying the baby..the infection had already spread to her womb and as a result the baby was dead..but the most important is that she is not responding to any treatment..
nik-aap kisi specialist ko kyu nahi bulate..don't worry about fees..
doc-look mr. its not about the money..par koi faida nahi hai...
nik-kaisa hospital hai jaha ye sab kuch nahi
doc-relax mr. i would suggest u to take her to some a better hospital as if u delayu it any further than m sory she may even go into the coma..
nik- i am rady..mai apni sister ko delhi lekar jaunga..
nik and bua ji came to introduce themselves to suaran
bua ji- mai akshara ki bua saas hu...aur ye hamare jamai aur akshara ke bhai..hum aapka ehsaan kaise chukayenge..?
mrs. surana..uski koi zaroorat nahi hai..aap akshara ke gharwale hai aur hum se zyada acche se uska khayal rakh sakte haiu hame aur kuch nahi chahiye,..par aapko kabhi iski chinta nhi hui ki akshara zinda hai ya marr gayi..
bua ji's heart pierced as someone stabbed her but she knew that whtever the lady was saying the true..they were responsible for all this..
bj- hum jaante hai..par majboor the..
mrs surana- apni galti ko majboori ka naam mat dijiye..aap nahi jante ki jab akshara hamare yaha aayi thi toh kitni kamzoor thi..usne apne gharwaalo ke baare me kabhi nahi bataya..bas har waqt roti rehti thi..
mr. surana-bas karo tum inn sab se kya keh rahi ho..ye sab patthar dil hai
nik-ab hum se jo gaya wo hum nahi badal sakte..par ab hum apni behen ko delhi le ja rahe hai..
mr. surana..theek hai..waise bhi hum hote kaun hai aapko rokne wale..sirf dua karte hai iss phool si bacchi se kabhi koi dukh na ho..
nikhil had done all the formalities and had spoken to the doctors at delhi specially informing them not to tell anything to naybody except them..they thanked surana's for what they have done for akshara..they soon reached delhi where akshara shifted to one of the best hospital where akshara's doctor along with few known specialist were guidence and the traetment started..the doctors were helpless as akshara's condition had only worsen and she was not even responding..akshara's doctor had this fear and now she too was helpless and did not know what to do..she was already operated for terminating the fetus and her infection had spread to almost everywhere..
the doctors had a brief discussuion and started giving her acute and next level treatment..nikhil and bua ji waited and waited but its seems like their wait was not over..after what looke like many hours the doctors came out with not a very happy face..
nik and bua ji asked them..
nik-doctor akshara kaisi hai..
doc-mr. nikhil..humne pehle hi kaha tha inki halat bahut hi critical hai..her infection has spread and her body was also not responding..though now her condition is under control but will say that its not safe..i can't say anything right now we have to wait for to get consious than only i can say what be done..
nik-but doc will she be fine..
doc-pls leave it to god..
bua ji was more scared with doctors words..whats wrong with her..she sat there and start crying..nikhil asked her to go home but she did not..two days passed and still akshara was unconcious..the doctors started to giving her the treatment for curing her infection..through her body responded for medicines but her heart would be restless as her blood pressure would always fluctuate..
finally doctors gave verdict saying that through her infection was under control her condition was not still good as she was not coming to her senses..they also told that it looked like that she did not wanted to fight for her life and they have to wait till she openes her eyes..they were told that though she was not in coma but still u can say as she will open her eyes when she is ready to fight..till than she will be supported by life supporting syastems..
nikhil and bua ji were shocked to hear all that and bua ji's anger was out of her control..she wanted to punish all those who are responsible for this..
she came back to mumbai..before naitik can come from his bussiness trip..
Edited by rainanaksh - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: rainanaksh

ok kyaa isi wajah se kal ke update ka comment nahi kiya ?
:(

nope
btw when u update
dont b sad yaar
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Posted: 10 years ago
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maine shaam ko hi upadate kar diya tha
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: rainanaksh

maine shaam ko hi upadate kar diya tha

i know
mai keh rahi ho ki tum is thread ka 1st part kab update karoogi

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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART 39..
bua ji came back to mumbai before naitik..
at house..the phone bell rings..
bj-hello !
( its mohit )
mo-ji bua ji naitik aa gaya kya ?
bj-abhi nahi beta par kyu ?
mo-bua ji wo naitik ko ek zaroori baat batani thi
bj-kaun si?
mo-yahi ki uss din ki wo saari pics samar ne bheji thi..jo ki bilkul galat thi..
bj- thank u beta itni badi baat ka pata lagane ke liye..
she cut the phone.. now she was eagely wating for naitik to come..
at night naitik came from his trip and sat on the sofa..when bua ji comes..and quickly says..munna tu dosri shadi kar le beta..
he got shocked by this sudden statement of bua ji.
nk-bua ji aap ye kya keh rahi hai ?
bj-ha beta ab to tu azaad hai
nk-par kyu ?
bj-kyunki akshara ab iss duniya me nahi rahi..mar chuki hai wo.
nk-nahi bua ji aisa nahi ho sakta..aap ye..
bj-ha bete aisa hi hua..aur sabse badi khushi ki baat ye hai ki uss ladke ka bhi pata chal gaya jisne tujhe aur bahu ke beech ye galatfehmi paida ki..
nk-kaun ?
bj-samar..
naitik got shocked to hear this name..
bj-usi ki wajah se bahu tujhe hamesha ke liye chodkar chali gayi..aur aaj apni zindagi se bhi..
nk-nahi bua ji ye galat hai..
he quickly ran from there.
naitik reached in his room in a los state of mind. but as soon as he kept his foot inside the room he culd only see akshara crying and begging to him. he could hear her screams for not causing her pain. he saw his own shadow ripping her clothes every night and doing the biggest sins of his life. he could see himself hurting her and making her to cry in pain. he could see everything in front of his eyes
nk-chod do use chod do. chod do wo begunaah hai usne kuch nahi kiya
he ran towards the shadow to stop them
nk-maine kaha na akshara ne kuch nahi kiya
ak(shadow)- naitik pls nk..nk se keh dijiye na ki mujhe chod de.aap mere nk hai na par ye mere
nk nahi hai..mere nk mujpar yakeen karte hai..apni akshara ko bacha lijiye nk
nk- mai tumhe bacha loonga akshara.tumhe kuch nahi hoga
nk(shadow)- tum bachaoge use.par tumhi ne toh ise barbaad kiya hai na. tumhi ne tooh uss
raat iski zindagi se khela tha. apne gusse ka shikaar banaya tha.aur aaj mujhe rok rahe ho tum
nk- nahi nahi maanta hu ki meri galti thi par ab mai jaan chula hu.pls ab aksara ko chod do
nk(shadow)-kyu chod du. tumne toh use maar dala hai ab meri baari. tumhare har gunaah ki saza akshara ko milegi
nk-nahi pls
ak(shadow)-nk ye aapne kya kiya. kyu kiya ? nk.aapke gusse ne mujhe aapse door kar diya
nk saw his own shadow taking akshara away from him and he could not do anythig he tried to stopping them but they were gone.
nk-akshara
nk just stood there seeing his life going away from him and his shadow was right he as the one responsible for it. he looked at every corner of his room and he could see akshara crying ad later laughing at him. at one moment he could see her fearful face and the very next moment she was laughing at him. he as so frustated at himself that he broke everything in his room. he injoured himself so badly and broke down completely
nk-bua ji..
bj-tum yaha kyu aaye ho munna..jao beta apni nayi zindagi khushi khushi bitaao..jao
nk-mai janta hu ki aap mujhse naraaz hai..aur ye bhi janta hu ki aapka gussa jayaz hai..par bua ji mujhe sazaa chahiye..
bj-sazza dene wale mai kaun hoti hu..jise saza dene ka haq hai use toh tumne maar dala munna..ab saza ki kya zaroorat hai..
nk-nahi bua ji mere gunaah maafi ke layak nahi hai..mujhe mere har gunaah ki saza milni chahiye..har uss gunnah ki jo maine ki hai..har uss dard ki jo maine akhsra ko diya hai..
bj-chodiye ye sab munna..inn sab ab koi faida nahi..
nk-nahi bua ji..,mujhe sirf aap saza de sakti hain..
bua ji- chale jao munna..mujhe akela chod do..
nk-bua ji maine aapki bahu ka r*** kiya tha..
just hearing this word bua ji froze on her spot just to register his words and as the realization stuck to her she found herself slapping naitik..
bua ji-ye tum kaise kar sakte ho munna..tum ye sab..chii mujhe kehte hue bhi sharam aa rahi hai..and naitik received one more slap from her..
nk-ha bua ji..maine ye gunaah kiya hain..ye gunna jo mai sapne me bhi nahi soch sakta par phir bhi ye maine kiya..akshara ke saath zabardasti karke use iss tarah tod diya ki wo phir kabhi nahi jud payi..akshara ki life iss tarah barbaad kar di ab usse maafi bhi nahi maang paya..pls bua ji..aap mujhe saza dijiye..
bua ji placed one more slap on his face and cought his collar and said..saza kaun si saza munna..tumhare gunnah saza ke layak nahi hai beta..tumne bahu ka..chee..kyu munna kyu kiya tumne aisa..kya galti thi uss bacchiu ki...kya tumse pyaar karne ka yahi sila mila use..nk-mai janta hu bua ji..janta hu ki meri galti maafi ke layak nahi hai..par phir bhi mai maafi maang raha hu..mujhe saza de digiye..
bj-sazza ..kya saza du mai tumhe..kya saza dene se tumhare gunaah maaf ho jayenge..kya sazaa dene se akshara aa jayegi..phir bhi agar sazza chahiye toh suno..tumhari sazza ye hai ki tum isi tarah apne hi badale ki aag me jalte raho..tumhare har rishte tumhare saath rehkar bhi tumse door rahe..tumahra har gunaah tumhe iss tarah tumhe majboor kar de ki tum apni zindagi kahatm karne ki sochte raho...ek aisi zindagi jaha tumhare paas sab kuch ho par kuch bhi naa ho..
nk-theek kaha bua ji..mujhe sazza dene se toh mere gunaah kam nahi honge..isliye shayad bhagwaan ne mujhe akshara se maafi maangne ka ek mauka bhi nahi diya..mai bhi yahi chahta hu ki ab mujhe aisi zindagi mile ki mai apne maut maango aur wo bhi mujhe na mile..
naitik came to his room back..just in few hours his whole life turned..now his life was full of remorse and repentamce..a life where he could not die as that will be the easiest punishment to his sins..but his sins were not small that he could die to easily..he had to live a life where he would repent for his deed each and every second of his life..he started searching for aksharas photo in his laptop but his luck he did not find one as he remembered that in his rage he had deleted all teh remembrance of akshara...still he searched and searched tyhinking he may get one..but he found a written letter in one of his secret hidden file..the place where no one would search except him..by looking at it he knew that it as akshara's letter...he quickly open that..when he felt his beats leaving his heart..he opened the letter and read..
dear naitik..
mai nahi jaanti naitik ki ye letter aapko kabhi dikhega ya nahi..par shayad jab milega to mai aapse kaafi door ja chuki hongi..itna dur ki mai khud chahu toh bhi aapke paas wapas nahi aa paungi..par iska matlab aap ye mat samajhna ki mai galat hu..mai aaj bhi yahi kahoonhi ki mai wo nahi thi..aapki akshara sirk aapki hai..wo sirf aapse hi pyaar karti thi..hai..aur hamesha karti rahgi..nahi jaanti ki kabhi aapko ye sacchai pata chalegi ya phir nahi..par ha mai itna janti hu ki gar aapko sach pata chale toh aap roiyega bilkul mat..mai aapki aankho me aansu nahi dekh sakti..mujhe apni fikar nahi hai naitik par iss baat ka darr hai aapko kabhi kuch na ho..
naitik phir bhi aap meri ek baat maan lijiyega..ki mai hamesha aapke saath hu..
mai kabhi aapki zindagi me wapas nahi aaungi naitik..janti hu mai aapke bina nahi reh sakti..
par paas rehkar ek doosre ko dard dene se accha hai..ki hum hamesha ke lioye door ho jaye..aur ha mera aapse door jane ka faisla sirf mera hai..apne aapko kabhi iss baat ke liye dosh mat dijiyega..
aapki akshara...
shayad nahi...sirf akshara...
SO FRINEDS THIS IS FOR TODAY..
HOPE U ALL LIKE IT..
SO DO LIKE AND DO COMMENT..
PRECAP...NAITIK AND AKSHARA CAME FACE TO FACE AFTER EIGHT MONTHS...
Edited by rainanaksh - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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part upated on page 2
precap coming soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awww such an emotional part 😭 I couldn't stop crying reading it! !! so touching! !!My God!!!
everything was so simply perfect!!! Bua ji's care... nikhil's love...suranas' care... and moreover description of akshi's critical situation! !! all wa so heart melting!!! I hope naitik soon realises his mistake and learn a good lesson! !!
well the punishment he got by losing his baby is much... when he comes to know about it!!!
and yeah!!! he comes to know about the truth too and great and super emotional naksh patchup!!!!
let it be as natural as it is raina di
waiting
moreover I loved bua ji's character here
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Posted: 10 years ago
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congratsss raina for ur new thread... 😊
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Originally posted by: hinusha

congratsss raina for ur new thread...😊

thank u ji
new part padha ya nahi ?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: avinaksh

awww such an emotional part 😭 I couldn't stop crying reading it! !! so touching! !!My God!!!
everything was so simply perfect!!! Bua ji's care... nikhil's love...suranas' care... and moreover description of akshi's critical situation! !! all wa so heart melting!!! I hope naitik soon realises his mistake and learn a good lesson! !!
well the punishment he got by losing his baby is much... when he comes to know about it!!!
and yeah!!! he comes to know about the truth too and great and super emotional naksh patchup!!!!
let it be as natural as it is raina di
waiting
moreover I loved bua ji's character here

thank u soo much avi baby for liking it

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