ff..Tera Junooon #Thread 3# DT'sNotePg65 - Page 47

Another proof n justification for u the so called friend of the writer. It almost passed 6 months My ff love and hate has been ended n the parts she had copied its years old on geet forum so ask u friend to prove her innocence wic she cant coz she is caught stealing my work n dont dare ask me to waiit for justification or proof coz I have all proof to prove ur dear friend guilty for stealing my hard work. U ppl disgust me to an extend coz u ppl steal maaneet works by our beautiful writers n they r forced to stop writing. Ask u friend to come out n stop saying its her sisters work who does nt even exist... disgting ppl who dont understand the meaning of guilt n hardwork

Jo support kar rahi hai iss copy karnewali ladki ko.. to sun... Tum kis justification ki baat kar rahi ho... jab Real writer yaha aayi tab... isse pata chalta hai hum har jagah jate hai we respect all other stars for thier work...but still we R loyal.. Maaneetians..
Agar hame yaha pata nhi chalt k story copy hui hai. tab hum yaha aate hi nahi...
Aur woh copy cat tumhe ullu banati rahti... aur kya pata abhi bhi bana le to hum kyu tumhara bharosa kare ki tum phir bewkoof ban jao aur Hamein hi galat samjho... tumhari so called writer Geet forum me gYi waha ki story padhi aur copy karke tu sabko yakeen dilaya ki usne khud likha hai...


And ha Maaneetian banao is forum me Thead aur sab Maaneetians ko link bhejna... aur Heading bhi MAANEET hi hoga Geet forum ke hisab se Na ki iss forum ke...

raina di ye apne kya kia!!!! 😭 u r such a brilliant writer! !! fir apko kya zarurat pad gyi!!!! 😔 u could have created a brilliant story of ur own may be even better (though this is fantastic) n I trust this ability of urs... infact all of us do... nd people who are bashing her! !! I know you are angry and its genuine! !! but plz don't judge her ability !!! its not the only work... she has written many other one shots and fan fictions... and she is a good writer!!!! people!!!! ur anger is correct at ur place!! but she has apologized na... plz let it be. ... raina di... plz delete all their parts... and we trust you can make a unique and different story of ur own!!! galti sabse hoti h... but ab ap use sudharo... please parts delete kar do... and make a story of ur own. ... we know you can do it and we are with you! !! plz don't be disheartened and face this. ... come on! ! buck up!!!! and take this. .. not as insult... but a lesson! !! create ur new story and prove what you are! !!!!!

Originally posted by: avinaksh

raina di ye apne kya kia!!!! 😭 u r such a brilliant writer! !! fir apko kya zarurat pad gyi!!!! 😔 u could have created a brilliant story of ur own may be even better (though this is fantastic) n I trust this ability of urs... infact all of us do... nd people who are bashing her! !! I know you are angry and its genuine! !! but plz don't judge her ability !!! its not the only work... she has written many other one shots and fan fictions... and she is a good writer!!!! people!!!! ur anger is correct at ur place!! but she has apologized na... plz let it be. ... raina di... plz delete all their parts... and we trust you can make a unique and different story of ur own!!! galti sabse hoti h... but ab ap use sudharo... please parts delete kar do... and make a story of ur own. ... we know you can do it and we are with you! !! plz don't be disheartened and face this. ... come on! ! buck up!!!! and take this. .. not as insult... but a lesson! !! create ur new story and prove what you are! !!!!!

Originally posted by: avinaksh

raina di ye apne kya kia!!!! 😭 u r such a brilliant writer! !! fir apko kya zarurat pad gyi!!!! 😔 u could have created a brilliant story of ur own may be even better (though this is fantastic) n I trust this ability of urs... infact all of us do...nd people who are bashing her! !! I know you are angry and its genuine! !! but plz don't judge her ability !!! its not the only work... she has written many other one shots and fan fictions... and she is a good writer!!!! people!!!! ur anger is correct at ur place!! but she has apologized na... plz let it be. ... raina di... plz delete all their parts... and we trust you can make a unique and different story of ur own!!! galti sabse hoti h... but ab ap use sudharo... please parts delete kar do... and make a story of ur own. ... we know you can do it and we are with you! !!plz don't be disheartened and face this. ... come on! ! buck up!!!! and take this. .. not as insult... but a lesson! !! create ur new story and prove what you are! !!!!!

Sorry bt u calling her a good writer seriously u need to see she just did nt copy a part bt almost 5 updates n m sure there ll be more so Dont insult wtiters by calling her a good writer coz no good writer l copy n I m also a reader with writer n I can guess who r good n who copies. I appreciate u cane forward n asked her to remove btdont ever call this shameless liar girl a writer

This is a serious case of Plagiarizing and copying someone's work is not ethical and violate the rules of I-F. However, the copied content has been removed by the Dev. Team. the thread will be closed for 3 days on account of copied content. If you consider this wrong, please contact the DT Members.

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Readers ye story geet forum se copy ki gai he ..plz report agaist the writer. .this story belongs to shoba sdlife ..
she is a very good writer ...

Originally posted by: rainanaksh

PART 37...

akshara lost her patience and said..ha mai hi hu pictures me rituraj ke saath..aap yahi sunna chahte the naa...samjhe aap..aur hote kaun hai iss tarah mujhpar chaillane wale...naitik was hell angry on her words and once again he holds her hair making her flinch in pain..nk-main kaun hu..agar tum bhool chuki ho toh mai yaad dilata hu..mrs akshara maheshwari ki mai tumhara pati hu...jise tumne dhoka diya hai..tumne mere jasbaato ke saath khela hai akshara..aur tum keh rahi ho ki mai kaun hu...?akshara was looking at him with a teary eyes and naitik was all more holding her hair more tight giving her more physical pain...akshara couldnot believe that naitik would believe all this and he would actually harm her physically..nk-don't u look at me with those filthy eyes of yours..i will not melt again in them and i have already done once...so keep ur eyes down once..ak-janti hu ki mai aapke saamne khadi hu...uss insaan ke saamne jisne aaj tak mujse pyaar nahi kiya..aur aaj kuch pohotographs ki wajah se mera pati hone ka dawa kar raha hai..shayad meri hi galti hi thi ki aapke baare me sab kuch jaanne ke baad bhi uss din maine aapse shadi kar li..

nk-vishwaas ki baat tum mat karna akshara...tum kya jano ki mujhe tumpar kitna vishwaas tha..ab wo bhi toot gaya..pehle rituraj ..aur phir mai..tumne sabko dhoka diya hai..so tell me what else u did on my behind..? kahi samar..

ak-bas..bas kijiye naitik bahut hua..mai chup hu iska matlab yeh nahi ki aap jo kahe mai wo sun lungi..kya kiya hai maine..inn jhoote sabutoo se aap mujpar u ilzaam lagaye ja rahe hain..maani hu ki inn sab me mera face hai..par jab hum dost the toh aap meri baat bina kahe samjh lete the na..ab kya hua..? kya ek dost ke naate ab unhe nahi padh paa rahe..

nk-sach kya hai wo ye sab bata rahe hai...ek dost hone ke naate tum sacchi thi akshara par ab tumhari inhi aankho me ab jhoot nazar aata hai..mujhe sharam aati hai ki maine tum jaisi ladki se shadi ki..

aksharaa haf tears while listening to these harsh words from the man whom she loves more than herself..she could not believe that naitik would say such things to her she said...

agar itni hi nafrat thi toh mujhse shadi kyu ki naitik..aapne toh rituraj ko shadi se pehle dekh liya tha..aur samar ko bhi..phir bhi aap nahi samajhte..bataiye kyu ki mujhse shadi..

nk-hamari shadi ek majboori thi akshara..par ab ek nayi shuruaat hui hai..abhi toh tumhe bahut kuch dekhna baaki hai..apni har ek galti ki saza paogi tum akshara..bahut shauk hai tumhe apni life me naye insaan lane ka..ab dekhta hu tum ghar me rehkar kitne naye rishte banati ho..tumhara har ek pal maut se bhi badtarr bana dunga mai..apne aap par gussa karogi ki mahoos ghadi me mai tumhe mila..apne aap ko iss nark se mukt nahi kar paogi..

ak-toh der kiss baat ki hai naitik..itni nafrat karte ho toh maar kyu nahi daalte mujhe..ek baar me hi sara badla poora ho jayega..aur aapko jyada takleef bhi nahi hogi..

nk-itni asaani se nahi akshara..tumhare itni bade gunaah ki saza itni asaan nahi ho sakti..har pal tadpogi tum aur aur mai tumhe aisi saza dunga ki tumne sapne mein bhi nahi socha hoga..

ak-manzoor hai naitik..mai bhi dekhna pasand karoongi ki mera pyaar sachha hai ya aapki nafrat..mai hi janti hu ki mai aapse kitna pyaar karti hu..par shayd mere pyaar me hi koi kami reh gayi hai jo aap mujhpar vishwaas nahi kar paye..aur inn jhoote sabooto par kar liya..mujhe nafrat hai apne aap se ki maine aap jaise insaan se pyaar liya..

naitik could not take her words and pulled her close to himself by holding her hair and slammed his lips on his with full pressure..he bit her lips so harshly that she flinched in pain as the blood oozed out of her lips but naitik was nowhere to listen.. akshara tries pushing him away but naitik holds her hair more tight and grabs her by her waist..akshara was feeling suffocated and disgusted as she never thought that naitik would force her like this..after a long time naitik pushed her away smirking and thats when akshara slapped him hard on his face...

ak-how dare u..aapki himmat kaise hui mujhe chune ki..

and she rised her hand once again to hit him but naitik caught in and twisted it behind her..
ak-kyu isme kya problem hai akshara..aakhir pictures me bhi tum yahi kar rahi ho..toh problem kaisi...aakhir tumahra pati hu..aur mera toh poora poora haq banta hai...rituraj se bhi zyada.

he turned her round facing him and kissed her again with force but this tinme akshara was capable of pushing him away but this angered naitik more..and he make her fall on the ground..

nk-tumhari himmat kaise hui mujhpar haath uthane ki..tum shayad bhool gayi ho ki mai tumhara pati hu..

ak-aap maarne ke alawa kar bhi kya sakte hai naitik..

naitik was getting more and more irritated with her talks which was adding to his anger and rose the demon inside him...he pulled her on top making her stand on her feet and threw her saries pallu away..this made akshara aware of her blouse which has a deep cut infront giving a clear view of her clevage..she instantly put her hand covering her and tried to turn away when naitik pulled her and removed her hands..

nk-sharam aa rahi akshara...par tum kyu sharma rahi ho..ye pehli baar toh nahi kar rahi hogi..toh ab kyu chupa rahi ho..aree haa mai toh bhool gaya ki ye hamara pehli baar hai..right

ak-bas kijiye naitik..aap ab apni hadh paar kar rahe hain..

nk-meri hadh abhi tak dekhi kaha hai akshara..yeh toh bas shuruaat hai..

he went near her and pulled her more close holding her waist and pulled her into a rough kiss while his other hand untied her strings of blouse making it looose..akshara got alert and tried her best to push him all away and finally succeeded in it..she holds her blouse while with other hand she pushed him away far and grabbed her pallu wrapping around her body..

ak-stop it naitik you are loosing the little respect you have..you will regret this naitik..

he moved closer to her and this time akshara forced heself to save her dignity and slapped him on his face..nk's anger now rose to the highest peak making him go wild and he pulled her saree off her body and ripped her blouse into pieces making her stand in her bra on her upper body..naitik smirked looking at her and moved closer..naitik pushed her hands above her head and tore off the bra...he kissed her leaving his rough teeth marks while akshara struggling for getting out..

ak-naitik aap yeh galat kar rahe hain..chod dijiye pls naitik...please..

she pushed him and this time naitik was nowhere to listen to her and in one shot pulled her peticot down along with her panty..akshara was all bare in front of him and tried moving away from him..

ak-naitik pls dont do this naitik pls naitik..i beg u..i swear naitik maine kuch nahi kiya hai..

nk-why the hell are u getting scared...this is not the first time u are doing this naa..or is it that u think i will not satisfy ur body desires..even if its my first time don't worry akshara i will be the best for u among all your secret boyfriends..

naitik has removed all his clothes by now while akshara was holding the duvet to her moving behind..naitikn saw her and pullled down holding her legs removed the duvet..

nk-ye toh shuruaat hai akshara...u will pay for everything u have done

he pulled her and covered over her kissing and bitting all over her body..akshara wringled in pain and cried out but naitik was nowhere..

the devil inside naitik was all awake due to her betrayal and he wanted her to punish her..he left her upper body and setteled himself on her womanhood while akshara said..

ak-pls naitik don't do this..i will take ur all punsihment..but pls..i will go away from ur life..

naitik had already entered her with a hard stroke making her cry loud and naitik was all way thrusting her with his manhood giving her pain..she tried to move but he holds her tight with his legs and hands..

nk-don't u dare akshara..

ak-naitik mujhe bahut dard ho raha hai..pls

nk-dard ye pehli baar toh nahi ho raha hoga...balki tumhe toh aaj khush hona chahiye ki ur husband in having s** with u

naitik moved inside her hard and strong making akshara gasp in pain..all the while naitik moved inside akshara's tears were continuously flowing down her cheeks..she could not feel anything except the pain which naitik was giving her physically..naitik did not leave her and continued mong in her after sometime akshara left struggling as she knew that she lost everything she had with her..her love had made her impure by forcing himself on her rather say rape her..after a long time naitik finally left her and pushed her down on the floor..

nk-this is ur place akshara..u dont deserve to sleep next to me on this bed..

akshara slowly got up whimpping with pain which was both physical and mental..she could not stand on her feet due to the soreess and she moved slowwing for her dress when naitik said..

don't u dress up akshara..i have not finished yet..

ak-abhi bhi aap satisfy nahi hue naitik jo aapne mere saath liya..you have did the biggest sin of your life naitik..

nk-bas bahut ho gayi tumhari bakwaas..

the whole night he forced her on her making her almost hald dead..she lost all her ability to fight and cried silently for the fate..

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This is really quite sad. Why would you copy someone else's work?