NAKSH FF : Pyaar Ishq Aur Mohabbat pt 14 on pg. 70 - Page 32

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: anjali-naksh

sorry for late reply.. both parts are very cute.. you are such a good writer love this story

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Posted: 10 years ago
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hi my name is anjali
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hi anjali my name is pragati
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hi good morning
pls hamara popat mat banao😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ----varsha05---

hi good morning

pls hamara popat mat banao😆

are mai popat nahi bana rahi hu lekin haan mai naksh ka bold wala romance nahi likh sakti
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Pragati-naksh

are mai popat nahi bana rahi hu lekin haan mai naksh ka bold wala romance nahi likh sakti

awww
its ohk
but update to kar
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ----varsha05---


awww
its ohk
but update to kar

abhi Maine kal hi new part update kiya tha isliye ab mai kal likhungi
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Posted: 10 years ago
PART 11
They reach to their room
n. finally ab hum apne kamre me aa gaye
naitik saw akshara with a passionate look on this akshara is darofying what he wants to do but she sees that naitik goes to the cupboard so she become relax naitik came to the akshi and gives her a box
n. akshara ye mai na apke liye laya tha ye lijiye
a. mere liye par kyun
n. aise hi ab ap khol ke dekhiye na
a. haan kholti hu
akshara open the box
a. ye kya hai.. ye short dress par ap mere liye kyu leke aaye hai
n. kyuki mai ye chahta hu ki aj ap ise pahne
a. kya mai bilkul bhi nahi
n. par kyun

a. apko pata hai na naitik mai aise kapde nahi pahnati hu
n. nahi pahnati hai to kya hua aj pahan lijiye
a. nahi mai nahi pahan sakti
n. pahnani to padegi hi apko
a. aur agar mai na pahnu to
n. iska to sawal hi nahi uthta hai
shayad ap bhul rahi hai ki pure do din tak apko sirf meri baat manani hai.. to miss akshara madam ap jaldi se inhe change kar lijiye
a. par naitik mujhe bahut sharm aati hai
n. akshara sharm kis baat ki vaise bhi ap ise apne pati ke samne pahan rahi hai kisi aur ke samne nahi
akshara is somehow agree to wear it
a. mai change karke aati hu
n. rukiye agar change hi karna hai to vo to ap yahan bhi kar sakti hai
a. naitik ap na ajkal such me bahut bade besharm hote ja rahe hai.. ek to khud hi mujhe ise pahnane me itni sharm aa rahi hai uspar se apke samne kaise pahnugi
n. isliye to kah raha tha ki mai ise pahnane me apki madad kar dunga
a. nahi chahiye mujhe aisi madad.. mai aati hu
akshara goes..
Edited by Pragati-naksh - 10 years ago
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Here naitik in the room tries to create a romantic atmosphere there akshara came after wearing that dress.. naitik is stunned to see her and lost in her
akshara came near him
a. naitik kaisi lag rahi hu mai
n. no reply
a. naitik kahan kho gaye ap
he got senses
n. mai apki khubsurti me kho gaya tha
a. kaisi lag rahi hu mai is dress me
n. bahut bahut bahut sundar aisa lag raha hai jaise chand jami par utar aaya hai meri tn najare hi nahi hat rahi hai apse
a. naitik ap mujhe aise mat dekhiye mujhe bahut sharm aa rahi hai
n. ap meri biwi hai aur apko mujhe aise dekhne ka pura haq hai
a. phir bhi mujhe sharm aa rahi hai
n. akshara ap bhi na kamal hai dusri ladkiya na hamesha aise pal ke liye tarsati hai aur ap hai ki
a. dusri ladkiya kya chahti hai kya nahi mujhe isase kya mai to aisi hi hu
n. aur meri biwi jaisi hai vaisi hi bahut pyari hai
then naitik approaches akshara for dance.. akshara gives her hand they start their dance.. baho ke darmiya is playing in the background.. akshara feet on naithk feet and naitik hand on akshi waist they were so close and lost in each other
a. kitne dino baad hame aise dance karne ka mauka mila hai na
n. hmm
suddenly akshara phone rings.. she tries to but naitik nooded in no so she also agrees but she sees that its duggu calls so she goes and attend the phone
a. hello mera baby
d. hello mamma
a. kaise ho tum
d. mai bilkul thik hu mamma ap kaisi ho
a. mai bhi bilkul thik hu
d. mamma ap itni der se mera phone kyu nahi utha rahi thi
precap.. continuation of that night
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Edited by Pragati-naksh - 10 years ago

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