MY FIRST FF 'Bas pyarr ho gaya' updated 2nd part on pg-12 - Page 9

Originally posted by: varshanakshiran

haa yaar

AT THE CONCERT

Ak:- Varsha jaldi kar kahi hum late na ho jaye..

Vr:- ha chal..akshara vo dekh

Ak:- kya

Vr:- vo ladka jiski tune help ki thi..she pointed towards naitik..

Ak:- haan ye toh vahi hai..ab hum andar chale..

Naitik saw akshara and continuously look at her..

Mohit (calls naitik from back):- naitik,naitik

Nk:- haan

Mo:- aree vo singers abhi tak nhi aye yaar

Nk:- kya?

Mo:- ha vo traffic mein fas gaye hai

Nk:- toh ab kya kare

Mo:- ek kaam karte hai na

Nk:- kya

Mo:- jab tak singers nhi aate tab tak tu kuch sabko sambhal le..

Nk :- main...main kaise..

mo:- tu kuch bhi kar bas audience ko sambhal le..

nk:- acha mein kuch karta hu

naitik enters concert hall nervously and try to handle everything

nk:- ye mohit ne mujhe kaha fasa diya..ab mein kya karoon..

vr:- akshara vo dekh yeh toh vahi hai na..dal bati competition wala..

ak:- arre ha varsha yeh toh vahi hai..

suddenly naitik sees akshara and lost in her..he assumes her on the stage losted in her..and start singing song for her..

Tu hi ye mujhko bata de
Chahun main ya naa
Apne tu dil ka pata de
Chahun main ya naa

Itna bata doon tujhko
Chaahat pe apni mujhko
Yun to nahi ikhtiyaar
Phir bhi yeh socha dil ne
Ab jo laga hoon milne
Poochhu tujhe ek baar

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Tu hi ye mujhko bata de
Chahun main ya naa
Apne tu dil ka pata de
Chahun main ya naa

Mo:- thank god naitik tunne sab kuch sambhal liya..waise bhi singers aa gye hain..

Naitik is losted in akshara's dreams and smiling and doesn't listens what he is saying..

Mo:- naitik..naitik..tu sun raha hai..tujhe kya ho gaya hai..itna smile kyu kar raha hai..kuch btayega bhi

Naitik:- (shouted loudly) yes I am in love..i am in love..i am in love..

Mohit:- kya sach mein..vo hain kon..naam kya hai uska

Naitik:- naam toh pta nhi

mo :- rehti kahan hai ?

nk :- mujhe nhi pata

mo :- ye lo naam, address kuch pata nhi aur ye janab apna dil de bethe..

nk :- mujhe naam or address koi fark nhi parta..I love her soo much

mo:- acha theek hai mere bhai.. main tere liye bahut khush hu..par tu uske bare mein sab kaise pata lgayega

nk:- vo jahan bhi rehti hai mein use dhund hi lunga..mein aa raha hu miss. __ tumhe apni mrs. Bnane

mo:- wah mere sher isse kehte hai confidence

Next day in college

vr :- kal concert acha tha na

ak :- ha..lekin vo ladke ka ganna bhi acha tha

vr :- kon

ak:- arre vahi daal baati competition wala..

vr:- haan..vaise vo handsome toh bahut hai..gaana bhi acha gal leta hai

ak:- haan toh

vr:- tujhe nhi lagta uski or teri achi lagagi

ak:- maine aisa socha nhi kabhi

vr:- toh usme kya hai abhi soch le

naitik enters in college with mohit..

nk(to mohit) :- mohit vo dekh vohi hai

mo:- kahan hai

nk:- vo dekh

mo:- toh ja usse baat kar..

nk:- tu pagal hai kya..mein usse yeh ja ke kahuga..ki mein apse bahut pyaar karta hoon..

mo:- haan toh isme problem kya hai

nk:- tu pagal ho gaya hai..dekh vo ladki aa rahi hai uski class mein parti hai..mein usse puchta hoon

mo:- par vo hai kon

nk:- payal..usi ki class mein padhti hai

naitik(to payal):- hello payal..

payal:- yes

nk:- mujhe apse kuch puchna tha

payal:- kahiye

nk:- kya aap mujhe unka naam bta sakti hai..vo jo pink suit mein hai

payal:- akshara

nk:- thanks...akshara !! akshara!!

dekha mohit naam pata chal gaya

mo:- mein tere liye bahut khush hu..bas ab tu jaldi se usse apni dil ki baat bta de

nk:- mein bhi uss din ka intezaar kar raha hu..

Originally posted by: varshanakshiran

ye kya sona tujhe bhi raina ka bhoot chad gaya

prcap nahi bata ne ka😆

Originally posted by: rainanaksh

aree precap..isliye nahi likhte ki creatives next part me apni creativity ko koi naya mod de sake samjhi 🤣

Originally posted by: avinaksh

ofcourse I liked it a lot. ... nd yeah. .. waiting for the next part

Originally posted by: Pragati-naksh

nice story sonam pls continue soon your next part

Originally posted by: avinaksh

yes please update. .. we're waiting

Originally posted by: varshanakshiran

wow sona its so cute and sweet yaar

i enjoyed it

naitik to akshara ke pyaar mai pagal ho gaya

cho chweet of u naitik

akshara ke liye naitik ka song wooo

keep it up sona

now waiting 4 next part

pls jaldi update karna

thanks aaj update karne ke liye

precap : ?😆

Originally posted by: Princess.S786

Awesome update sonam
Continue soon