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raina verma

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Posted: 10 years ago

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PART 16
akshara is surprised to see nk in front of her after so long..her eyes filled with tears..she wanted to cry but could'nt
nk is also so much happy to see ak here..he wanted to say something but could'nt
one driector..hello madam pls sit down
ak-ji thanks
dir-so nk ji aap jo chahe sawal apni new model se pooch sakte hai
words are not coming from his mouth..
nk-nahi mai vo...mr.singh aap hi poochiye
singh - nahi sir aap yaha ke boss hain..to pls..hum koi disturbance nahi karenge..ok
nk-ji..and take a long breath..
ak is looking at her so as naitik..and all members are looking both of them
nk-hello ak ji
ak-hello sir
nk-aapko isse pehle kahi modeling karne ka experience hai ?
ak-ji nahi sir
nk-ok..to aap ye sab pehli baar karengi ?
ak-ji
nk-apke husband ko koi problem to nahi hai
ak-ji nahi sir
nk-good..and he smiles..to theek hai ak ji ap aaj se hi office join kar sakti hain
ak-ji aaj se thank u sir..
mr singh..bas ye hi hai aapka interview nk ji ?
nk-ha kyu koi problem hai ?
sin-aapne kuch important baate to kahi hi nhi
nk-matlab
sin-dekhiye ak ji aap jiss field me aayi hai waha lakho ladkia aati hai..par aap ko to iski abcd bhi nahi aati..to phir hum aapko apne ad me kaise rakhhe..?
nk-par sir
ak-ji sir mai sab kuch kar loongi..
nk cotinuously watching her
sin-late night shoot hua to ?
ak-ji vo bhi
singh -very nice madam..par aap sirf yaha ek model hai to aap mere hi office ko join kar lijiye..if u don't have any problem
ak is about to say no..but nk intruupts in between
nk-no mr.singh actually maine inke profile me padha hai ki inhe designning ka shauk hai..isliye mai inhe apne office me as a assistant designer bhi rakh raha hu
ak is shocked to hear this
singh-its ok mr.nk..maine socha..khair jane dijiye..ab hum chalte hai...bye..
and all members went from there..
now ak and nk are alone in cabin..
nk is about to say something to her but alas..
sneha come in..
sn-hey nk tumhare new collections aa gaye hai
nk-oh thanks !
sn-to kaisi lagi hamari new model tumhe?
nk-:))) bahut acchi
ak is forcefully smile on this..
sn-aur tumhe kaise lage hamare boss..ak
ak-acche hai
nk-sn ab ak hamari model hi nahi balki assistant designer bhi hai..
sn shocked..kya ?
nk-ha kyu kya hua ?
sn - nahi nk vo post to tum mujhe...
nk-oh i am really sorry mai bhool gaya
sn-to kya hua nk ab apni bhool theek kar lo
nk-bilkul nahi sneha akshara ki jagah unse koi nahi le sakta...yaha tak ki tum bhi nahi..
and he angrily went from there..
sneha become sad by nk's behaviour..
ak-are u ok ?
sn-yes ak..vaise bhi ab to aadat ho gayi hai nk ka gussa jhelne ki
ak- bahut pyaar karti ho
sn-hmm..par kya faida..usne kabhi mana hi nahi..itni baar kaha maine..
ak-koi baat nahi agar tumhara pyaar sacha hai to tumhe zaroor milega...
sn-ok ak mai chalti hu aur ha tumhare liye invitation hai..nk ne new staff ke liye apne ghar par ek get together rakha hai..pls time par aa jana ok
ak-hmm..
sn-ok bye
ak to herself..iska matlab nk ne shaadi nahi ki..par usne to mujhse..?
NK IN HIS CABIN
nk to himself...itne saalon ke baad aaj ak yaha.thank u god..par use iss job ki zaroorat kyu padi?
rr ne ak ko roka nahi ye sab karne ke liye..
suddenly he picks up his phone to call at home
nk-ha maine jo kaha hai usse zaroor hata dena.ok...sorry ak aaj pehli baar tum mere ghar aaogi aur mai nahi chahta ki tum usse dekho..
again he calls in ak's cabin..
ak-hello ?
nk-hey..ak mai nk
ak-nk..hmm...
nk-sneha ne tumhe party ke baare me bata hi diya hoga..
ak-hmm..
nk-to tum..
ak-kya sunna chahte hai aap..sir
nk-vo mai..ye ki tum
ak-ji sir mai zaroor aaungi..aur kyu nahi aapne saare staff ko invitation dia hai..to mujhe to aana hi hoga..
nk-hmm..ak
ak-ji sir kahiye aur kuch kaam tha ?
nk-nahi..bye
she cuts the phone..and starts crying...jiss sach se mai itna door bhag rahi thi ..kyu vo baaar baar mere peeche aa raha hai ? kyu?
naitik mujhse baat karna chahta hai..mujhse kuch poochna chahta hai...par mai usee kuch nahi bata sakti..apne baare me..aur hamari zindagi ke sabse bade sach ke baare me..
ak to herself..nahi mai nk ko ye kabhi nahi bata sakti ki...nahi bilkul nahi...itni mushkil se vo apni life me aage bahda hai..mai ye nahi kar sakti..
here nk is totally confused..
nk- to himself..kyu ak tum mujhse baat nahi kar rahi ? mai tumse baat karna chahta hu..rr ke baare me..ki vo kaisa hai.? kya kar raha hai ?
par tum kyu mujhse bhaag rahi ho ? why ?
PRECAP - in party akshara enters in naitik's bedroom..and gets socked !!

Edited by rainanaksh - 10 years ago

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hirannaksh

@hirannaksh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#82

nice part dear please do continue soon

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avisha

@avinaksh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#83

superbbb!!!! plz write more soon

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raina verma

@NAKSHMYJAAN

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Posted: 10 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: avinaksh
superbbb!!!! plz write more soon

thanks dear and i will do it soon

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raina verma

@NAKSHMYJAAN

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Posted: 10 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: Nakshiranridz
Nice part
Please update soon

thanks dear..i will update soon..and long part too..

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raina verma

@NAKSHMYJAAN

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Posted: 10 years ago

#86

next part coming tonight.. :)

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raina verma

@NAKSHMYJAAN

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Posted: 10 years ago

#87

PART 17
as always ak is confused in her dresses then she decided to wear a simple black colour saree for party and gets ready quickly. she adore herself in mirror when she remembered nk's word "tum saree me bahut acchi lagti ho" and smiles. then she heard her door bell rings and opens the door
ak-sn tum yaha ?
sn-ha kyu accha nahi laga kya
ak-kyu nahi..come in
sn-ya..wow ak your house is beautiful and so cute
ak-thanks
sn-to tum ready ho gayi
ak-yes..batao kaisi lag rahi hu ?
sn-theek hai..par zyada nahi
ak-matlab
sn-dekho ak tum hamare office ki main model ho aur tum hi stylish nahi dikhogi to kaise chalega..aisa kro ki kuch western pehen lo
ak-par mere pass ab aise koi clothes nahi hai
sn-mai janti thi tabhi mai yaha tumhare liye ye dress lekar aayi thi..tum ise pehen lo
ak-sorry sn pehle mai ye sab pehenti thi par ab nahi
sn-kya ak ek model hokar ye baat..ad me to ye sab hi chalega aur kabhi kabhi to bina dress bhi tab kya karogi ?
ak-kya?
sn-hmm to lets try it
ak-ok..mai abhi aati hu
sn saw some photographs
when ak came.
sn-wow ak u look sexy
ak-thanks par ye kuch zyada hi fit aur short hai
sn-bilkul nahi..accha ye batao ye tumhara beta hai right
ak-ha mera beta naksh
sn-nice name naksh very unique too..aur ye tumhare pati right
ak-?? kitne sawal karti ho ..ab hame chalna chahiye warna hum late hi jayenge aur boss naraaz.
sn-hmm
when ak opens the door she saw a man came infront of her
ak-ji aap kaun
man-mai ak madam ko lene aaya hu nk sir ne apni car bheji hai..
ak and sn shocked..
man-ji ak madam kaun hai?
ak-ji mai
man-to chaliye madam
ak-ha hum dono saath me chalenge
sn-ok
and driver take them to nk's house
here
nk is eagerly waiting for ak to come his house for the first time..and his long wait is now over today.
he said to his servent " tumne vo kaam kia jo maine kaha tha
ser-confused?kaam..but in fear he says yes
nk-good
after some more time his love ak is arrieved at his home with sneha..
she is atonished to see a very big house from outside
ak-sn tum chalo mai aai
sn-ok and she goes in
nk quickly comes to attend ak
sn-hi nk
nk-hey sn i am sorry maine tumse
sn-its ok nk
nk-thanks btw ak kaha hain?
tabhi ak waha aati hai..yeh rahi ak..sn says.
nk is very much surprised to see her in short mini dress but she is looking very much pretty in a black sleevless simple dress
nk-ahem ahem..hi ak
ak is very much uncomfortable in her dress ad try to pull it down
ak-hello sir
nk-pls come in
trio come in the house
nk asks waiter to serve them something
nk-to kaisa laga mera ghar ak ji
ak-very nice sir
nk-thanks..actually ye ghar kisi khas ki pasand ka hai
ak remind her words when she was talking about her home to rr..
ak-hmm :)
nk-mai abhi aata hu
sn-kitna sundar hai ye ghar ak..kyu
ak-ha
sn-aur nk bhi
ak-sn..mai tumse
then they heard some voice who calls everybody on the dancefloor
sn-chalo ak hum bhi dance kare
ak-nahi sn tum jao..sorry
sn-chalo na
ak-nahi mai comfortable nahi hu pls
sn-aree sab theek hoga aao na..and she takes ak to the dane floor and said "ab koi nahi nahi"
ak-hmm..and starts dance
nk is watshing them while standing near the bar but ak is not too much comfortable because of her dress and it is clearly visible to nk..then he remembered the engagement day when ak was dancing with rr but he started kissing her
but he saw slowly slowly ak's back zip is about to open and she is not aware about this
he become very worried about her..as he could'nt do nothing..
nd here both girls are magan in dancing
quickly nk came on the dance floor and pull ak near him..and put his hand on ak's open zip.
she is really shocked by his behaviour.."nk" she said
nk suddenly put his finger on her lips..shhh
chup..
ak-par ye kya hai jane do mujhe
sn too shocked to see them like this she couldn't say anything but went from there
nk-yaha aao..he quickly take her in the corner
and says"ye dekho" then closes her zip
ak realises now what he is doing
ak-sorry mai vo
nk-kya zaroorat thi ye dress pehen kar aane ki jb khud hi usme comfortable nahi reh sakti
ak is about to crying
nk-sorry ak tum ro mat maine tumpe gussa kia i am very sorry
ak-mai isliye nahi ro rahi thi nk..sorry jo mai ye dress pehen kar aayi
nk-its ok ak..tum ro mat
ak-nk mujhe thori der ke liye akela rehna hai pls
nk-ok ak agar tum chaho to mere room me jakar aaram kar sakti ho
ak-thanks..kaha hai tumhara room
nk-upar left hand corner me
ak-ok
and she went from there
srevent-sir ye aapki cofee
nk-hmm..tumne vo kaam kia tha na jo maine kaha tha
ser-sorry sir par mai bhool gaya tha
nk-par tumne to..oh shit agar ak ne vo sab dekh liya to..
he suddenly runs towards his room
here ak just enters in his room..she is shocked kam surprise to see the room..there are so many mirrors in room and a big picture of ak on the wall ..but whole room is deorated by her image reflection through the mirror..she gets emotional to see herself every where
"akshara" nk said it while coming in room
and akshara turned to face him
ak-ye sab kya hai nk
nk's eyes filled with tears.
she runs towards him and quickly hugs him tightly..in return nk hugs her bak..
ak-i am sorry nk maine tumhe ignore kia..
nk-its ok ak i can understand
but sneha saw them through window..she starts crying to see them and ran from there

Edited by rainanaksh - 10 years ago

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raina verma

@NAKSHMYJAAN

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Posted: 10 years ago

#88

sorry friends this is not a long part..because my this part was not posted by some error in my net..so i wrote it again..that's why this is short..but i promise next part will be definately long.. hope u all like it

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hirannaksh

@hirannaksh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#89

nice part raina..loved it pls cont. soon

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avisha

@avinaksh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: rainanaksh
[COLOR=BLACK]sorry friends this is not a long part..because my this part was not posted by some error in my net..so i wrote it again..that's why this is short..but i promise next part will be definately long.. hope u all like it[/COLOR]

jo b... but it was amazing. ... loved it