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Riddhi

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Please update next 2 parts tomorrow itself

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: Nakshiranridz
Please update next 2 parts tomorrow itself

why two parts dear i have already wrote part 12 on page 8 .

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: rainanaksh
[COLOR=BLACK]why two parts dear i have already wrote part 12 on page 8 .[/COLOR]

when are you updating the next part ?? [:^(]

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: rainanaksh
[COLOR=BLACK]thank u so much dear for your such a sweet comment...due to u all now i am writing 13th part of my ff...and definately i will entertain u all my friends with my ff...so keep reading it...:)[/COLOR]

plz update soon...can't wait

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PART 13
ak and nk came back in party
rr-kaha chale gaye the tum dono
nk- aree yaar apni dost ke saath waqt bitane gaya tha kyunki shaadi ke baad to tum dono ko time nahi milega..kyu ak ?looking at her
ak- hmm :)
rr- to chale hum tumhe ghar drop kar dete hai
ak-nahi mai vr aur an ke saath chali jaaongi
rr-ok bye ak..kal dulhan bankar mera intzaar karna
ak-bye
and all went from there..
AT NIGHT
vr and an are applying mehandi on ak's hands
vr- ak tu kush to hai na
ak-ha kyu
an- nahi yaar hamne socha shayad kahi tujhe family ki yaad to nahi aa rahi hai
ak- vo to hamesha aati hai..kaash mera bhi koi apna hota jo meri shaadi ki taiyaari karta..meri shadi par sab dance karte..aur hum khoob enjoy karte..
vr -koi baat nahi hum hai na sab kuch ahi par thora bahut to kar hi sakte hai..
ak- you both are my best friends..thank u
HERE IN RR HOUSE
rr is very much in tension about his marriage so he quickly goes to nk's room..and nk is packing his bags..
rr-ye tu kya kar raha hai
nk-sorry yaar mai tujhe batana bhool gaya ki mujhe kal he shimla se ek designer ka phone aaya tha aur use mere jwellery design bahut pasand aaye to mujhe kal hi jana hoga
rr-kal ! matlab tu saadi me nahi rahega
nk-rahunga zaroor ok
rr-theek hai tu ab so ja...ok
nk- hmm..gud nite
IN MORNING
akshara is washing her mehandi when her phone rings.she picks her phone its rr
rr-hay my love raat ko neend to aayi na
ak-ha acche se
rr-par mujhe nahi yahi sochta raha ki tumse shadi karu ya nahi
ak-nahi karni hai to mat karo
rr-aree mai mazak kar raha tha
ak-mai bhi
suddenly she heard some noise from her drawingroom so she cuts the phone and ran there
here vr an and all ak's college friends are doing bhangra..ak is very happy to see them
ak-tum sab aur ye bhangra
vr-nk leke aaya hai in sab ko
ak- nk par vo hai kaha ?
an-abhi to yahi tha shayad decorations dekhne gaya hoga..
ak-mai jakar dekhti hu..
here nk given instructions to the flower deorator
ak-nk tum yaha kya rahe ho?
nk- dance
ak-kya
nk-tum bhi na
ak-sorry par...aisa karo tum pehle mere saath aao
she holds his hands and take him to her bedroom
ak- yaha baitho
nk-par kyu ak..mujhe kaam hai
ak- ssshhh..baitho
tumne kuch khaya
nk-nahi par mujhe bhook bhi nahi hai
ak-ye lo ye maggi kha lo tumhe bhook lagi hogi
nk-par kyu
ak-kal bhi tumne kuch nahi khaya tha aur ghar par bhi nahi khaya hoga..aur abhi yaha aane ke chakkar me bhi kuch nahi khaya hoga..mai janti hu
nk- thanks and took the plate
ak-thanks to mujhe tumhe kehna chahiye nk
nk-mujhe
ak-ha tumne mere saare sapne poore kiye hai
nk i lo..
nk quickly put his hand on ak's mouth and signal her not to say anything..
nk-accha jane do tumne apne gift dekhe
ak-kaun se gift
nk-vahi jo kal mai laya tha
ak-abhi nahi ..par dekhti hu
ak took her gift and open it
a beautiful photo frame..with four partetion..
in one frame..
ak with rr
in second..ak with varsha
in third..ak with antra
in fourth..alone ak
ak-ye kaisa gift hai nk
nk-kyu accha nahi laga tumhe
ak-accha hai par isme tum kyu nahi ho
nk-mai hu ak..hamesha tumhare saath bas mujhe yaad kar lena..iss photo se nahi par apne dil se..ok..he kisses on ak's forehead and says alvida ak..phir milenge..and goes from there...
ak- raat ko zaroor aana nk mai wait karoongi..
IN EVENING
ak is ready with her lehenga..she is looking gorgeous in red gree lehenga with daimond jwellery...but the happiness on her face is totally missing..
ak to herself..nahi ak tu rr ke saath aisa nahi kar sakti..vo tujhse pyaar karta hai..aur tu use hi dhoka degi..tujhe rr se apne aur nk ke baare me sab kuch batana hoga..apne naye rishte ki shuruaat tu sach se kare gi na ki jhoot se..
she quickly picks her phone and calls rr..
here sabhi baarati ak ke ghar aane ke liye taiyaar rehte hai..tabhi rr ko ak ka phone aata hai..
ak- rr mujhe tumse kuch zaroori baat kehni hai kya tum abhi mere ghar aa sakte ho
rr-abhi to tumhare ghar aa hi raha hu tab baat kar lena
ak- nahi mujhe tumse kuch inportant kehna tha
rr- to abhi bata do
ak-nk tumhare aas paas hai
rr-oh ha uske baare me batana bhool gaya ...vo hamesha ke liye shimla chala gaya hai itna roka phir bhi nahi ruka..vaise tumhe yahi kehna tha kya
to hear this she starts crying badly while controlling her tears
ak- nahi rr mai vo..
rr-kya baat hai ak ab batao bhi
ak-rr vo uss din jab maine drink kia tha tab
rr-ha vo mujhe pata hai
ak- vo rr uss raat mai aur nk
rr-tum dono kya
ak-uss raat hamare beech ek physical relation ban gaya tha..humne raat bhar..
rr-shocked and numb too
ak-mujhe pata hai rr ki ye baat mujhe pehle hi bata deni chahiye thi par meri himmat nahi hui
mai apni shadi ki buniyaad jhoot se nahi shuru kar sakti thi..i sorry rr..i am really sorry
rr- thank u ak jo tumne mujhe ye baat bata di ..agar ye mujhe shadi ke baad pata chalta to na jane mai kya karta..thank u so much..
ab mai phone rakhta hu aur jald se jald apni dulhan ko hamare ghar leke aata hu..ok bye
ak is very happy to hear this..and waiting rr
for her shaadi..

PRECAP after three year

Edited by rainanaksh - 10 years ago

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raina verma

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Posted: 10 years ago

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so friends are u enjoying my ff or not...i will update next part soon..hope u like this part too..so pls comment on it and in every thread and make forum active