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Posted: 11 years ago
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Akshi calls to naitik
A: aur kitna samay lagega naitik aapko aane me
N: bas akshara main airport se seedha ghar hi aa raha hu
akshara in the room.. naitik came from behind and hug her
A: aap aa gaye naitik.. maine apko bahut miss kiya
N: maine bhi apko bahut miss kiya
then both sit on the bed.. naitik asks
N: naksh kaha hai vo dikhayi nahi de raha
then naksh came and says papa papa
A: lijiye naam liya aur banda hazir
D: papa aap aa gaye.. maine apko bahut miss kiya
N: maine bhi apko bahut miss kiya naksh
D:acha dikhao ap mere liye vaha se kya kya laye ho
N:haan abhi dikhata hoon
A:abhi nahi duggu bad me dekhna papa abhi thake hue hai na
N:akshara jane dijiye na use abhi dekhne dijiye baccha hai vo aur vaise bhi jab tak vo dekhega nahi tab tak pareshan karega
then naitik give him some toys and video games.. naksh become so happy after seeing it
D:wow.. itna sab kuch mere liye main abhi jake ye sab muskan didi ko dikhata hu
then akshi also about to go from the room.. suddenly naitik catch her hand
N: are aap kaha chali.. aapko abhi jane ki izazat nahi hai
then he came to close her
A:chodiye naitik koi aa jayega
N:aise kaise koi aa jayega.. main darwaja band kar deta hoon
A:acha aur duggu aa gaya to.. bhul gaye janmashtmi wala din phir kya bahana banayenge aap
N:aap uski chinta mat kijiye.. apke duggu ke liye to maine solid planning kar rakhi hai kyonki uska bas chale to mujhe aapke pas bhatkne bhi na de.. kya timing hai uski jab bhi apke krib aata hu hamesha beech me tapak padta hai isliye maine bhi aj us par usi ka funda apnaya hai use itne sare khilone diye hai ki vo ab unhi me busy rahega.. isliye ab ap duggu ka bahana bhul jaiye
A: phir bhi naitik chodiye jane dijiye mujhe bahut kaam hai
N:kaam vaam sab baad me pahle pyar
A:kya ap bhi.. abhi abhi suru ho gaye chaliye chodiye jane dijiye mujhe
N:kya ap hamesha kaam kaam karti rahti hai.. abhi abhi aaya hu lekin meri to koi fikra hi nahi hai apko jaiye mujhe aapse koi baat nahi karni
A: oh ap to gussa ho gaye ok baba sorry please.. acha ap mujhe mera gift nahi dikhaye ki ap mere liya kya kya laye hai
N:dikhata hu na main.. ek minute
naitik shows her everything what he brought for her.. then he suddenly hug her.. akshi become surprised on his behaviour
A:kya hua aj ap itne possesive kyun ho rahe hai
N:akshara apko yaad hai kal kya hai
A:haan.. kal to teej hai
N:vahi to kal teej hai aur hamesha ki tarah kal ap mayke chali jayengi mera bilkul bhi man nahi lagega abhi abhi main aaya hu aur ap chali jayengi
A:aur agar main apse ye kahu ki main is bar mayke nahi jaungi to..
N:kya.. such me.. matlab is bar ap mayke nahi jayengi
A:ji nahi.. is bar main yahi apke sath rahkar teej manaugi
then both hug and kiss each other
N:akshara aap nahi janti ap na world best wife hai.. hamesha mere dil ki baat bina kahe samajh jati hai.. i love u akshara
A: i love u too
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice one...😳..loved it..😃
do write more..😃
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very well written
very nice name- Pyar Ke Do Pal
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superbb..please write more and more
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Originally posted by: nivedha_123

nice one...😳..loved it..😃

do write more..😃

Thanks
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Originally posted by: Nakshiranridz

Very well written
Keep doing

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Originally posted by: SONAMB404

superbb..please write more and more

Thanks.. sure write more
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Originally posted by: SONAMB404

very well written
very nice name- Pyar Ke Do Pal

Thanks for praising my title..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice ...
the trio naitik-aks-duggu were in my mind while reading this😊
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Originally posted by: Mini2013

nice ...

the trio naitik-aks-duggu were in my mind while reading this😊

Thanks for such a nice comment

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