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Atharva Dev

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Atharva Dev

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kala_09
wow dev too good...❤️

I knew it mam that you will like it...hope it is nice!😳

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Purva

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Posted: 12 years ago

Nice one dev

i really liked d entire portrayal

Akshi - naitik Rocked

u wrote it nicely

waiting for more stories from u 😊

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Atharva Dev

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: _TaNi_
Nice one dev

i really liked d entire portrayal

Akshi - naitik Rocked

u wrote it nicely

waiting for more stories from u 😊

hmm,,,,thankyou tani ...i was actually struck with how to shape it up, being sad or being happy...then got an idea to make it with a dream in it...!

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Purva

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: *Dev.*
hmm,,,,thankyou tani ...i was actually struck with how to shape it up, being sad or being happy...then got an idea to make it with a dream in it...!

Dream sequences are always amaizng to read n to write

u presented it Emotionally ...n it was nice reading

i have written a dream sequences but presented dem in a comical manner.😆...so it was nice reading d emotional stuff waala side from u ...

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Atharva Dev

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: _TaNi_

Dream sequences are always amaizng to read n to write

u presented it Emotionally ...n it was nice reading

i have written a dream sequences but presented dem in a comical manner.😆...so it was nice reading d emotional stuff waala side from u ...

yes! in dream sequences we can do anything with characters which we cant do in real life😆...well, the theme was emoyional hence whole thing was written based on it...

whoa! a comical dream sequence...pls PM me that!...i would love to read it too!😳

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Purva

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Posted: 12 years ago

^Egjactely ...dream sequence mein kuch bhi karwa do ...

Okay i will PM u dat

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Atharva Dev

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: _TaNi_
^Egjactely ...dream sequence mein kuch bhi karwa do ...

Okay i will PM u dat

what do mean by kuch bhi purva...😆...okay jokes apart😆!

great! will wait for your PM.😳

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kala_09

@kala_09

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Posted: 12 years ago

Always Naksh emotional and romantic scenes worth to watch it... but really dev it was awesome... loved naksh very much...❤️

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Atharva Dev

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: kala_09
Always Naksh emotional and romantic scenes worth to watch it... but really dev it was awesome... loved naksh very much...❤️

yes! i always picturise them whenever i read their stuffs...than you mam. Naksh sequences dont have any limit of creativity.😳