My First Naksh FF-Dhadkan*Updated 1st Part on Pg#7 - Page 9

Akshara=no..no..nothing'.

Naitik=so come downstair..n order ur breakfast'

Akshara nodded her head in yes

Naitik left room n said her to come downstair.

Akshara open her cupboard n decide to wear a saree because now she is married..n her first day..

Akshara,s dress

Akshara stand near the mirror n remember the day when Rituraj gifted her a beautiful saree n she said=Rituraj but yeh toh bohat expensive hogi..

Rituraj=tum say zyada nahi'

Akshara=its very beautiful'

Rituraj=thanks'

Tears rolled from Akshara eyes n she said=vo saree toh shayed meri kismet mai hi nhi thi..

N then she remember that her mother gave rituraj,s gifted saree to a poor servant'

Akshara starts cying'n said=I will miss u'.

Suddenly Akshara saw that Naitik coming.she wipe her tears..

Naitik impressed by her angels beauty..

Akshara raised her eyesbrow n gave him a look what happen anything wrong'she become more nervous to see silent Naitik standing at same position till 2 mins..

Naitik=u r looking beautiful'.

Naitik take his step toward Akshara n Akshara take her step back.Akshara's heartbeat skipped a beat'.

Naitik want to hug her,kiss her, n want to said that he love her so much..

But when he remember that Akshara said that she want sometime,she is not ready..

He stops in mid way n said=ur breakfast is ready'

The whole day is passed like few mins'Naitik sensed Akshara sadness,n he must thought that she is missing her parents'

At evening.6;30 study room

Akshara is busy in reading books,novels n newspapers.but all things was remember her Rituraj n her parents'.

Akshara nodded her head in yes'

AT NIGHT 8;00 PM hotel

Akshara wears a beautiful saree.Naitik wears a black n white like a perfect husband

Naitik introduce his frnds

Naitik=she is Rasmi.my clg frnd

Rasmi=hi bhaabi..

Akshara[smile]=hi..nice to meet u..

Aish(I,Me & Myself)[playfull manner]=hey..i thought Naitik hum say milta kyu nhi hai ab pata chala kay us kay paas itni beautiful wife hai'

Naitik[angry look]=stop it Aish..

Aish=Ok tum toh gussa hi hogaya..

Akshara=oh hi Aish..

Naitik introduce Mohit,Shaurya n Varsha'

They sat on one long table'Naksh sat together,like Mohit n rasmi,Varsha n Shaurya n Aish..

Aish=ok bhahi aap bataye app ko hamara frnd Naitik kaisa laga..

Akshara=really nice..

Rasmi[teasing manner]=bas aur kuch nhi'..

Naitik[change the topic]=oh so what is ur planning of marriage with Mohit..

Rasmi=oh next month..

Naitik=oh that,s great.congrates to both

Rasmi & Mohit=thanks..its not fair aap nay humain apni shaadi mai invite nhi kiya..

Akshara=no,its not like that'.

Varsha=oh guys lets play truth n dare..

Aish spins the bottle..n the bottle points is toward alina'

Rasmi=truth..

Aish=oh so Rasmi'u have to said a habit of Mohit...

Mohit=Rasmi plzz'kahi koi aur hi mat batana'

Rasmi=u know Mohit ki sab say bari habit yeh hai kay vo

Mohit=no..Rasmi..i swear mai tum say baat nhi karu ga'

Rasmi=one day Mohit was singing a song in the washroom.

Akshara smiles at the cute couple..

Aish=ok ok..tum ppl mai larai hojaye is liye hum tum dono ko maaf kartay hai..

Aish spins the bottle again n now the turn of Akshara'

Akshara=dare'

Aish=so Akshara bhabi u have to kiss Naitik..

Akshara=me no..no'

Mohit=com;on bhabhi'kiss Naitik na..

Naitik =stop it guys'yeh kya bachpana hai..

Mohit=dekha apni baar..

Varsha=com,on bhabhi'

Akshara=but me how..i mean..

Shaurya=its not fair bhabhi..

Everyone shouts n cheers Akshara

Naitik heart was enjoying link a small child like someone is giving her a chocolate..

Akshara=close ur eyes..

Naitik close his eyes n waiting 4 his first kiss'

Akshara slowly slowly move her face towards Naitik cheek n atleast she kiss Naitik..Naitik desires burn with passionate'but he control himself n response quickly'Akshara now this time too shy but she is in no mood n neither she is unhappy n sad..because she try to forget her past but how..

Rasmi=how romantic..

Shaurya n Varsha=they r perfect 4 each other..

Naitik,s heart was jumping like a child after hearing such a lovely comments..

Mohit sits on his knees n show his hand to Rasmi n said=would u like to dance with me miss Rasmi

Rasmi smiles n said=sure..

The couple start dance with the slow music n Shaurya n Varsha also went to dance floor'.now only Aish n Naksh r left'

Aish=hey tum dono nhi jaogay'

Akshara nodded her head in no'

Aish=com;on bhabhi its ur first dance..

Akshara=sorry but I m not in mood'

Naitik=Aish stop it na,Akshara in no mood so why r u forcing her..

Aish[smiles]=so Naitik would u like to dance with me..bhabhi aap ko bura toh nhi lagay ga..

Akshara=no..mujay kyu'

Naitik=but I m in no mood'

They all start laughing..

Aish=u both r unbelievable'

Aish went near Rasmi,Mohit,Shaurya,Varsha n said=they both don,t enjoy the party..

Rasmi=plan...

Varsha=what..

Mohit n Shaurya=ab mazaa aayega..

Scene change to Naksh

Naksh both r silent'

Naitik broke the silent n said=u don,t like dance'

Akshara=no'but not now..

Naitik[face fell]=oh'

Akshara remember her n jay slow dance n then she remember that she married with Naitik..

Naitik=Akshara so what ur hobby..

Akshara look there n Naitik shock with Akshara,s reaction that she does not want to talk with him'

Naitik=u want something..

Akshara=yea drink..i mean simple juice..

Naitik=oh stay here I m coming with a juice 4 u..

At drinks stall

Naitik to waiter=hey..give me a drink juice..

Girl=a drink'plzz

Varsha shout Naitik name'

Naitik=what happen Varsha..

Varsha=voh yeh juice mujay dedo..

Naitik[smiles] n gave it to Varsha..

Varsha change the juice with a drink..

Naitik about to left when Varsha said=Naitik yeh tum hi lelo bhabhi wait kar rahi hogi..

Naitik=oh thanks Varsha..

When Naitik left all frnds said=plan success'

Naitik=Akshara yeh lo..ur juice..

Akshara=thanks..

Akshara slowly slowly drink n said=thanks..

After 5 mins Akshara see tha Naitik is Rituraj n her mind is out of work

Someone call Naitik n Naitik said me coming..

Akshara=I love u I love u'.in babyish voice..

Naitik come n hear the she said=I love u'.u r my life..

Naitik heart was jumping like a small child n he does not know that its meaning is wrong'

Naitik=I love u too Akshara'u know I want to hear these magical words from ur mouth'thanks'.

Akshara=I love u'

Akshara felt like Naitik is Rituraj n she said=would u dance with me..my love..

Naitik[teary eyes]=yea sure..why not..

Naitik kiss her forehead n then her cheeks...

Akshara is totally anware from this situation..

Naksh dances like they danced in serial on song "Jab koi baat bigad"

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Raol2yRD4Xc

Precap=''tum bhi mujh say pyaar karlo''

Sorry for mistakes n for updating so late.

Hope u liked it. This update isnt so romantic because I want this story

to move alongwith concept. As the story progresses,

there will be more romantic & cute Naksh moments.

Waiting for ur comments.

Suggestions r always welcome.

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