My First Naksh FF-Dhadkan*Updated 1st Part on Pg#7 - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: kumarandils


i ll try to see it sister , today only i ask ff , this much fast na sister 😆


yup, i m updating it for u today in some time😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: --ARooJ--

Arey wah aish ... ur ff...All de best for it...

I m liking the concept...do update soon...


thanku so much
i m happy dat u liked it BHINDI😆
i will update sooner😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: khanjemiamah

m getting bored plsss start it soon!


i m going to update
sabar ka phal meetha hota hai😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: Aish-Naksh


yup, i m updating it for u today in some time😃



thank uuu so much , 😃🤗 sister 😃 , no probs sister take u r times , thank u
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: __Aleena__

wow very nice guggu...

intro was sooo nice..😛
eagerly w8ing 4 ur ff...😍
write soon...😊
btw meine pehle res liya tha bt wo hai hi nahi[:'(]
anyways...gud luck...👍🏼


thanks
i m happy dat u liked
i will update sooner😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: kumarandils



thank uuu so much , 😃🤗 sister 😃 , no probs sister take u r times , thank u


ur welcome bro😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
hey i know i m a bit "Late"
but better late den never
i saw d post n its really a nice concept
plz do PM me also
luking fwd to it 😳
Edited by tani23 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: tani23

hey i know i m a bit "Late"

but better late den never
i saw d post n its really a nice concept
plz do PM me also
luking fwd to it 😳


Dair aye darust aye😆
I m very glad that u liked my intro
Thanku so much for ur precious comments
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
PART 1: (Written By Me & Fatima)

EVERY GIRL HAS A DREAM OF MARRIAGE,PERFECT LIFE,PERFECT FAMILY N OFFCOURCE HER LOVE. BUT WHAT WILL HAPPEN WHEN A GIRL FOR HER PARENTS REJECT A BOY WHO LOVES HER'


Here we go...
In the heart of Udaipur,the most rich mension is decorated with high class decoration,if anybody see,'they surely said that today is the marriage of their only n only one daughter'

Under the mension,all are busy,the mother,father,servents n her frnds..no one notice the sadness of the girl face'..Under her room.she sits in her bed n tears rolled from her eyes'

Her mother aka Rajshri knock the door when the girl aka Akshara wipe her tears'.Rajshri comes n sits near Akshara n said Akshara I know what happened'but we r right beta'The girl nodded her head in yea n said yea momma'parents r always right..because they want to see their childs happy'.

Rajshri hug Akshara tightly n said 'I want to see u always happy'' Akshara=yes momma'.where is papa I want to meet him'last time.. Vishambhar comes n said=meri bachii nay mujhay bulaya n mai hazir'

Akshara hug Vishambhar n said=papa I will miss u'

Vishambhar=baraat aanay hi wali hai..so,jaldi say meri princess ready ho jaye'

The next moment the baraat arrives n now time for the arrival of bride'.Rajshri n her frnds take Akshara n comes outside...

Then the songs begins'.
  • Dulhe ka sehra suhaana lagta hai

They show that Naitik puts his sehra a to a side n saw Akshara he could not take his eyes off to her'

  • Dulhan ka to dil deewana lagta hai

Then they show Akshara..who is sad

  • Palbhar mein kaise badalte hain rishte
  • Ab to har apna begaana lagta hai

Naksh marriage rituals start n Naitik put mangalsutar n sindoor '[I don,t know much things about hindu,s marriage]

  • Dulhe ka sehra suhaana lagta hai
  • Dulhan ka to dil deewana lagta hai
  • Saat pheron se bandha janmon ka yeh bandhan
  • Pyaar se joda hai rab ne preet ka daaman
N they take pheras'Naitik walk behind Akshara n then after..
  • Hain nayi rasmein, nayi kasmein, nayi uljhan
  • Honth hai khaamosh, lekin keh rahi dhadkan

They show that Akshara is sad but Naitik notices that something is wrong with bride.Atlast the rituals finish n now the time of bidaai..which is very difficult to Akshara..

  • Mushkil ashkon ko chhupaana lagta hai -
  • Dulhan ka to dil deewana lagta hai
  • Palbhar mein kaise badalte hain rishte
  • Ab to har apna begaana lagta hai

Now the time of biddaai which is very difficult 4 a girl'.AKSHARA BURST OUT OF CRYING..TEARS ROLLED FROM HER EYES AGAIN N AGAIN'.

  • Main teri baahon ke jhule mein pali babul
  • Jaa rahi hoon chhodke teri gali babul
Naitik takes akshara to the car but akshara runs to Vishambhar n hug him tightly.'.This moment is very difficult for Vishambhat because she is his one & only one daughter who will leave him in only few minutes...
  • Main teri baahon ke jhule mein pali babul - 3
  • Jaa rahi hoon chhodke teri gali babul
  • Khoobsurat yeh zamaane yaad aayeenge
  • Chaahke bhi hum tumhe na bhool paayenge
Vishambhar takes Naitik hand in akshara's hand n ask naitik to take care of her. Naitik promises him.
Naitik says that=Papa I Know its very difficult for Akshara to live without u.But I will give her so much love that she will not feel sad.Mushkil, mushkil daaman ko churaana lagta hai
  • Dulhan ka to dil deewana lagta hai
  • Mushkil daaman ko churaana lagta hai
  • Dulhan ka to dil deewana lagta hai
  • Palbhar mein kaise badalte hain rishte
  • Ab to har apna begaana lagta hai
  • Dulhe ka sehra suhaana lagta hai
  • Dulhan ka to dil deewana lagta hai
  • DHADKAN dhadkan, DHADKAN dhadkan

Akshara hugs rajshri n naitik takes akshara to the car.

NOW ONLY NAKSH SCENES''..

NAKSH IN CAR'

Naksh sits in the back seat n driver drives the car.

Akshara still crying but trying to control herself.

Naitik holds akshara's hand n kisses on akshara's hand. Akshara's body shivers with a current.

Naitik=Akshara i know its difficult for u. Because u r a girl n i respect ur feelings.

Akshara thinking=Naitik why care about me so much? Is he in love with me?😕

Akshara nodded her head to show that she is paying attention to what he is saying.

The next moment car stops beside the most richest house in INDIA.

Akshara see house n thinks in her mind= Naitik is very successful businessman. Wo apni mehnat k dam par aaj INDIA ka sab se Rich Business man hai. Hope RITURAJ😃 also.Before akshara could think more about Rituraj... She controls her emotions n tears.

The next moment they enter in Singhaniya's mansion.

Naitik n Akshara enter (put right feet) together.

Naitik introduces akshara to his servants n driver etc...(because he treats his servants as his family members)

Naitik to akshara=Tomorrow, i will show u my house... Come i will show u MY room OOPS OUR room..They enter their room'The room is was decorated with rose petals,candels n different flowers'.Akshara become nervous..to see this'

Akshara=where is washroom..

Naitik=point towards the washroom'

Naitik sat on the bed n kept looking at Akshara n see what shat she is doing'

Akshara wearing a gown n stands in the window n kept looking outside..

Naitik change a simple white dress'

Naitik coming towards Akshara n said=see aap toh aisay dekh rahi hai jaisay koi bahar say aanay wala hai'

Akshara=no

Naitik try to change the topic=so aap ko kisi cheez say darr lagta hai'

Akshara=no..bilkul nahi..

They kept standing their in the same position till 5 mins n Akshara kept looking outside n Naitik kept looking at Akshara'

The thunder voice come n ofcource Akshara is afaired of thunder'

Akshara hug Naitik tightly more tightly not to let him go'.

Naitik caressing Akshara back n calm her down'

After 3 mins Akshara realize that she hug Naitik'Akshara quickly left him'a confuse Naitik said=kya hua'

Akshara=nothing'.

Naitik smirks=ab hum puri raat yaha hi kharay rahay gay'

Akshara cheeks become red hearing this'

Naitik held Akshara from her waist n start kissing her shoulders n neck..n start sucking them

Naitik held the one strape of Akshara grown n try to pulled it'Akshara close her eyes tightly'

Ater 2 mins Naitik kissed her cheeks n pulled her more closer n put his thumb on her lips'

Naitik and Akshara one inch ago to their lips match but Akshara realize it n left confuse Naitik'.

Akshara=sorry but I m not ready now'.i want some time'hope u understand'

Naitik heart broken but he realize Akshara situation n nodded his head in yes'.

Akshara=I m going to sleep'..

Naitik=ok'.

Naitik lay left side n Akshara right side on bed the distance between them is shown'

It is almost 2;00 am..

The thunder voice makes Akshara a wake n Akshara did not realize she hug Naitik..

Akshara heads rests on Naitik chest'

Naitik=I m here Akshara..don,t worry'

Akshara close her eyes again n sleep in Naitik arms'..

In morning'.

Naitik kept looking his angel sleeping peacefully in his arms..

Naitik thinking=how beautiful u r..i m luckiest man'.to have u'but I hope so u want sometime 4 this relations n maybe some reason behind this but I only one thing know that I like u n I make u to like me my promise'

Akshara wake up n see that she is in Naitik arms n he is looking her.

Naitik kissed her forehead'

Precap=AKSHARA KISS NAITIK[HOW], shopping,dinner n ofcource a romantic dance'

The precap shows one step of story..Naitik cares for Akshara n Akshara trying to accept this relation n forget her past n try to enjoy her new life with Naitik slow slow'

This update was written by my little sister as i m busy these days in spamming, but Editing is done by me.

Sorry for mistakes.

Hope u liked the 1st part.

Waiting for ur comments.

Suggestions r always welcome.

Do n comment.

Edited by Aish-Naksh - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
Yay me first. ...
Aish 🤗
Superb part...
Luved it 😳
Tere ff ka best part ye hai ki ghar waale kam aur naksh zyada hai 😳 🤣
Update soon...
Thanx for d pm..
N khud likh apne sis ko mat tang kar 😡 🤣
Edited by srkfan4ever - 13 years ago

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