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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi frnds... I jst came up with a small OS on the present situation of naksh... I know it didn't came out so well but still posting it... n I really dont know how a pregnancy woman feelings will be before labour... I jst collected few experiences frm my frnds and wrote it... sorry if I'm wrong any where... 😊

Love so much chotu for editing my OS... n sorry for my very bad hindi... In hurry I didn't check it once again before sending it to u...


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Naitik feels good aftr talking with his father... he decides that he has to be there with akshara whatever may be the situation... Here on the other side BM and G3 thinks to educate akshara regarding delivery... but unknowingly they end up in frightening akshara more.. akshara gets scared and soon cries... G3 and BM gets worried, by then naitik also comes der...

Naitik: maa... kya hua?? akshara kyu roh rahi hai??😲

G3: kuch nai munna... hum bas isko dilasa dena chahta tha... lekin bahu aur ghabra gayi...

BM makes akshara to drink some water n in the mean G3 takes naitik aside...

G3: munna... kshama chahte hai beta... anjaane mein bahu ko aur pareshan karliya hum ne... tuhi use sambhal sakta hai... bahu ko andar leke jao aur uske saat hi reh... use dilasa dilao...

Naitik: ji..

Naitik is also tensed and sad seeing akshara... he takes akshara to their room... he makes her to sleep by his side and he too comes close to her... Akshara holds his hand so tightly that naitik can understand how much insecure akshara is feeling right now... he doesnt know what he can say so that she can overcome her fear as he himself is very new to this...

Naitik: akshara... aap ghabariye mat... kuch nahi hoga... mein hu naa aapke saath... sab kuch ache se hoga... aap chinta mat kar...

Akshara remains silent.. she jst comes so more close to naitik and keeps his hands near her cheeks...

Naitik: mujhe pata hai akshara... kehna bahut aasan hai... lekin sehna mushkil hai... lekin akshara jab aap pehli baar hamare bache dekhegi na, aap apna saara dardh bhool jayenge...

Akshara: mein apne bache keliye kithna bhi dardh ko seh sakti hu naitik...

Naitik: phir dar kis baat ki?

Akshara: kehta hai ki delivery ek aurath keliye doosra janam se samaan hai... agar mujhe kuch hogaya toh... (Naitik stops)

Naitik: akshara... yeh kya baat kar rahe hai aap??😡 kuch nahi hoga...

Akshara: mujhe kehne dijiye naitik... pata nai iske baad mujhe yeh mouka milti hai ya nahi... (naitik stops her again)

Naitik: akshara... please aise mat kahiye... mein aapke bina jee nahi sakta...

Akshara: bhagwan ki kripa se mujhe ithna acha pati mila hai... ithna acha pariwar... mere paas sab kuch hai.. mein bahut khush hu... aapke pyar mein yeh do saal kaise pura hua pata bhi nahi chala... aur ab hamare pyar ki nishan bhi aanewala hai... hamare zindagi mein aur bhi khushiya aane wali hai... mein aap aur bache ke saath aur khush rehna chahti hu...Mujhe darr lag raha hai ki mujhe yeh khushi naseeb hogi ki nayi .

Akshara cries and hugs naitik...

Akshara: mein aapko aur humari pyari si zindagi ko chodkar jana nahi chahti... (naitik now clearly understands whats akshara fear...)

Naitik (while patting) : akshara, aap aisa sochiye mat... aapko kuch nahi hoga... mein aapke saat hi rahoonga... aapko kuch nahi hone doonga.. hum humare bache ke saat aur bhi khush rahenge... iske baare mein aap sochiye mat... aap hi kehte hai na hum ache sochenge toh acha hi hota hai.. isiliye hum sirf ache hi sochenge.. aur sab kuch acha hi hogaa...

He consoles akshara... he pats her so that she slowly gets into sleep... he also sleeps close to her to make akshara to feel more secure about her condition...

Its next morning... naitik wakes up before akshara... he tells G3 and BM not to talk anything related to delivery to akshara as she is already scared... he informs the same to vish also... after some time akshara also wakes up... He helps akshara to get ready n then soon all the maheswaries, rashmi's sasural wale, nandini, mohit everyone comes to SS... all enjoy together celebrating the festival... akshara almost forgets that her due date is on that day... By eveng everyone goes to their house.. akshara is also very tired... naitik feeds her some food and makes her sleep...

Next morning, naitik takes akshara to hospital for general checkup as akshara didn't get any pains... Doctor examines and says everything is fine and it may 2 or 3 days more for the baby to come... Both comes back home... Its aftrnoon... naitik gets a call frm trishala company to have their first meeting at Delhi...

Naitik has to start next day mrng to attend the meeting... but naitik doesn't want to attend the meeting leaving akshara at home when her delivery was due... He speaks to DJ and RB on this... DJ and RB says naitik to attend the meeting as he can return back in the evng and also doctor said it may take 2 or 3 days more for akshara's delivery... But naitik is not able to make his mind to go...

Its night... Naitik doesn't want to go and also he doesn't want to break his promise he made to akshara that he will be by her side during her delivery.. but he still didn't say abt this to akshara because he dont want to make her sad... Naitik is sitting on his bed thinking all these... akshara also comes der.. she also slow sits by his side...

Akshara: kya hua naitik? uthna kya soch rahe hai??

Naitik: kuch nai akshara... bas aise hi... aap sojayiye...

He makes akshara to sleep... he remains like that thinking... akshara also couldn't seelp properly... she is turning that side and this side...

Naitik: kya hua akshara? aapko neend nahi aa rahi hai kya??

Akshara: pata nai naitik... mujhe kuch ajeeb sa lag raha hai... bechain se ho rahi hai... kahi yeh delivery ki symptoms toh nahi hai na?

Naitik: akshara... aap kuch zyada hi soch rahi hai... doctor ne kaha na.. aur do din lagega... aap aaramse sojayiye... aur kuch mat sochiye...

Akshara: nai naitik... mujhe kuch ajeeb hai naitik.. mere dil bhi ghabara raha hai...

Naitik: akshara... sojayiye...

He tries to pat akshara so that she sleeps... akshara jst closes her eyes... but actually she is not able to sleep... she is feeling something something... naitik slowly gets into sleep... aftr some time she starts feeling some small pain in her stomach... she takes it lite and turns other side... she feels some more pain... she wakes up... she sees naitik sleeping and stops to wake him up... she thinks whether to wake him or not... but her pain is increasing...

Akshara: naitik... uthiye... uthiye naa...

Naitik alerts immediately as soon as he hears akshara's voice...

Naitik: kya hua?

Akshara: naitik... mere peth mein bahut dardh ho raha hai...

Naitik: lagta hai, yeh delivery ka pains hai...

He immediately gets out of bed and wakes up G3... G3 immediately wakes up BM... evryone wakes up... RB immediately gets the car... G3 n BM starts packing the things required by akshara and naitik lifts akshara n takes near the car... G3 asks naitik to take akshara to hospital n they will come back of them taking akshara's things...

RB is driving the car... Naitik is in the bak seat and akshara is lieing placing her head on naitik's lap... Naitik is trying console her and RB is riding the car as fast as possible... Akshara is crying out of pain... n naitik is so worried for her... soon they reach hospital... Naitik takes her on the stretcher... akshara is crying...

Akshara: naitik... mujhe bahut dar lag raha hai...

Naitik: akshara... aapko kuch nahi hoga...

He kisses akshara on her forehead... akshara calms down a little bit... doctor comes and takes akshara into labour room... Naitik is so tensed... he moves that side and this side waiting for akshara... soon G3, BM and DJ also reaches der... Naitik can hear akshara's shouts in pain.. he is very much tensed... 2 hrs passes by... still they doesn't get any news of akshara.. all r tensed and pray god for akshara's safe delivery...

Just then they hear the cute and small cry of the baby... all the eyes r filled with happiness and tears... naitik almost lost his senses aftr hearing the sound of baby cry... he jst can't explain his happinees... happiness, joy, worrying abt akshara's condition, some confused state... feeling proud to become a father... everything was der in his feelings... soon the nurse comes out of the room... naitik immediately rushes to her...

Naitik: nurse... (naitik wants to ask so many questions... abt his baby, abt akshara, what not... but he cannot ask anything... not even a single word is coming frm his mouth... nurse understands his situation..)

Nurse: congratulations sir... aapko ladka hua... 😃

Naitik feels very happy...

Naitik: meri akshara theek hai na??

Nurse: haa madam bhi bilkul theek hai... maa aur bacha dono theek hai... baby bhi healty hai...

Naitik: Thanku so much for the good news nurse... (he jst takes out his ring and gives to the nurse in happiness)

All the remaining singhania's r also very happy with the news... Naitik is overwhelmed with the joy...

Naitik: nurse... hum andar jaake akshara ko dekh sakte hai...

Nurse: haa dekh sakte hai... lekin sirf ek hi andar jaa sakte hai... todi dher baad maa aur bache ko normal room mein shift kardenge.. iske baad sab dekh sakte hai... 😃

Naitik wants to go inside... but asusual G3 is ready to go inside.. when she was abt to go she stops and remembers naitik...

G3: munna... tu andar jaa... sabse pehla bache ko dekhna ka tumhara hakh banta hai... tum ko dekhegi toh bahu bhi khush hojayegi...

Naitik feels happy n goes inside... akshara was lying on the bed... the baby was their in akshara's hands... both of their eyes r filled with tears of joy... naitik goes near to her... he pats akshara's hair and gently kisses on her forehead... he sits by her side... he places his warm hands one around akshara and the one on baby... he is jst happy to see both of his babies... akshara rests her hand on his shoulder...

Naitik: aap theek hai na akshara??

Akshara: hmm... 😊

Akshara hands the baby to naitik... Akshara is feeling so proud while giving the baby to naitik... naitik is so touched with the gentle touch of the baby... as soon as he hold the baby he feels his own blood... his feelings are not able to express in words... he is jst top of the world... akshara is silently looking into naitik's eyes with tears in her eyes, seeing his joy..

Naitik: akshara... humara bacha...

Akshara: haa naitik... humara bacha...

Naitik: akshara aap mujhe mere saare jeevan ka sab se khoobsoorath tofa diya hai...

Akshara: mujhe bhi...

He again kisses akshara on her forehead... n then both looks at their baby with tears filled eyes..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Bale bale hum first hai yaya !!!!! yaya!!! Aaj mast din hai party hi party baba
coming OS wow wow 👏 👏👏👏👏 i guess baby bhi chata ki woh aapne papa ko dekhe ish liye jaldi agagaya wow wow saru love u for this part 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗 its so wow i mean akshi scare and all was wow baby coming was bestest part hope Cv's aisa dekhaye baba 😃😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome Os saru di luvd it
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Edited by hinan.1fan_mahi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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res
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i would say very very nice attempt maate 🤗
i didnt loveee it😳 i liked it!
cant match ur previous OS😍 i m gonna read it again right now😃
the name was also superb! i dont know i cudnt recollect a hindi name only
lovely OS!
waiting for more from ur side😉

thanx for the PM😆
Edited by -Stutz- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome OS Saru!! 👏 👏 just loved it.. 😃
n isse padhke i want k aksh ko bhi aaj labour pain aa jaye.. 😆
but seriously too good.. 😃 😳 i 1st time read ur OS.. n fell in love wid it.. ❤️ 😃

n pure OS mei best line was.. after delivery..
"Naitik wants to go inside... but asusual G3 is ready to go inside.. when she was abt to go she stops and remembers naitik..."

isko padhke i was like.. 🤣 🤣


Edited by divi4u - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Stutz-

res
=edited=
i would say very very nice attempt maate 🤗
i didnt loveee it😳 i liked it!
cant match ur previous OS😍 i m gonna read it again right now😃
the name was also superb! i dont know i cudnt recollect a hindi name only
lovely OS!
waiting for more from ur side😉

thanx for the PM😆


hey chotu... I want to keep name in hindi... thats y I didn't use ur suggested names... ur names r also so good... I tried to convert ur english name to hindi... but I couldn't frame the words... so jst thought of yeh rishta songs and kept this...😊

I'm glad that u liked the part😃... n haa its not dat good as compared to my previous OS...may be I couldn't explain properly of whatever I felt...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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saru thanks dear it was good atleast v can imagine nk was with her loved it going to miss nk there
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Saru its superb 👍🏼 im speechless...u explained thir emotions very cutely...its a beautiful OS saru ...kaash cvs ye dekhthe and padhe...tho hame bhi ek cute sa part mil jaayega dekhneko😊 well done saru 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: saru.g


hey chotu... I want to keep name in hindi... thats y I didn't use ur suggested names... ur names r also so good... I tried to convert ur english name to hindi... but I couldn't frame the words... so jst thought of yeh rishta songs and kept this...😊

I'm glad that u liked the part😃... n haa its not dat good as compared to my previous OS...may be I couldn't explain properly of whatever I felt...


just completed reading the other OS.. i still loved it😃
arrey i was also thinking of hindi names.. kuch strike hi nai hua.. and i also cudnt translate the suggestions😆
chalo.. m sleeping and then studying! loads of HW for tomo! bye 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Stutz-


just completed reading the other OS.. i still loved it😃
arrey i was also thinking of hindi names.. kuch strike hi nai hua.. and i also cudnt translate the suggestions😆
chalo.. m sleeping and then studying! loads of HW for tomo! bye 🤗


ok chotu... sleep well and study well... today also I forgot to recharge... actually today I came to ofc in saree.. so forgot in the hurry... even I'll talk to u... 😃

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