Kab mitenge yeh faasle - Naksh One shot - Page 6

Originally posted by: pari1508

Saru, 🤗
This is ur best writing ever.. 👏 i super duper ❤️ it.. It made me cry seriously.. 😭 I am actually falling short of words now.. But it was the best emotional os i have ever come across..
Kaha se itni great ideas lati ho yaar? I am totally spell bound ovr whatever u have written, it just cant better..
Yaar plz found out some way n let cvs read this one, it will be gr8 to see naksh enacting this scene on screen..
I dnt know how gud is my comment written above😆 as i m still not gtg ovr the scn.. 😭

hey pari🤗... first of all sorry for the late comment... I was out of town for 2 days... so I was late in replying here...
I'm so happy to read ur comment.. Thanku so much for the compliments... n finally I made all of u to cry... I also would like to see these type of scenes between but seeing the synopsis n today's epi I can understand that their patch up will be different... I jst hope cv's make good use of the diary akshara's writing... they can actually use that for many good purposes... lets wait n see what they will that for... 😃

n dont worry... ur comment is soo sweet... loved it... 😃

Originally posted by: madhaviben

🤗👍🏼❤️ Saru good very good. i loved it jo main CV se dekhna chahati thi tune dikhaya. so thanks and love it . great work. keep it up. now one promiss when ever they show akshi cry you will make her smile in your OS.

madhavi di.. 🤗.. I'm so happy to see ur comment here n so happy that u liked the OS... I also want to see akshi always happy n smiling... I'll definately write OS in future too to make akshi smiling... I promise... 😃

Originally posted by: moonlight08

aww..

this is just soo good saru di!🤗

i tried soo hard throughout the story to control my tears, but reading the last line of ur one-shot.. i just lost.. my emotions overpowered.. i lved ur one shot to the core! one of the best i have ever read.. thanks for this di!

love u!

hey kaumudi🤗.. I'm glad to know that u r able to feel the emotions which I have written... n Thanku so much for the compliments... 😃

Originally posted by: sush00naksh

saru its to good i hope cv ise pade or coming track me dale love the ak diary n nk soory note for baby n ak..speechless It brought tears in my eyes...beautifully written.its tuch my hurt thanks for sharing .i hope u cont...

Thanku sush... I'm glad that u liked the os... 😃

Originally posted by: stuti_naksh4eva

😭😭😭 dnt worry di... i m not crying... i m sooo happy... i dnt have tears in my eyes... but i m very happy reading ur reply😃 I LOVE YOU TOOO🤗 i m sooo happy... we made each others day😆😉

regarding how u wrte the part... i wud just say... however u had managed to write... it came out AWESOME... and thats more important...

regarding the pm... some things cant be helped!!😡🤢 and yup... u ARE the winner... already😆

i dnt know how will i live for 3 days without u😭😭 come back soon na... plzzz...

love u too chotu... finally I came back... I still remember how my frnds teased me thinking that u r a boy when I'm talking to u... even though I said u r a girl they didn't believe... 😆😆... n when I said to listen ur voice they r like, boys can easily change their n talk like girl n we wont believe u... rofl... 😆😆😆... I dont know whether they doubt me so much even if I'm really talking to my boy frnd if I had one... lol... 😆😆...

Originally posted by: preksha_naksh

wow wow wat and emotional one shot ever read all the moments wer so swwet woh diary ke parts wow can imagine the scene with dialouges i was totlally impressed with the way u wrote really lovely part :)

Thanku so much pree... happy to read ur comment n so glad that u liked the part... 😃

@harinhari, meena, prachi, sameera: Thanku so much guyss... I'm glad that u liked it... 😃

Originally posted by: Rachana_naksh_

haii saru🤗

its vry nice that u wrote os nenu expect cheyaledu nd pm chusi i was😲😲 nd part chala bagundi u wrote it superub... emotions baga chupinchavu episode lo ila jarigite baguntundi kada...😛

nd i felt little emotional will reading the part😭 nd the book one naku baga nachindi the way u described it was superub saru👏 nd for that🤗 nd naitik realisng his mistake i loved it a lot...😛 naku enduko episode lo kuda alage avtudi ani anipistundi nenu nina nite nunchi anukuntunanu that naitik will read her dairy 😃 nd he will realise it😆nd once again nice one saru i liked it a lot nd nvu eppudina ff update cheste na mobl ke msg cheyva...😛

thanks for pm😊

tc...<3

hey rachu... nenu anukokunda appatiki appudu anukuni rasanu... ela ante naku asalu rase time kuda ledu... kani idea bagundi... raste bagundu anipinchindi thursday night kurchuni rasanu... stuti kuda ventane edit chesi ichesindi... friday ayithe full busy ofc lo... post cheyyalenemoo anukunna... kani finally I posted... niku nachinanduku naku chal happy ga undi...

n sorry rachu... naku guntur ravadame kudaraledu... sunday vaddam anukunna kani frnds andaru beach beach ani machilipatnam beach ki tisukellaru... so ravadam kudaraledu... call kuda cheddam anukunna kani... maa frnds nenu call matladdam start cheste chalu nenu edi abbayitho matladutunna ani edipistunnaru... stuti tho matladithe kuda chala edipincharu... so call cheyyaledu... ivala vachanu kani... ofc lo totally busy... niku repu or ellundi pakka okaroju call chestanu😃... naku diwali ki holiday ledu...

Originally posted by: shweta31

i cant express di how fantastically it was written i was completely lost in the part while reading as it was happening in the serial only...😛hope cvs will show something like this only however in some other way...😃

the way u have exressed the emotions of naksh wonderful...😍akshi decides to give space to naitik also naitik's realization on seeing akshi like this was great...😛then his emotions while reading diary simply superb...😃akshi shocked seeing naitik canged behaviour so cute...😉when akshi read diary last page which was written so beautifully by naitik fantastic...⭐️in last naksh way of expressing their love...😳amazing di!!!!!!!!!!!!!🤗

hey sweta🤗... thanku so much for the compliments... I'm very much glad that u liked the OS...😃

Originally posted by: _naksh_raz

WOW Saru di,This OS was the best ever,i ever read...it was mixed with so many emotions and woww...loved it

I loved the diary writing parts and those were so emotional..i almost dropped a tear drop here and there..its good Naitik read it..and the LAST latter from Naitik was also good,Hope something in sort happens

Thanks for the PM

Love Raz

thanku so much for the compliments raz... 🤗.. I'm so glad that u liked the part... love u too raz... 😃🤗