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nahtani88

@nahtani88

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Posted: 13 years ago

#211

lovely update
cont soon
thanks 4 the pm

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Posted: 13 years ago

#212

Hey asha, really nice part.. Loved it.. How you manage to write so long parts that too totally interesting.. I never felt bored while writing such a long part.. Sach me u r brillient yaar..
one thing i loved is u have portayed karan akshara naitik bonding so beautifully that one can connect with their scenes easily..
Try n continue soon.. U didnt pm me this time.. Plz next time jarur pm karna..

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soni4eva

@soni4eva

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Posted: 13 years ago

#213

awsum update luv it

cnt w8 2 read more

plzz cont soon x fanx 4 da pm 😊

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ZaaraBB

@ZaaraBB

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Posted: 13 years ago

#214

Aww such a cute update..it was awesome. The way naksh handled Karan, both are needed..Naitik is able to handle easily as he is they to take care him just ONE day but Akshi is everyday nah..i was so eagerly waiting for your update Asha..Thank You so much for the PM..You made my day..LOL..i read something BESIDES doing my own projects..mind break there..Thanks

Loved it and loved the way Akshara wants Attention too so sweet

Do continue quickly

Raz

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sushma

@sush4frndz

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#215

nmetha hote hai.its really nice nk n karan bounding.

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sona_naksh

@sona_naksh

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#216

awesum update👏 luvd each n every part ⭐️ do update ur next part as soon as possible😃

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geetika

@geetu_naksh

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#217

awesome part👍🏼

loved each and every part😊😊

thanks for pm

continue soon...

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466726

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Posted: 13 years ago

#218

Better late than never...😆
I know ur busy and lately troubled by your net...so no worries & sorries...update when u hv time...😃

Coming to the latest update...awesome as usual...😃 Actually I'm falling short of words...so many beautiful adjectives I have used for ur FF and your writting that there is none left...😆 Do update whenever it is possible for u and thanks for the PM🤗

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Shruthi

@shruthi.sweety

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#219

once again superb part asha👍🏼. feeling short of words to comment.
really adored naitik for his father role.hope i get to see this side of naitik even in the show.
loved every part.
waiting for another fabulous update.😊

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Rana yasmin

@devakshi19

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#220

finally u updated.luvd ur update to the core. sorry thoda late hogaya. i luvd this update mainly becoz u showed the importance of a father in a child's life. it shows that a mother is not enough to raise a good child, a father is equally important too. i luv naitik's character. he is the best hubby and father. luvd naksh romance as well. and akshi's jalan was awesome. thanks for the pm. luvd this part:k:pappa'dekhiye mein kitne ache se khel raha hoo'

natik noticed that akshi was losing intensionally'

nt:ye kya pa janpoochkar kyon har rah h'

ak:kuch nah..dekhiye na issa karne se karan ki chehre par kitni khushi h..mujhe aur kya chahiye'.

Nt;ap kyon bacche ko bigad rah ho..jabi koi game kheltha h ap usse jitha dethe h'issa karne se kuch nah milega..balki ap bahuth galath kar rah h..

Ak:nt..mein toh bas'karan ki khushi keliye..ap issa kyon bol raha h..

Nt:mujhe pata h akshara..agar ap hamesha issa karoongi toh usse lagega ki vo apni mehnath par jaath rah h jabki ye bilkul galath h..usse b haar(lose) ki side dekhne digiye'.tabi toh hamara bacha har mushkil se ladna seekhenge..

Akshi nodded as if she also agrres 2 it'

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