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Posted: 13 years ago
pls post ur next part eagerly waiting
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Posted: 13 years ago
sory al ,taking 2 much of time,but 4 u al i wil update 2morow and i promise it was ofcorse an worth waiting part..u could se the beuty of their relation
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: i4naksh

sory al ,taking 2 much of time,but 4 u al i wil update 2morow and i promise it was ofcorse an worth waiting part..u could se the beuty of their relation


ashattiye...inu kittumo...net sariyayillallo...pinne enigine cheyyum? mobilil ithokke cheyyan pattumo
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Posted: 13 years ago

sorry 4 being late...this part was exclusively dedicated 2 my one @ only lakshmi diii...love u very much...🤗


part 25

morning scen

A week passed,naksh get in 2 their normal routine..still they tried 2 spend with each other @ also with karan..
2day was sunday...
natik @ karan were still sleeping..akshi came 2 wake up them..hearing her sound they covered themself with blanket...
ak:lo..subah ho gay..aur ye donom ab tak nah uda..😡
she came @ laid near karan
ak:karan...ud jaa...kitni der ho gay..😊
he become disturbed @ began 2 cry...
k:mamma...😭
ak:ismein rone ki kya baat h...ache bacche na jaldi ud jathe h aur mera karan toh sabse ache h...
he opened his eyes..he looked at natik who was still sleeping
k:mamma...pappa b so rah h na..mujhe b sona h..
ak:pappa ko b udayenge pehle tum ud jaa..phir hum donom milkar pappa ko udayenge...
k:nah pappa ko pehle udawo..bhadh mein mein..he again went under the sheets..😡
ak:acha teek h...
she came near natikk @ huggd him 4m back by placing her head oh his shoulder
ak:good morning...😳
she kisses on his cheek..he instead pulled her @ laid above her by placing his head on her chest...she smiled @ ruffled his hair...
nt:kya akshara ap subah subah udane agay...
ak:subah kaham...8 baj gay
nt:toh kya huwa?aj sunday h na...
ak:koi bahana nah chalega...
she sat up along with him..his head was still on her chest..
nt:ap bahuth bure h
ak:acha...toh hatiye...
nt:nah...acha ap ye batayiye..mein toh apne office ke kam se thakar itna so rah h aur ye ladka itna kyon so rah h...iski tapeeyath toh teek h na..
ak:vo kya h na apki tarah isse b apni subah ki neendh pyaari h...ab mein isse b jaga dethi hoo...
she stood up 2 go...soon he again laid on the bed
ak:nt..ye kya h ...
nt :ak..pls...5 minute..ap pehle karan ko uda🥱 digiye...bhadh mein pakka ud jawoonga..
ak:ap donom na mujhe pareshan karne ka ek b mauka nah chodthe...
like that she tried 2 wake them but at each time they made excuses..atlast she got iritated @ angrily came 2wards karan @ take him in her hands...
ak:bas karan aur kitni der soyenge?😊
k;mamma..ap pappa ko b uda sakthe the na phir sirf mujhe hi kyon?😡
ak:tum aur tere pappa donom natakbas h...😡
k:mein toh ud gay na ab pappa ki baari h...😡😡
ak:hm...dekhna ab kaise pappa jald se udkar hamare pass athe hein😉
he nodded
ak:tum pehle ude h na..toh tumhe ek special gift milega...😃(looking at natik)
natik opened his one eye @ looked at her😉
ak:mere bacche keliye mamma ki taraf se jadu ki jhappy aur meeti si puppy...
karan was feeling great after receiving this great gift 4m akshi @ ofcorse natik was sad..he fastly came near akshi
nt:mujhe b do na...
ak:apko?ligiye
she pinched on his nose
nt:ouch..
he again laid on her lap after placing karan on his chest

Doodh pilana'.

Akshi came with milk 4 karan..he was playing in the hall'seeing her,he began 2 ran away 4m her'

Ak:karan..rukh jawo..ligiye'doodth pena..a ja'

K:mamma..mujhe nah chahiye'mujhe doodth acha nah lagtha'

Ak:isse nah bolthe..a jaa'mamma ka beta h na'

K:nah'mein pappa ka beta hoo'..mujhe doodth nah chahiye..ap sunthe kyon nah..

Ak:agar pappa ayenge na toh tumhe dantenge'isiliye jaldi se akar ye khatam karo'

Soon natik also came..he ran 2wards him @ began 2 complaint about akshi'

K:pappa'dekho na..mamma'toh mere peeche hi pad gay'mamma ko datiye na'

Nt:haa'chaliye hum baitkar bath karthe h..

Trio sat on the sofa'karan was in natiks lap

Nt;ab batawo kya problem h'

K:pappa..pappa..mamma na ajkal mujhe bahuth pareshan karthein h..mujhe datthe rehthe h..har vakth koi na koi cheez lekar mere peeche a jathe h aur na..mujhe darathe b h'

He angrily looked at her'

Nt:acha'meina tumhari mamma ki kabar lenge'.

He naughtliy winked at akshi..😉

Ak:nt..ap hi samjhayina'ye 2 din se doodth nah pee raha h'

Nt:kya ???2 din se???karan ye mein kya sun raha hoo'itni nakhre b achi nah h'

K:vo pappa..aj kal na mamma mujhe cup mein dooth dethe h..vo mujhe bilkul pasand nah h ..mujhe feeding bottle(fb) mein peena h'

Ak:natik..docter ne hi kaha tha ki ab fb mein nah cup mein dene ko'.

Nt:kyon??

Ak:vo iski dath aa rah h na isilye'.par ye sunthe h nah h..bas zid pakadkar baite h..

K:mamma'mein ziddi nah hoo..😡

Ak:h'koi chota mota nah balki bahuth bada ziddi hoo'.

K:pappa'😭

Nt:teek h..akshara ap jakar iski fb lekar awo..

Ak"nt..ap b'

Nt:ak'ap lekar toh ayiye'

She came with his fb..karan was happy 2 see his fb..he fastly take it 4m her'.

Nt;ab khush h na..

He nodded'

Nt:par tumhe pata h ismein dooth peene se kya hoga?

Karan doubtfully looked at him

Nt:ismein dooth peene se na tumhari ye pyari pyari dath h na vo toot jayenge..

K:kya'.

His eyes get bulged..he touched his teeth'

Nt:aur jab ye dooth tumhari pet ki andar pahuncenge toh pet dard hoga'aur ye pet dard door karne keliye hume docter ke pass jana padega'aur doctor uncle na tumhe injection denge..toh tum rone lagoge'aur tumhe chup karane keliye'ek aur injection doonga'

K:sach pappa??😭

Nt:haa'.ye bottle na bahuth bura h'isilye tumhi isse feko'

He unwillingly throwed the bottle'

K:ye bure h na'mujhe nah chahiye..jawo'.mere pass mat ana'

Natik become happy he kisses on his 4head

Nt:good boy'dekhiye akshara..mera baccha kitna samajhdar h'.

Ak:toh iss samajhdar bacche se dooh pilakar dikhado'

Nt:zaroor..karan mamma ko dikhado ki tum kitna smart ho😉'

He 4warded the cup but he pushed it away

K:pappa ap itna b nah samjhthe..agar fb bura h toh doodth b bura hoga na'😛

Ak:lo..apki baccha bahuth samjhdar nikli'😔

Nt:karan'issa nah h..doodth bahuth acha hotha h..

K:toh mujhe kya..mein nah pewwonga'.😡

Ak:itni mehnath na doodth invent karne mein scientist ko b nah lagaya hoga'

Nt;teek h..ye sab chodiye..ye batawo ki tumhe pappa ki tarah banana h ya apni maa ki tarah'

He thought 4 a while'@ he huugd natik..

K:pappa'.😃

Nt:haa'agar meri tarah banana h toh ye dooth peene padega..tabi pappa ki tarah smart aur intelligent ban pawoge'aur dekhiye pappa ki muscles'😉

Akshi 4warded the cup @ he completed it hearing his pappas talks'

K:ab mein dooth pee gay na toh muscles kyon nah ayi..

Ak:ek din peene se kuch nah hotha'tumhe har roz peena padega'.

K:roz'nah chahiye mujhe muscles'mujhe nah peena koi dooth vooth'

He ran away 4m them'.

kitchen masti

@kitchen
natik came along with karan..
nt;ak..aj hum b apki madath karenge...
ak:nah natik..mein samaloongi..ap donom jakar aram se baitiye...
nt:nah...hame b koi kam digiye...ham karlenge..
k:haa,,mamma,,,hum b apki madath karenge...
ak:teek h..
she handed a bunch of vegetables 2 natik...
ak:ligiye natik...pehle isse saaf karna bhadh mein katna...
nt:itne saare sabsiyam...ye ajkeliye h ya phir poore hafthe keliye...
aak;apko madath karne ki bahuth shok h na ..toh karo...
nt:ye achi dadagiri h...
k:mamma mujhe b koi kam do na...
she came near him
ak:mere bache kam karne ki koi zaroorat nah h uskeliye pappa h na...
nt:ye kya baat ho gay mujhe itne saare sabsiyam katne di aur iskeliye ek b kam nah h..
ak:aur nah toh kya..mein apne bacche se thodi na kam karwawoongi,,,
nt:hm...dekh rah hoo maa beta ka pyaar...😆
k:phir b mamma mujhe b kam karna h...
ak:dekha natik..isse kehthe h sacha pyaar..meine mana karne ki bavjooth b ye meri madath karna chahthe h...teek h beta...tumhareliye ek khas kam h..tumna ye dekhna ki pappa ache se kam kar rah h ya nah..agar nah ki toh ache se daat lena...teek h

he was very happy with his new job...akshi went outside...
karan was carefully watching natik @ was giving instructions...
k;pappa teek se kato na😕

'nt:hm...😊
k:pappa..isse nah chote chote karkar😛
nt:teek h...😊
k:pappa itna b chota nah h...😛
nt:tu chupkar ..mujhe pata h...
k:oh..pappa..ye isse nah ...mamma na isee lamba lamba 😛karkar katthe h...
4 his mistake..he hitted him...😡
k"dhyan se nah kar skathe the...😡

nt"oye...ek toh maze mein baite h upar se koi kam b nah kar rah h aur mujhe sikhane agay..mein na ye sab bahuth kar chuke h...mujhe mat sikha...😡
k:toh phir ab kyon teek se nah ki.😭..
nt:chupkar..agar aur behas ki na toh tujhe chota pumpkin samajhkar katkar sabsi mein dall doonga...
karan was double shocked...1rstly becoz of his anger @ 2ndly becoz of his new name pumpkin...soon he started crying askhi came hearing this...😲😲
ak:karan kya huwa...tum ro kyon rah h...natik kya huwa..😲
nt:kuch nah akshara..😊
ak:toh phir ye itna udas kyon h?😕
k:mamma..mamma...pappa na mujhe bahuth datta..aur mujhe pumpkin kaha...😭
ak:kya...ye kya h natik,,,nah nah karan rona mat...😲
nt:nah akshara mein toh..
ak:bas natik..ye konsi angle se pumpkin ki tarah dikhtha h?😡
nt:h na golu molu par mein toh galathi se bol gay tha...💔
ak:nt..galathi se...ap honge golu molu...aur haa...mere bacche ko nazar mat lagayiye..☯️.
k;maa..mein golu molu h kya..😕
ak:nah karan...mera bacche sabse best h..uma...aur tum chota pumkin h toh tere pappa bada pumpkin h...
k:haa..😊
ak:haa...😃
he smiled a little😊
k:aur pata h ma..pappa na apko pappita bula rah tha...
he smiled at natik..😉.
nt:kya...nah akshara ye jhoot h mein apke baare men kuch b nah kaha..😲.
k:nah maa...bola tha...😛sachi...
she angrily take all the vegetables @ put it on him...
ak:mein papita ki tarah dikthi h...aj mein apko nah chodoonga...ap mere baare mein isse socthi h...ab mujhe apse koi baath nah karni h...😡😡
she hold his collar @ began 2 fight..
nt;ak..mein sach keh rah hoo..chodiye mujhe...dekhiye vo kaise has raha h...vo jhoot bol raha h...
she looked at him..@ understood that he was telling truth...
ak:phir b apki galathi h...😳
nt;acha ji...ab ap itne der mujhe mar rah thi uska kya...
ak:kuch nah ye mera haq h...ap donom na mujhe pagal bana denge...
karan was still angry at natik..he want 2 do some another mischevious so he take the atta which she kept 4 making roti @ put it on natik...
k;ab ap bhooth b h...white bhooth...h na maa...
akshi was stunned 2 see him in this white avatar...@ with in second she began 2 laugh
ak:kaise lag rah h na ap...🤣
natik got angry..
nt:abi batatha hoo..😲
he traced them,,,,they ran away 4m him...karan ran 2wards dj*s room @ akshi 2wards their room..natik followed akshi...
@balcony...
natik was still tracing akshi @ she was cleverly escaping 4m him...inbetween she lost balance @ bumped in 2 sofa...natik become happy @ take a dive @landed above her...
nt:hm...
ak:nt...chodiye...😳
nt:abi kaise choddom..abi abi toh aya h...ap mere hath mein...😉
akshi blushed...☺️
nt:neeche apko bahuth hasi aa rahi thi na...ab dekhiye mein kya kartha hoo...😉
he shaked his head @ the half of the atta powder falls on him...he spreads it 2 other parts by caressing her...she closed her eyes seeing him approachinng 2wards her...he planted kisses on her cheeks leaving his lip prints on her cheek...he caresses her neck @ shoulder using the powder which was on his face...
nt;ab teek h lag raha h na ek dum mere type ki bhoothni...ap chintha mat kigiye mein hi isse saaf karke doonga...😉
he bent down 2wards her neck @ started kisiing passionately there by removing the powder..akshi couldnt controll 4m blushing so she pushed him @ sat up
ak:dhatt...☺️
he also got up...
ak;ap na...suddently karan came..
k:mamma ap yaham h...
natik takes him in his lap...
nt:mein bhoodh ki tarah diktha hoo na...
karan nodded @ teased him by smiling🤣...natik takes some powder @ rubbed it on his cheeks @ nose..
nt:ab dekho...ekdum joker ki tarah dikh rah h...agar koi circus wale dekhenge na toh tujhe udakar le jawoonga...
k:mamma...
ak:nha nah karan...natik iska khayal rakhna..mein ajkar khan banathi hoo..aur haa..khayal rakhne keliye kaha h naki jagadne keliye
nt:ji...boss...

chooha..billi...aur bandariya...(rat.cat@monkey)

akshi was trying 2 feed karan..but was showing his usual tantrums...
ak:karan..thoda sa toh khaa...kyon mamma ko pareshan kar rah h...
k:mujhe ye nah chahiye...mujhe chawal pasand nah h..mujhe roti do...
ak:roti...jo atta mein roti banane keliye raktha tha vo tumhi ne udakar pappa par fek diya na...isiliye aj roti nah bana pay..aj ye chawal hi khana padega...dekhiye pappa b kha rah h..ap hi samkjhayina...
he takes him @ placed him on the table...@tried 2 feed him...
k:pappa...mujhe nah chahiye...
nt;acha teek h
ak:nt...ap bi...
nt:ek minute akshara,,,,teek h karan ham ek game khelthe h
karan doubtfully looked at him
k:par mujhe ye nah khana...
nt:haa,,,,vaise b ab ye food tera nah h,...
he rolled tthe chawal in 2small small balls @ made such 5 balls...
nt:ye chooha aur billi ki khel h jismein tum chooha aur mein billi..ye sab na billi ki food h yani meri...
k:haa...ap khawo..mujhe nah chaiye...
nt:aur tumhe toh pata h na chooha aur billi ek dooosre ki dushman h..aur jab billi so raha hotha h na toh chooha chupkar billi ki food khathe h ...ab hum dekhthe h ki billi choohe ko pakad pathe h ya nah
k:ha...
billi(natik)closed his eyes.@ actted as if he was sleeping..karan naughtliy takes 1 ball @ ate it..natik waited till him gulping his food @ then opened his eyes...
nt:muahhh

he looked at the chawal balls...
nt:ye kya h..mera toh 5 balls tha na phir ab kaise 4 ho gay...shayadh meine h khaya hoga...chalo koi baat nah so jathe h...
he again closed his eyes
karan fastly eat another 1...natik opens his eyes...
nt:ab toh ek aur b kam ho gay..ye kya ho raha h...ab 3 balls h...agli baar dekthe h...
he went 2 his sleep...karan put another piece in his mouth as soon natik opened his eyes...he tried 2 hide the food which was in his mouth..he sat with a puppy face...
nt:arrey...phir se ek gayab ho gay...kon mera food chura rah h...
he doubtfully looked at karan @ then fastly diverted his attention 2 akhsi...
nt;kai ye bhandariya toh nah..nazar rakhna padega...
akshi was very angry with him...but she didnt tell anything ..he noticed it @ winked his eyes at her@again fall in n2 sleep...
karan had enough food still he took another peice becoz he likd the game...
nt:oh...phirse chori...ye choohe par b nazar rakhna padega...ye bahuth chalak h...
he was about 2 close his eyes when he tried 2 take the food suddently natik caught him
nt;pakad gay...toh tum ho...hey chooha...tumhari itni himath..tum mera saara khana kha liya h na..ab mein tujhe hi khatha hoo...
he takes him @ tried 2 bit him...
nt:wahhh...kitna yummy h..aj toh mein tumhe poora kha jawoonga...
k:nah billi mama..mein toh karan hoo...apki food toh vo chooha ne kahaya tha na...

nt:phir bi mujhe book lag rah h mein tujhe hi kha jatha hoo'

k:agar mere pappa agay na toh tujhe mar dallonga..chodiye mujhe varna mein apne pappa se teri shikayath karoonga..

nt:toh kaham h tera pappa'.

He hugged him

K:yaham h''

they smiled at his cutish talks...

karans victory''

akshi @ karan were palying snake @ ladder by sitting in their garden(outside ss)..natik also came by searching them'

nt;ap donom yaham h'

he sat beside akshi'

k:pappa'dekhiye mein kitne ache se khel raha hoo'

natik noticed that akshi was losing intensionally'

nt:ye kya pa janpoochkar kyon har rah h'

ak:kuch nah..dekhiye na issa karne se karan ki chehre par kitni khushi h..mujhe aur kya chahiye'.

Nt;ap kyon bacche ko bigad rah ho..jabi koi game kheltha h ap usse jitha dethe h'issa karne se kuch nah milega..balki ap bahuth galath kar rah h..

Ak:nt..mein toh bas'karan ki khushi keliye..ap issa kyon bol raha h..

Nt:mujhe pata h akshara..agar ap hamesha issa karoongi toh usse lagega ki vo apni mehnath par jaath rah h jabki ye bilkul galath h..usse b haar(lose) ki side dekhne digiye'.tabi toh hamara bacha har mushkil se ladna seekhenge..

Akshi nodded as if she also agrres 2 it'

Nt:karan'tu mujhe harakar dikha..tab mein man jawoonga ki tum bahuth smart h'

K:teek h pappa'

They started a new game'natik was playing sincerely'karan also tries 2 play well but he couldn't so he tried 2 do some mischevious along with some cheating'.he will shake his pappas hand whenevre he tries 2 rool the dice'

Nt:karan..cheating mat kar'

Karan was trying 2 win but at eachtime when he tries 2 climb the ladder'snake would eat him..he was very diaappointed with it'

K:mamma'har baar ye snake mujhe h kyon kha jatha h..isse kahao na ki ab jakar apne pappa ko khane ko'

Ak:karan..tum hi jetenge..mamma tumhare sath h'ache se khelo'

K:hm'.

Atlast natik won @ karan lost in their game'he couldn't bear it as he always used 2 win

K:maa'mein har gaya'.

Akshi takes him..

Ak:nah nah'karan..itni choti si baat keliye koi rotha h kya..agli baar nah tumhi jeetoge..

He was still crying..natik also felt bad'he brought him in his lap'

Nt:arrey'ek baar har gay toh kya hoga?pappa h na'pappa tumko sikhayenge'ab hum donom sath mein khelnge'

They started another game'natik gave him enough instructions..karan carefully followed it'.in between he cheered karan 2 increase his spirit'

Nt:sabash mera baccha'.isse hi khelna'dekhna..hum hi jeethenge..

Karan nodded happily'

Ak:natik'ap mujhe b help kigiye'mein bi apki patni hooo'

Nt:nah nah'aj toh mein sirf apne bete ko support karoonga.

Ak:acha..ap donom ek ho gay teek h..

Nt:karan 'dice zor se roll karna'6 ana chahiye'toh hum b jeethenge'..

Akshi tried 2 divert his attention by making some noises'

Ak:ohh'

K:pappa dekhiye na'

Natik hold her ears nt:ap mere bacche ko tang kar rah h'

He tried but failed..his face turned down'

Nt:na na beta..udas mat ho..iss baar nah aya toh kya huwa..agli baar zaroor 6 hi ayenge'

K:ye sab mamma ki vajah se'

Nt:choda na tum ach se khelo'

And it was their final turn'

Nt:karan..all the best'

He kisses on his head'

He rolled the dice @ atlast ""6""came @ he wins'karan was very exited he turned 2wards natik @ hugged him tightly'

K:thank u' thank u' thank u' thank u' thank u'pappa'I love you'.i love u so much'

He set off a chain of kisses on his face'natiks eyes also filled with tears seeing his happiness'akshi was also happy see it'.

How 2 wink ur eyes???
@naksh bed room
akshi came 2 there @ saw karan @ natik fighting...
ak:ab kis bath ko lekar ladai ho rah h...

Nt:akshara'mujhe ye beech mein sone nde rah h..
k:mamma..aj mujhe ap donom ki beech mein sona h
ak:natik sone digiye na..baccha h...
nt:sirf dekhne mein.kya ak ap hamesha isko hi support karthi h...mujhe beech mein sona h...
ak:pehle mujhe bed teek karne digiye bhadh mein decide karthe h...
they got down 4m bed..they waited till akshi preparing their bed..natik @ karan ..both were ready 2 jump in 2 the bed as soon as she allows..karan noticed that natik was standing near the bed so he couldn't raech 1rts..an idea strucked in his mind'

Ak:ab karo jo karna h'

Natik was about 2 take a jump but be4 that karan began 2 scream

K:pappa'cockroach'

Natik looked around..in this gap'he easily climbed in 2 the bed @ laid on the middle posstion..

K:me 1rst me 1rst'

Nt:kaham h cockroac'

K:mujhe kya pata'.honge apne ghar mein'

Nt;acha cheater'..hat..mein hi beech mein sowoonga..

K:maa..dekhiye na..mujhe pareshan kar raha h'

Ak:natik'ab jane digiye na..chaliye hum b so jathe h'

They came on either side of karan'karan noticed that his pappa was still angry with him..he naughtly winked his eyes although he doesn't knw how 2 wink his eye'natik laughed out seeing his acts'

Nt:karan..agar nah pata h toh kyon bekar mein khoshish kar rah h'awo..mein ye b sikhatha hoo'

He pulled him near 2 him'

Nt;ab ek ankh bhandh karo'.

Karan tried but he couldn't..

Nt:donom nah'sirf ek'dekhiye issee..

He showed one oh his cutest wink'but karan couldn't imitate it..

Nt;ab mein teri ek eye cover kartha hoo..

He covered his one eye @ he easily blinked the other one..slowly he learned'

Nt:haa'ab teek h..mamma ko b dikha do'

K:mamma'

He winked his eye but failed

K:nah mamma ab dekho'.

He did it with a cute smile'.

K:kaisa h?

Ak:bilkul apne pappa ki tarah ..

She kisses on his cheeks

Ak:ab jaldi se so jaa'.

Nt:mujhe b chahiye..meine sikhayatha toh mera b haq bantha h..

He pointed his cheeks'

She fastly gave another peck'.

Ak:jo b kaho ap zyada cute h'

Nt:kya kare..mein h hi itna handsome'.

Ak:agar koi aur nah h toh'

Nt:ap meri value kabhi samajh nah payenge'good night'

akshis jhalan...

she noticed that karan was already in his deep sleep'she carefully got up 4m bed @ came 2wards natiks side'he felt his presesnce behind him'

nt:bhai'ye chamatkar kaise ho gaya?achanak se itna pyaar'

ak:achanak se nah bahuth der se soch raha tha lekin mauka hi nah mila'.

Nt:mauka nah mila ya mereliye apke pass time h nah h..

Ak:mere pass'ajkal ap bahuth busy ho gay h natik...

Nt;achaa'ab meri galthi h..ab iss bath par zyada baat karoongi toh aur ladai hongi..isiliye jane digiye'teek h..toh batayiye kya baath h'

She turned him'@ tightly kisses on his both cheeks by looking at him @ softly ruffles his hair'

Ak:aj apne proof kar diya ki ap sirf ek perfect pati hi nah balki usse bi kai zyada perfect pappa h'aj apka ye roop dekhkar kujhe bahuth acha laga'ap karan ki ek ek zid ko kitni achi tarah se samala..sach natik..aj mein bahuth khush hoo'.

Nt:ab ye sab baatein'kyon'

Ak:bas man kiya'ye hamari khush kismat h ki ap hamari zindangi mein hein'

She embraced him realising his importance in her life'.he could really felt it'.

Nt:I love u both..

Ak:we 2 love you'.

She raised her head'.

Ak:ab mein nah hongi b'..

He fastly placed his fingures on her lips..

Nt:ye kya ak'ab issi batein karne ki kya zaroorat thi??jayiye mujhe apse koi baath nah karni..

Ak: acha baba sorry..chaliye bahar tehelkar athe h'

He become mischevious'

Nt:bahar?? nah'.

Ak:kyon'ap har roz kitna zid kartha h..phir aj kyon nah'.

Nt:vo kya h na 'aj mein bahuth thak gay'bas sona chatha hoo'

Ak:nt..chaliye bas 5 minute keliye h sahi'hum jaldi vapas ajyenge'

Nt:nah..akshara'mujhe acha nah lag rah h'

Ak:kya acha nah lag rah h?mein ya bahar jana'.

Nt:hm'.apke sath bahar jana'.

Ak:teek h..toh mujhe b nah jana'mein jaa rah hoo'

He holds her hand @ pulled her inturn she falls on him

Nt:kaham???

Ak;apko kya..apko toh ab mere sath time spend karna acha nah lagtha h na'

Nt:haa..toh'.

Ak:dekha'chodiye mujhe..i hate you'

Nt:ab ek second pehle I love you bola tha vo ab I hate you ban gaya..apse koi kaise pyaar karega'.phir b mein adjust kar rah hoo..

Ak:adjust?/apko itni takleef udani ki zaroorat nah h..chodiye mein khudhi chali jathi hoo..

Nt:acha..toh jawo na'mein konsa apko pakadkar rakha h'

She noticed that she was holding him tight..

Ak:nah jawoongi toh kya karoge'

Nt:ap mujhse ladne aye h'..mujhe neendh aa rah h..sone digiye'.

Ak:sona h'nah sone doongi'.

Nt:kya akshara bacchom jaisi harkatein kar rah h'

Ak:mein dekh raha hoo ki ap apko meri zaroorat nah h'

She slowly began 2 hit him by complaining'.he tries 2 hold her hand'

Nt;ak..meri poori baat toh suniye'

Ak:kya h?

Nt:mujhe apke sath bahar jane ka man nah h toh kya kuwa'hum andar yaham b time spend kar sakthe h na..aur apko toh paat hi h mujhe ye kitna acha lagtha h..

He began 2 kiss her down'

Ak:ye kya h'nt:mein apko itni der se chida rah thi'

Ak:acha'toh ab meri baari h..ab mujhe apke sath nah sona..mein sach much jaa rah h'

She thought he would prevent her but he didn't..

Nt:kitni der se keh rahi h ki jaa rahi h jaa rahi h..toh jawo na'

Her face turned down @ laid by placing her head on his chest'

Nt:ab nah jana???

She didn't reply'

Nt:chup kyon??

He noticed that she had already fell in 2 the sleep'

Nt:ap b na akshara'

He kisses on her 4 head@ slept'..

Precap:akshara @ karan proving natiks importance in their life on his bday'..

as son as possible...

Edited by i4naksh - 13 years ago
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Thanku so much for ur surprise😃 🤗🤗
ee part enikku valare ishtaayi😳😳 especially munnna as a pappa😳😳😳😳 really munna nalloru achanavum...morning scene kalakkan...kitchen scne athilum gambheeram...chotu sarikkum munnakkittu oru para paniyan midukkana...kocu kuttante vikruthikal enikku bhayangara ishtaa😳 pinne naksh...😍 athu pinne chodikkanillallo...nere nammale nakshlandilekku kondu chennidum😳😳😳thirichu varana paadu😳😳😆😆😆end scene kalakkan👏munna-akshi converation .soo cute😳😳😳 mothathil adipoli...kalakkan update...enikku nalloru bday gift thanne...the bestest gft😳😳😃😃😛thanku sooomuch and love u too🤗🤗
Edited by pvlaks - 13 years ago
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😳😳😳 👏 i dont know what to say as usual 😆😆...

awsume, super, wonderful, gr8, brilliant, great, mindblowing ,lovely,cute im tired of saying all this about ur ff 😆
really yaar how can someone write sooo long 😲 all i can say is that im in love with ur ff ❤️ 😆
p.s acha ab yeh bhi batha do kii 12 oct ka recreation kab aa raha hai?" 😳😆
Edited by shayal1436 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
asha di...lovely update...its awesome yar...
loved it truely..
itna zayda kaise likh lete ho..its fantabulous..
👏👏👏👏
Edited by --ARooJ-- - 13 years ago
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Munna karanine food kazhippichathu enikku ishtaayi keto...pinne games kalikkumbo paranja athrayum kaaryangal sathya 😛 ithu commentlu ezhuthan vittu poi 😳 kurachu late aayi update cheithalu...saramilla...nalla kalakkan update👏
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heya!!!!!!!!!! nyc prt i hav read you previous parts also ... dey oll r superb... plz do do continue sooon nd add me 2 your buddy list...

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