NaKsH- A jOuRnEy TiLl EtErNiTy (ch 7 is @ pg 21)

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AngelicDesires

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Posted: 14 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: geetu_naksh
hye jasmine

whn will u update yr nxt part?

hi!!!
i would update tomorrow positively 😊. was very busy with school work

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AngelicDesires

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Posted: 14 years ago

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OK..SO FINALLY UR WAIT IS OVER.. I AM BACK WITH THE MAHA UPDATE 😊.
(🤢CLASS 11 COULD BE A TORTURE- I NEVER KNEW THAT😭)

CHAPTER 5

Ak has prepared everything for the surprise birthday party of nk n hides all the material in her almirah before he comes in the room...
(akshara is now in the kitchen)
ak:- maa layiye main kr deti hun..

g3.. nhi bahu... bs sb kuch ho gya.. tum btao.. koi kaam tha kya??

ak :- wo...maa apse baat krni thi.

g3 :- ha bol beta.

ak :- maa.. agle hfte naitik ka janamdin h.. to m soch rhi thi ki hm sb milkr unko 1 surprise birthday party de..😊

g3 :- ye to achi baat h bahu... chlo sb taiyari kr lete hain.. 👍🏼

ak :- maa taiyari to sb maine kr li h... bs ap dj se bat kr lijiye... or ghr ki sajawat ka samaan bta dijiye mujhe...

G3 :- 😃 tum sb akele se sambhaal paaogi?? chlo thik h.. m dj se bat kr leti hun..

(ak goes from there)
at office

naitik is in dj's cabin

nk :- ji dj... apne mujhe bulaya..koi kaam tha??

dj :- ha munna... ye le or ise apne kamre mein jaakr hi kholiyo..(gives nk an envelope)

nk :- dj yeh kya h..??

dj :- thare waste hi hai... ab baad mein khol liyo, pehle eh thoda kaam kr ja...

nk:- ji dj... (he hurriedly completes the work and goes to his cabin.😛
he is surprised to see a promotion letter and 2 tickets for paris in the envelope for the next month.)
dj :- kaisa lga?

nk :- thank you dj... thank you very much 😊

dj :- acha... ab jldi chl... bohot der ho gyi h... ghr pr sb raah dekh rhe honge...

nk :- ji dj.
they reach home n nk takes blessings from everyone nd runs towards his room.. everyone is shocked by his behaviour but dj is very calm and happy...

nk :- aksharaaa... aksharaaa...

ak :- kya hua nk???
(nk lifts ak n moves into the room)

naitik :- jaan.. aj m bohot khush hun... mujhe dj ne ab company mein main designer bna diya h.. jaan mera promotion ho gya h..(nk kisses ak n shows her the tickets to paris.)

ak :- naitik yeh kya??? ap khi jaa rhe ho??

nk :- ap nhi... hm ja rhe hain... paris

ak :- paris??? kab??? or kyu??

nk :- agle mahine ghumne k liye...

ak :- ap mazaak to ni kr rhe na??

nk :- jaan... hmari itni himmat kha.. ki hm aapse mazaak kre!!!

ak :- dj ko pta h??

nk :- arre unhone hi to tickets book krwayi hain...

ak :- kyaa ??? dj ne krwayi hain... nk chlo abhi hme niche chlna chahiye... sbka aashirwad le lena chahiye...

nk :- ha... chlo..

(ss hall:- nk n ak r taking blessings from every one n all are very surprised to knw that dj had planned the trip to paris fr naksh.. )
g3 :- munna bohot bohot badhayi ho tarakki k liye... bhgwaan kre tu din rat tarraki krta rhe...

nk :- thank you maa

(PRECAP:- NAITIK COMES HOME FROM THE OFFICE AND IS SURPRISED TO FIND NO ONE IN THE HOUSE... IT IS COMPLETELY DARK IN THE HALL.)

Edited by jasminedayal18 - 13 years ago

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AngelicDesires

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Posted: 14 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: pvlaks
superb update 😊

thanks a ton!!!!

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AngelicDesires

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Posted: 14 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: dipshikaGUPTA
nice update👏

thank you!!!!

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nasreen

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Posted: 14 years ago

#95

nice part dear

wow naksh in paris

and precap tho acha hai

waiting for next part

thanks for pm

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Deepali

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Posted: 14 years ago

#96

HAI I READ UR FF ALL THE PARTS IT WERE REALLY NICE
I MUST SAY U WRITE WELL
BUT I HAV A COMPLAIN PLS INCREASE THE LENGTH OF UR FF THEY R SHORT
AND ADD ME TO UR POST
SEND ME UR POST NEXT TIME

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AngelicDesires

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Posted: 14 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: fazeel
nice part dear
wow naksh in paris

and precap tho acha hai

waiting for next part

thanks for pm

ty dear!!
i have split the maha update in two parts.. so i would post the next part on monday...

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AngelicDesires

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Posted: 14 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: sonu10
HAI I READ UR FF ALL THE PARTS IT WERE REALLY NICE
I MUST SAY U WRITE WELL
BUT I HAV A COMPLAIN PLS INCREASE THE LENGTH OF UR FF THEY R SHORT
AND ADD ME TO UR POST
SEND ME UR POST NEXT TIME

thanks a lot :)..
i am sorry that i have been posting short updates.. but i was very busy...
from the next update.. iwill try n keep it a bit long :)