My First FF-In Lamhon ke Daaman Mein- Pt12 @ Pg134 - Page 10

Originally posted by: saru.g

@anvi: hey anvi... yesterday I asked for ur reports n now u reported my ff comments as ur report... u r tooo intelligent dear... thanks for loving it n expressing it with big smileysss...

di again u 4got,thanx is,well di,apke ff ko read karke maine socha ki kyu na hamare news channel par ab top ff show bhi start kar du,well,stuts se concern karna baki hai,akhir,vo hi toh main member hai iss programme ki,my best support😃

Originally posted by: sia.k_1

thank u..thank u 😆😆😆

Haan mujhe bhi hire karte as creative 😳

One SMP everyday😳... NO pakau characters😳 No khana peena talks🥱 Only romance and romance😳 20 mins of Naksh deti mein😆

sia u r in frm my side👍🏼😆,,,,,,,no pakau chrracters n no khanapeena talks is simply gr8888⭐️,,,,SMP everyday with cute naksh scene miljaye toh...😍😍😍😆
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Originally posted by: anveshasharma

di again u 4got,thanx is,well di,apke ff ko read karke maine socha ki kyu na hamare news channel par ab top ff show bhi start kar du,well,stuts se concern karna baki hai,akhir,vo hi toh main member hai iss programme ki,my best support😃

haa sorry yaar... I forogot that in happyness... n haa no sorry also... that sorry is cancelled...😊

Originally posted by: saru.g

haa sorry yaar... I forogot that in happyness... n haa no sorry also... that sorry is cancelled...😊

koi baat nahi di,maaf kiya😃

very nice update...ooopss...as usual...i am late again😃😃😃

Saru di,my comment is edited at pg-9.

Gr8 start Saru.. I loved it.. Its feels gud reading this time Akshara is planning something for Naitik.. Ur thoughts on current track are righty reflected in ur ff.. 👏
n this time Bindu naksh ke kaam aa gai.. 😲 Jab Bindu ko pata chalega ki naksh akele hai toh wo toh jalke rakh ho jaegi.. 🤣
precap seems to be interesting.. W8ing for the next part.. 😳
PS : ho sake toh Aksh ka blush thoda kam karo.. Its my feeling only.. Others may like her blushing.. Toh if u dnt agree with me its completely ok..

Originally posted by: Hinakshara

Gr8 start saru di.it is simple nd beautiful.ur naksh nd yrkkh naksh r same na.if cvs chahe tho aapke ff ko copy kar sakthe hai.kya kehte hai di?koi copyright tho nahi hai na?aapne jo bhi likha hai wo sab mein apne aankhon se dekh bhi li.u r a gud writer di.u have a gud imaginative power,that reflects in ur ff.i luvd naksh's dood peene ka scene.i always expect this scene in yr.whenever akshi naitik ko dood lekar aa jathi thi muje lagtha tha ki ab ye scene milegi.lekin ab tak nahi mili.lekin aapne meri wo icha bhi poori ki.show mein bhi ye mila tho im too happy.naksh's convo also vry beautiful.each nd every line of them was so true.morning scene is also too cute.akshi naitik k cute face dekhkar baitthe hai,wow i luvd it.kiss nd hug was super cute.ab naitik k bahana.muje laga shayad naitik button thod dega,usse bhi acha scene milega na.lekin apne my expectation se bhi zyada acha scene dikha di.happy that us bandariya kuch tho kaam aayi.ab sirf naksh.soch kar hi goosebumps ho rahi hai.i have full faith in ur saru di,u will definitely give us a naksh treat.sach bathau di,im not at all tensed abt akshi's letter.but naitik shocked kyun huyi ye bahut jald hi pata chalega tho acha hoga.i think u understand what i wanted 2 say.der4 w8ing di.one more thing ur typing presentation is attractive.luvd d font nd color.thanku so much 4 d pm.(ps-i wanted 2 give u a longer commen.der4 i reserved d post.how is it?)

hey rasha🤗... thanks a lot for such a big long comment... ithna bada comment padke mein bahuth khush hu😃... If the cv's want to copy this... I have no problem... Infact I'll be more happy that we can see cute scenes on naksh... naksh keliye kuch bhi... haa my imaginative skills helped me a lot in writing this... even I too wish that milk scene between naksh... why milk is only for men kya??? isliye I shared for akshi too😳... haa I want to send singhania's somewhere... thought sending to some holy place... but naitik has important meeting naa... so dj wont plan for this... but this meetings also will play an important role in my ff... so can't cancel meeting too... isliye I kept this bandariya part😆... I'm glad that u'll liked it... u can see the letter in nxt part which I'm currently writing it n will post soon... font suggestion was given by chotu... n I loved that u mentioned each n every part of my ff n u liked it... thanku so much dear... hope I reach to ur expectations😊...

Originally posted by: pari1508

Gr8 start Saru.. I loved it.. Its feels gud reading this time Akshara is planning something for Naitik.. Ur thoughts on current track are righty reflected in ur ff.. 👏
n this time Bindu naksh ke kaam aa gai.. 😲 Jab Bindu ko pata chalega ki naksh akele hai toh wo toh jalke rakh ho jaegi.. 🤣
precap seems to be interesting.. W8ing for the next part.. 😳
PS : ho sake toh Aksh ka blush thoda kam karo.. Its my feeling only.. Others may like her blushing.. Toh if u dnt agree with me its completely ok..

hi pari... I'm glad that u liked it... haa I'll try to do that from nxt part... thanku so much for ur suggestion...

😃 love this is much!!!...awesomely written...i love this...very nicely written with superb thinking skills...eagerly waiting for the next part!!!!😃