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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: saru.g


haa dont worry... we wont do anything to her...😃



oye naz di lol i update like once in a blue moon saru does it every time i do it lol... lmaooo remember the fact that saru as in my MIL is in love with me so she always flirts with me lmaoo... i need to take to sh bout her mom lol 😆

but thnx you di :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Sejal, firstly sorry for being so late.. Was gng busy in last few days..
And about your update, its lovely.. Its always a treat for me to read your update..😃 the way you explain the situations n emotions is just awesome.. 👍🏼
I am loving arun naitik bonding.. Their friendship looks so real.. And i toh simply loved Akshara.. What a confidence this girl have.. No hesitation with her boss.. Thats really cool..😎 The arun akshara interaction was superb..
And precap is also really interesting.. Let's see what will Arun do n how will Naitik confess his love for Akshara.. Do continue whenever time permits..😛
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Posted: 13 years ago


Hey guys im back after a long time.. so sorry about that.. ive just been to busy to write anything.. but im back again.. before the part happy new year to everyone.. as well thank you to Saru for all the help she gave me in this part.. all credit goes to her.. it was her idea about the restaurant….

Enjoy the part.. happy reading :D

Part 9

After the talk with Akshara; Arun decides he will start to make Naitik see that he actually feels something for Akshara…. Because very soon Naitik's family will start calling girl families homes for marriage talks…

Ar: oye Naitik be ready at 8 were going out for dinner.. no ifs ands or buts…. Its really important yaar.

N: ok fine I will be ready… but your paying..

Ar: fine…. **hangs up the phone*… ok so I have got him to come to the dinner but how in the world will I start the topic off, I need to make him realize his feelings.

Akshara goes home to find versa pulling her inside her room.. Varsha fills Akshara in that they are both going out for dinner with a couple of their friends from collage. As well everyone in the family has agreed so all she needs to do is get read fast so that they reach on time.

In the evening

Both Naitik and Akshara are getting ready, Akshara is not pleased to go out she wants to stay home so she can rest but Varsha being Varsha is forcing Akshara to go with her. On the other side Naitik is pretty excited to meet Arun, yes they practically meet everyday but today something is different. Some unknown happiness is in the air.. Akshara decides to wear Naitik's favorite color a beautiful, and elegant red salwar, keeping it natural with simplicity she heads down stairs to be greeted by Varsha who was already waiting for her.. Saying their byes both leave the house.

Naitik leaves shortly after Arun calls telling him he is waiting outside for him. DDj stops Naitik telling him to come back early, as he has work tomorrow.

Arun and Naitik reach the restaurant which is further away from the buzzing noises of the town, they sit in their reserved seating and wait for the waiter. Varsha and Akshara also enter the same restaurant.. as soon as Akshara steps in the winds pick up softly paying with her hair, blowing it around her, the music turns a soft romantic tune, the lights up on the trees blink and dance with the wind looking as if they are enjoying the music and the night. Everything seems as if it's enjoying the company of this girl that has just stepped in.

Ar: so you agree right? Arun is telling Naitik that his family has told him to get Naitik ready to see girls for marriage. But Naitik is not listening; he feels her presence around him. Arun pinches his hand.. oye are you listening!!!!!

N: haan haan I agree you go ahead I don't mind.

Ar: you don't even know what your agreeing to!... im taking about your marriage you do know that right.. here are the pictures.. my job is to show you and your job is to tell me which ones you like…

Naitik is still not interested and so he just says ya ya show me..

Ar: shocked really?.. ok then here are the pictures.. the first one her name is Tina.. I must say she is HOT for a dance teacher; I would readily join her classes this minute. Arun hands over the picture to Naitik.. Naitik looks at it but then puts it down..

N: next…. Arun: her name is Maya… a doctor.. she's has one brother, and 2 younger sisters…. Without even looking at the pictures Naitik keeps saying next.. Arun understand this is not working so he.. tells Naitik to take him seriously..

N: I am taking you seriously.. im looking am I not?!

Ar: you look and I will be right back.. Arun leaves to go to the washroom.. Naitik puts the photos down… his eyes unwillingly starts to wander from table to table.. that's when he spots her sitting right across from him.. with her friends… his eyes remain frozen on her for what seem like an eternity.. he is mesmerized by her beauty.. he thinks how can one look so angelic, she's not that dressed up either, but yet she looks the most elegant and classy women out here tonight. He keeps staring at her he doesn't realize that Arun is back, Arun also looks at where Naitik is looking.. Arun realizes that Naitik is looking at Akshara and he gets happy…

Ar: hey, im back so lets get back with the girls shell we.. haan so Tina… how is she.. Should I finalize her…

N: nahi.. her eyes are to small.. Arun looks at the photo and says haan I guess….

Ar: how about Maya? … nahi her nose is too long..

Ar: Pia?...N: I don't like her name?. it doesn't tell anything about her…

Ar: this one is the best… everyone likes her...jyoti… ddj likes her cause he says her smile is very nice

N: this is what you call a smile.. nahi I have seen better.. his eyes turn toward the one and only…. a smile should not be from the lips it should be from the heart.. when she smiles naa I can see that she is truly happy you know why?.. because her eyes glitter with that happiness, If just see her smile I can guarantee that all my problems will be solved. Even if both of us don't talk I know her eyes will say things that even words wont be able to express.. and when you look at her face everything is perfectly nothing to big and nothing to small.. She's just perfect.

Arun is all smiles because he know what ever Naitik just said was the proof that he is in love.. now is the time to tell him…. Hmm interesting well if jyoti has all that then what the problem dude?

Naitik is taken aback.. I was not taking about jyoti.. I was talking about Akshara..

Ar: KYA!!!!!!!!

N: I mean mein aksar aisi baat sochta hoon.. about how my wife should be like… ya.. anyways.. don't worry about my marriage ok I will tell you when it the right time..

Ar: are you sure.. you didn't mean Akshara the one that's sitting behind us…. Listen the only advice I can give you is that.. true love always finds a way so try as hard as you can but you cant run away from her, or your feeling for her. One day it will come out, but the sooner you realize the better for you so you don't hurt your self and others along the way.

N: haan haan, I knew you would say that being the newly cupid that you are.. I don't understand why you're in designing open a match making business instead naa…

Ar: im just saying what's in my heart.. and plus, I mean if you don't like her then you know I can always…. Winks at Naitik who is looking as if he will beat the day lights out of Arun….

N: ARUN!!!!.. this is the first and last time im telling you.. don't even think about her, or else I will forget you're my best friend….

Ar: for someone who doesn't like her, is pretty possessive already hmm interesting…

Naitik leaves are giving Arun a cold glare.. and Arun just smiles to him self.. at least im getting closer to my goal.

On the other side, all of Akshara's friends are bugging her that she is the only one left single now. Its high time she tied a knot with someone as well.

A: im just waiting for that one special person ok..

V: ohh is that so.. why don't you tell us what kind of a guy you want maybe we can help…

A: well first he has to be loving, caring and sweet. He should not only respect me but him self, he shouldn't change him self for me or anyone else because I would never want that. He should accept my family as his own, treat everyone fairly.. he should also respect his elders, even if he doesn't agree with their rules and values he should at least hear them out. And lastly I should be the only girl in his life. He should love me with his whole heart, as well he shouldn't hesitate in telling me anything because in true love everything is fair.

Arun over hears the description of the guy akshi wants.. hmm lets see Naitik fits in perfectly now only if she explained how he looked like as well.. but like they say something is better then nothing.

Arun leaves the restaurant thinking of his next plan..

Naitik sits in his room and thinks over the talk he had with Arun.. he tries to deny everything he said but he just cant grasp the idea of denying him saying akshi's name.

Why do I see her everywhere, my eyes only look for her in a crowd, I only want to see her face, one worry line on her face sends me to hell and back, what is this.. it can't be friendship.. but it cant be love either.. or can it?... runs his hand through his hair.. all this is confusing.. what is it about her that pulls me in every time, why am I not able to control my self, why do I always want to look at her and just hear her speak.. why does life seem so much easier when she's around?... why..?

Morning….

DDj has called a girls family to the home to see Naitik.. Naitik comes down stairs and is shocked he thought that Arun was just joking about the whole marriage issue but over here this is all real..

The girl and her parents really like Naitik and say they are ready if the guy's side is ready…

Ddj: Muna.. what do you say?

Naitik doesn't know what to say.. ddj I just need some time to think, I mean it's the matter of my I mean our lives and one wrong decision would ruin a lot of lives so would it be ok if I just thought over it….

Ddj does not look pleased.. since he really liked the girl he expected Naitik to say yes..

Girls dad.. yes beta go right ahead think about it and your right one wrong decision can ruin a lot of lives so we have no problems with you taking your time.. Naitik sighs a breath of relief.. the girls parents go home and Naitik also rushes out before anyone can question him.

Naitik rushes in Arun's cabin closes the door and pulls the file out of his hands.. I need desperate help..

Ar: what happened is everything ok? Naitik narranates everything….Arun is shocked to see how fast ddj is moving.. Arun wants to help Naitik but he decides he will help Naitik in a different way.

Ar: haan so Naitik.. what so wrong in that.. why did you say no.. usually a guy says no to marriage or asks for time if he likes someone else.. and you don't like anyone so then what's the problem?..

Naitik is flabbergasted.. he didn't aspect Arun to give him that answer… Naitik was about to snap on Arun but then he realizes that what Arun is saying is right.. he doesn't "like" anyone then why did he say no?...

Naitik walks out of Arun's cabin thinking about why he said no and asked for time.. he passes by Akshara desk who calls out to him but he doesn't stop.. Akshara senses something is bothering him and so she follows him out…

Next part: Naitik tells Akshara that his family wants him to get married.. akshi says so what's the problem?... Naitik's outburst on Akshara and she is left in tears…

ps-- sorry for any mistakes its super late in canada so im trying not to fall asleep.. so im sure there are many mistakes so sry bout that.. other then that enjoy and love you all

Tc

Sejal

xoxoxoxo

Edited by sejal719 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank you for all the lovely comments guys.. i have not been thanking or replying to your comments and i feel so bad but i will start from right now lmaoo...

@ saru--- Im so glad you liked the part.. and yes im trying to make this whole love story simple, nothing to fancy and big.. something cute and sweet.. and yes now you know of my akshi's tips... so do use them 😆.. love you and thnx for the comment... as well.. i will try to make akshi confess soon as well.. but i dont know how soon is soon ;p

@shiramaheshwari... will surly add you to my pm list :P

@ sush00naksh... hey dear im so glad you liked the part... will surly update soon and i will add you to my pm list as well :D

@shweta31 .. ola my firend.. im so glad your enjoying the story.. and i will surly keep writing like this cause everyone likes it lol... and yes it has been a long time naaa sorry bout that yaar school is getting in the way 😭.. and will try to make naksh fall in love faster but i dont know about that how fast that will be lmaoo

@ pvlaks... hey dear... im glad you liked the part... and i will write asap... and yes it will be worth reading how they figure out their love.. since even i dont know how they will.. being a romantic person even im lost on how to start this whole love issues lmaoo... and your most welcome for the pm 😃

@ Rachana_naksh_.. thank you for the exam wish.. i think i did ok lol... and im glad you liked the part as always... 😃.. will write more soon and will surly get the story moving.. to the main point lmaoo... its bout time i think 😆

@Riasa... thank you my ria.. and your most welcome for the pm 😃

@sona_naksh... im so glad you liked the part.. and im glad you liked the way naitik was looking for akshi.. even tho i dont think i remember how he was lmaoo ( its been long lol).. will surly pm you when ever i update 😆

@ --Avni--... im glad you liked the part dear... AND your most welcome for the pm 😊

@ Naz_Angel... thank you di.. and me and saru have this thing going on between us so we do things at the same time 😉 lmaoo jking.. i dont know why we end up updating near the same time 😕 why do we saru????

@ fazeel... im so glad you liked the part dear.. and im overly pleased that u like my writing 😳... your most welcome for the pm 😛

@ pari1508...first of all no worries for late reply.. if i write once in a blue moon then your allowed to give me late replies lol... and im so happy to hear that you liked so many things in my ff.. and ye i made akshi a bold and strong women.. no more sit at home types.. naitik and aruns friendship.. that was just something from presonal life.. just i had to change the people to males lmaoo.. will wirte more asap.. keep the sweet comments coming 😳😊

All in all thank you for all the lovely comments you guys rock 🤗😊...

ps... sh where the hell is your comment???... you meany... jking love you my sh :D
Edited by sejal719 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey seju... me first me first...

this is one of the best or may be the best part in the OS... I loved it... loved it so much...

I read the update once again... its simply superb... u really explained the whole thing very beautifully... I think only u can explain that beautiful... I felt so good when naitik felt akshara is around him... the way u explained how akshi dressed up is very nice...

I loved arun too... he is the right frnd for naitik... he know very well where to catch him... I loved it when he said I'll take akshara if u dont... n naitik's anger... woww... u caught this right...

precap is very interesting... dont know y akshi bursts into tears... want to know what naitik says to her... update as soon as possible yaar...

love u sej... 🤗🤗🤗

Edited by saru.g - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Wish u a very happy and prosperous new year sejal 😃

Sejal beautiful update 👏 liked ur imagination and and enjoyed the resrnt convo between arun and naitik...arun soch samajh ke kartha hai 😉 very interesting...and the pre cap too god...waiting fr the next update...plz come soon 😛 thanks for the pm 😊
Edited by pvlaks - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
once again lovely update sejal...luvd each n every bit of it...naitik explaining akshara's smile was too gud n i must say arun is a true frnd of naitik...d way he is trying 2 make naitik realise his luv is awesum...hope 2 c naitik understanding his luv 4 akshara soon...precap now akshara in tears...
Thanx 4 d pm...
Update next part soon...
Wish u a happy n prosperous new year...
Edited by sona_naksh - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
i m SO sorry.. i might have forgotten to comment! sowie!

I love this part!!!
awesome way u handled the story! waiting for next part!!! precap stole my heart <3 lovely lovely lovely :DDD

@ss.. will u tc of ur LL before acting cupid for naksh :@
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing part seju😛...Waiting for next update
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome part Sejal..😃
But I'm more eager to read the next part after reading the precap...!!😛
Thnx for the PM..!😊

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