FF-Emotional Attyachar.. Lekin Kab Tak.part10 Pg73 - Page 11

rasha di.. lolzz... ok.. comment on mine too

seju.. same here.. i thot she was serious!

I promise to repond to all ur comments asap nust very busy with things sry guys but I am reading all ur comment and appriciating them as well so keep them coming :) and will respond asap hope you can understand :)

Nice part di cont soon waiting for naksh meeting

Hey sej,im back with my comment 😃 it is too late na?sorry yaar.if u want 2 know the reason go nd read the stuti's ff post.the first part of ur ff is vry beautiful yaar.the morning scene description is just fabulous.what a beautiful description yaar!i can see all u described.i must say it is a completely diff ff of naksh 4rm others.ff's name itself gives the hint.now ur 1st part proved it.luvd the mumbai background u chose.akshara as a fashion designer,interesting.u strted the ff in akshi's pov.i want 2 know that, r u going 2 continue the ff in akshi's pov only?is it possible?or r u going 2 narrate naksh story with a 3rd pov?im too excited yaar.der4 ive so many qns.luvd the interview of akshi.i felt it is very natural.the character of arun is also interesting.akshi's characterization is perfect.she is smart,intelligent,ambitious,confident etc.luvd her.w8ing 4 the disclosure of other members.eagerly w8ing 4 the entry of naitik nd the 1st meet of naksh.i can say onethink surely that it is going 2 b superb.i know u well yaar.the length of the part is perfect.it is not too short nd too long also.but nxt time i want a longer part.hope u will fulfill my wish.this is 4 u sej 🤗 u accepted my request nd strtd an ff on naksh.luv u sej.u r a true friend.

Originally posted by: Hinakshara

Hey sej,im back with my comment 😃 it is too late na?sorry yaar.if u want 2 know the reason go nd read the stuti's ff post.the first part of ur ff is vry beautiful yaar.the morning scene description is just fabulous.what a beautiful description yaar!i can see all u described.i must say it is a completely diff ff of naksh 4rm others.ff's name itself gives the hint.now ur 1st part proved it.luvd the mumbai background u chose.akshara as a fashion designer,interesting.u strted the ff in akshi's pov.i want 2 know that, r u going 2 continue the ff in akshi's pov only?is it possible?or r u going 2 narrate naksh story with a 3rd pov?im too excited yaar.der4 ive so many qns.luvd the interview of akshi.i felt it is very natural.the character of arun is also interesting.akshi's characterization is perfect.she is smart,intelligent,ambitious,confident etc.luvd her.w8ing 4 the disclosure of other members.eagerly w8ing 4 the entry of naitik nd the 1st meet of naksh.i can say onethink surely that it is going 2 b superb.i know u well yaar.the length of the part is perfect.it is not too short nd too long also.but nxt time i want a longer part.hope u will fulfill my wish.this is 4 u sej 🤗 u accepted my request nd strtd an ff on naksh.luv u sej.u r a true friend.

plz seju... this is perfect length😉 badhana mat meri maa!

an ya... i saw ur ff first.. i need to see my ff... i mean wat rasha di commented! 😆

and ya... agreeed wid rasha di in most part.. except... length part🤣

sorry 4 late comment

Originally posted by: sweetdesire

Heyyy Sejal
nice Intro
are u Planning to write an AR version also
if yes...do inform me
and if no...plz write that too na...😛
plessshhh😊
thanks for the PM
take care

Lots of Love
GEET

Originally posted by: stuti_naksh4eva

res!
-EDITED-
im back wid my first post.. yippeee😆
so seju darling... thanx for liking a bad siggy too... oopzzz... i remember SH... no thanx!

u wanted a long comment na.. chalo bhai im chatting here only...
ok.. ok.. i wnt violate rules sej... chill... if i do violate them.. my gujju power will save me from getting banned😆 missing jaanu yr...😭

ok.. coming back to ur ff...
loved it... its awesome.. waiting for naksh meet.. dnt u dare tell me b4 hand.. that the pehli mulaakaat is gonna b a fight or not a fight😉 i wanna read it myself!

lovely awesome fantastic part👏
dnt need to say cont soon😛

p.s. if this is SHORTER than expected.. wat WAS expected? anyways.. perfedct length i ges!

😉

Originally posted by: .aastha.

wow seju,,,,,,gr8 work as usual👏,,,,,,ur writin is jst fab⭐️⭐️⭐️
akshara as a designer,,,,,,nt bad,,,,,nw waitin badly fr naitik,,,,bring him soom...😃😃
waitin fr ur nxt part😃😉😉

Originally posted by: saru.g

seju... 1st part is too good... morning scene was explained so beautifully... n different story too... loved it so much... hatsoff to ur writing skills dear... do continue this as soon as possible...