Naksh Oneshot:Naitik the saviour

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Naksh Oneshot:Naitik the saviour

Here's my first ever writing attempt...
It starts from fridays precap...


Akshara hears whatever bindya says and runs to her room as she cannot control her tears...G3 and bhabhi ma sees this and shouts,"bahu bahu",just then Naitik returns from his office...
N:Kya hua Ma , Akshara kyun rote rote upar chali gayi?
G3 explains him everything and N hurries to the room...

At Naksh room :
Naitik comes in and sees akshi standing looking at the window ...he goes to her and pulls her into a hug...she loses her control and cries her heart out...after 2 mins...
N:Akshara aap bhi kiski baaton ko sahi maan rahi hai...doctor ne toh aap se aisa kuch nahi kaha...fir aap itni kyun ghabra rahi hai...aisa kuch nahi hoga...
A:Par natik...
N:Par var kuch nahi...aap rona band kijiye...
Natik to himself:Is bindiya ka toh kuch karna padega ...bahut ho raha hai...jaisa husband vaisi uski wife...ab men hi use sudharonga aur woh bhi apne tarike se...
A:aap kya sochne lag gaye...
N:kuch nahi main toh yeh soch raha tha ki aap bindiya ki baat kyun maan rahi hai...woh thodi kuch karegi...karna toh mujhe padega in sab ka muh bandh karwane ke liye...😉
A:😳...dhatt
N:kya dhatt ...apko bindiya ko galat sabt karna hai ki nahi...
Akshi leaves his hand and tries to go but natik pulls her more closer...
A:Chodiye naitik...mujhe bahut kaam hai...
N:Bas mein aur kuch nahi sunana chahta mujhe bindiya ko ghalat sabit karna hai..and starts kissing her...finally akshi also submits herslf...❤️smp❤️

Next Day:
N:Ab se main bindiya ko akshara ke aas paas nahi aane dunga...rasmhi ke shaadi ke bahaane maine an office se chutti le li hai...ab mein dekhta hun wo kaise akshara ke paas aati hai...just then gulabo passes..
N:Gulabo sun...
G:Ji dada..
N:tujhe mera ek kaam karna padega...bindiya bhabhi par nazar rakh...aur jaisi woh akshara ke paas aani wali ho mujhe missed call karna...ye le mobile...
G:thik hai dada...

Aftersometime,Naitik gets a missed call...he hurries towards their room...akshi was just coming out and bindya was walking towards their room from the opposite side...
N:Akshara andar chaliye bahut zaruri kaam hai...
A:Nahi naitik maa ne mujhe bahut kaam diya hai..
N:Aap aise nahi manegi...he picks her up and takes her into the room...and shuts the door on bindiyas face ignoring her...

For next two days...he made sure bindiya never met akshara and also made sure she felt ignored...Bindiya felt so frustrated that she tells her mom she cannot stay here any longer...and so they leave..

So guys how did you like it...
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JAYA_09 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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this shoudl happen yaar but no naitik has gone to office na how he vl come dont know yaar
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: JAYA_09

this shoudl happen yaar but no naitik has gone to office na how he vl come dont know yaar

jaya di...i meant he came back from the offce only by dat time...wait i'll make more clear...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Namrata ur naksh oneshot is very interesting...kaash naitik kuch kuch karke bandaria ko nikal de...lekin vo bhi itni assani se maanegi kya?😡 jald se jald uss se ghar se nikal do baba aur hamare naksh hamesha keliye khush rahe
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Posted: 14 years ago
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woh thodi kuch karegi...karna toh mujhe padega in sab ka muh bandh karwane ke liye...😉 ha ha munna sabka muh tumhe hi band karna hoga...😆
& kya baat hai smp bhi ho gaya ❤️ kaash yrkkh me bhi yeh sab ho jaaye luved ur oneshot awesome job...👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: saman.17

woh thodi kuch karegi...karna toh mujhe padega in sab ka muh bandh karwane ke liye...😉 ha ha munna sabka muh tumhe hi band karna hoga...😆

& kya baat hai smp bhi ho gaya ❤️ kaash yrkkh me bhi yeh sab ho jaaye luved ur oneshot awesome job...👏

sam today ur not free busy hai kya or angry with me if fre come on fb acc vl chat really dotn knwo who vl be the savior for akshi may eb rr vl coem to pick bandariya and her mom
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome oneshot.👏👏...smp bhi hogaya.😳😳😳...hope this will happen in ye rishta😉😉😉😉😉😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow namz!!!! loved it!!! sacchi yr.. yeh cvs yeh sab padhte kyun nai hai?? i mean agar aisa sacchi mein ho jaye toh😍

loved it... plz write more madam!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Fantastic OS... 👍🏼 Hope serial mein bhi aisa kuch ho... 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i hope serial may be aisa he ho nice yaar

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