My First FF::: Pyaar Hua... Chupke Se, part 15,122 - Page 25

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: rock8

U DOIN AWESUM

KEEP GOIN
THANX 4 PM
LUV SHIRIN


jaanu🤗 trhank u sooo much... ill see ur vms soon!!!
glad u lyked it... btw... u come online 3 at nite only... idiot,.. v mikss u sooo much u noe... cc kitna soona soona lagta hai u noe... and ders sumthing v need to tell u... but uske liye we need u dr.,, idiot.. wen can v chat agaiin😛
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: stuti_naksh4eva


jaanu🤗 trhank u sooo much... ill see ur vms soon!!!
glad u lyked it... btw... u come online 3 at nite only... idiot,.. v mikss u sooo much u noe... cc kitna soona soona lagta hai u noe... and ders sumthing v need to tell u... but uske liye we need u dr.,, idiot.. wen can v chat agaiin😛

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I too miss u sri... u r not coming for cc...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: saru.g

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I too miss u sri... u r not coming for cc...

she was der yest.. i dnt klnow at wat tym... next u cum.,. v'll c u... best of luck.. hope r mud is f9 wen u come😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: stuti_naksh4eva

she was der yest.. i dnt klnow at wat tym... next u cum.,. v'll c u... best of luck.. hope r mud is f9 wen u come😆


haa today I have seen her in cc... I think she came yesterday within no time after we left...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hai stuti next part update kab karoge? come soon...plz...😃
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Posted: 14 years ago



PART 6

Naitik calls akshi... shes busy packing and dusnt read whos calling..

A: hello...

N: hi akshara..

A: oh.. naitik.. hi!

N: aapki flight kitne baje ki hai?

A: 7.30 ki

N: ok.. gr8.. mein aapko chhod dunga airport par...

A: nai nai.. mein taxi se chali jaungi.. aap kyun pareshaan hote ho?

N: main bhi aapka driver hi hun na!

A: dhatt!

N: haye haye.. isi ka intezaar tha...

A: ho gaya.. m ein rakhu.. muhe pack karna hai...

N: theek hai.. 5.45 ko milte hai hum.. aapk hostel k neeche.. sagai se pehle aakhri baar...

A: (a tear bursts from her lids) haan... mujhe intezaar rahega...

N: intezaar ka fal naitik hoga!!

A: 😆 abhi mein rakhti hun.. bi...

5.45 below akshis hostel...

Naitik waiting for akshi...

After his long wait of 2 mins 22 secs and 15 millisecs... his dreamgirl comes...

Shes wearing a blue and green cotton dress wid a thin silver border onn its ends... she luked comfortable enough to travel... AND beautiful too...

Naitik kept staring at her as she walked from the hostel entrance towards his car...he was completely absorbed in her beauty... he wondered how swhe managed to luk so beautiful.. even in normal cotton clothes... 😆

Akshi cums.. wid 3 biggg bags... naitik is shocked...

A: kya hua?

N: aap pure Mumbai ka samaan leke jaa rahi hai kya?

A: kyun? Kya hua?

N: teen bags?? Aap theek toh hai na...

A: haan naitgik.. mein theek hun... ab chale...

N: shayad taxi leni padegi... itni badi bags car mein fit nai hogi... aur aapko extra luggage k paise bhi lagege!

A: haan naitik... meine yeh socha hi nai...

N: chalo.. ab chale. Nai toh aap apni bags k saath idhar hi reh jaengi...

A: haan... chalet hai...

In the car...

A; aap ghar pahuch ke mujhe msg kar dena...

N; aap bhi!

A; 😆 haan... mein msg pakka kar dungi...

Naitik decreases the temp from 24 degrees to 18 degrees..

Akshi is feeling really cold... moves forward to increase the temp...

Naitik moves his hand from his gear.. and holds her hand...

Akshara blushes... speaks in her breath.. silently...

A; naitik...

Naitik is staring at her...

A; aap gaadi chala rahe hai... aage dekhiye...

Naitik luks ahead... a wry smile on his face...

A; kya soch k koi mann hi mann mein muskura raha hai..

N; mein apni shaadi imagine kar raha hun...

A; aap late ho gaye yr... meine kab ki imagine kar dali... bas... aapke ghar waalon k chehre pata chal jae... imagination fix ho jaega...

N; 😆 nai nai.. mein toh dusra kuch soch raha tha...

A; kya dusra kuch...

N; main soch raha tha... k aap honeymoon mein bhi yuhi mujhse bhaagengi...

A; nai nai... mein kyun bhaagungi.. mein toh chaen se ghumungi...

N; kahan... Switzerland mein?

A; hum Switzerland mein honeymoon manaenge.. *surprised*

N; haan... kyun...

A; nai.. kuch nai.. mere dost kehte hain ki woh bahut sundar jagah hai...

N; so toh hai,...

A; wow naitik.. mujhe scenic beauty bahut pasand hai...

The airport comes... naitik stops his car in the parking lot.. and gets all the luggage out...

Akshi gets a trolley... they together load the trolley wid her luggage...

Naiti k drops her till the airport gate... and waits for her till she is nowhere to be seen... then goes to his car...

Akshi sits at the airport... waiting for the announcement to collect the boarding pass...

She thinks about naitik all the time,... she wonders about her engagement ring... she dreams about their future dates,.. she imagines them together... she imagines her marriage... she imagines their child... she imagines her future life,., while all this imagination... the announcement is made... akshi gets ready to pick up her bags and go towards the counter... shes lucky that the counter wer she is standing.. has only 2 ppl in front of her... and no one behind her... while her turn comes.. 2 ppl have come in her line... she hardly notices any1... she is stil in her thoughts...

Her turn comes...

Her luggage is weighed... she is carryin over double the amount of luggage she is allowed to cary... the officials tell her to pay more than the amount of the ticket 🤣

Shes scared.. she dusnt understand wat to do... she tries arguing wid the officials.. trying to pursue them... until all her efforts go in vain... she is almost crying.. wen a familiar voice tells the officials to include the luggage weight underf his ticket as well...

She turns around... and is over than overwhelmed to see naitik der...

A shocked akshi shouts loudly; NAITIK!!!

Naitik luks at her.. and closes his eyelids (an indication dat he wud handle everything)

After the combined weight of akshis and naitiks bags... under 2 tickets.. they have to pay only for an extra 5 kgs!

Both happily collect their boarding passes and sit at the airport benches together... their flight is delayed by an hour,...

While sitting on the bench...

A; thank you naitik.. aap nai hote toh najaane mera kya hota!

N; haan bhai... pati k bina patni kya karegi!

A; smiles...

N; smiles in return...

While dey are waiting for their flight...

Naitik gets one coffee for her...

A; sirf ek hi coffree kyun?? Hum toh do jan hai na!

N; mujhe nai lagta mujhe woh do jism ek jaan wala dialogue bolna padega... kaissa ghisa pita dialogue ho gaya hai... waise bhi.. mujhe kuch khane peene ki ichcha nai hai [J]

A; 😆 haan... woh bahut purana dialogue ho chukka hai...

Akshi sips her coffee...

She sips it again... and again...

Wen she is about to sip it for the next time... naitik holds her hand...

A; naitik...

Naitik hold her hand (the hand wid wich she is holding the coffee mug,) and brings the mug to his mouth... he drinks from the same edge from wich akshi had sipped...

Akshi blushes... naitik smiles... eye lock!😳

Just den the announcement comes.. that passengers have to board the aircraft!!

TO BE CONTD...

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Edited by stuti_naksh4eva - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Me First... Me First... 😃

Mene sabse pehle comment kiya hai Chutki... plz ab bad me Scrap bhejke pareshan mat karna baba...
For the FF... Chutki... it was awesome... yar in logo ka before Marriage Romance is always Treat to read & great to watch... I was thinkin gabt their first Date... Balon ki lat n all... 😊
I liked following sentences so muchhh

N: intezaar ka fal naitik hoga!! (😆😆😆😆)

After his long wait of 2 mins 22 secs and 15 millisecs... 🤣

Naitik decreases the temp from 24 degrees to 18 degrees..Akshi is feeling really cold... moves forward to increase the temp...Naitik moves his hand from his gear.. and holds her hand... Akshara blushes... speaks in her breath.. silently...😳😳

She thinks about naitik all the time,... she wonders about her engagement ring... she dreams about their future dates,.. she imagines them together... she imagines her marriage... she imagines their child... (AS I said pehle bhi... tumhari Akshi bahot fast hai...😆😆)

Naitik hold her hand (the hand wid wich she is holding the coffee mug,) and brings the mug to his mouth... he drinks from the same edge from wich akshi had sipped...

Akshi blushes... naitik smiles... eye lock!Embarrassed 😳
Edited by Sachi16 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Sachi16

Res... abhi padhna baki hai... 😆😆😆

di.. aapk toh pehle parts k bhi comments baaki hai.. aur mere scrap ka reply bhi baaki hai!
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey chotu... awesome part yaar... this time u did a big part... well done 👏... I guessed from the starting of the part that naitik will be accompanying akshara in the plane... their conversation is cute n romantic... waiting to see them in the plane together... do continue soon dear... will be waiting for ur nxt update...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: saru.g

hey chotu... awesome part yaar... this time u did a big part... well done 👏... I guessed from the starting of the part that naitik will be accompanying akshara in the plane... their conversation is cute n romantic... waiting to see them in the plane together... do continue soon dear... will be waiting for ur nxt update...

abhi next part k liye ruko di! inna bada part likhke mein thak gayi

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