My First FF::: Pyaar Hua... Chupke Se, part 15,122

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Stuti

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Posted: 14 years ago

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thanx every1 for liking the ff soo much... the comments motivate a lot.. i hope u'll arent buttering me 😉

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Hey Chutki... I liked the Kiss wala part...⭐️⭐️⭐️ I must say Tumhari Akshi bahot smart hai... hamari Akshi jese buddhu nahi hai... use aise hi Smart dikhana... & also liked that in spite of being smart wo sharmati bhi hai... cute one... Going good sweet heart...👏👏👏👏 will wait for your PM... 😃

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Posted: 14 years ago

#133

awesum blossom part stuti..

dekh first thing i did is to read ur FF..

i swear i loved it to the core..

keep up the good work..

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Stuti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#134

thanx sachi and kaunudi!!
@kaumudi,... wen u updating urs haan?

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nivedha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#135

sry for d late reply...out of station...😛

thanks for d pm...😃

nice part .😳...im waiting for their first kiss😳😳

pata nahi kaun pehle karega😉😉

akshi is intelligent in ur ff😆😆😆

good work 😛keep it up😊

pls cont.. soon😃

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Posted: 14 years ago

#136

i seriously like d way u describe tihngs .. d circular white table wid rd rose petals .. its like v r into d scene! .. really awsum .. n super imagination .. LOVED it! ..continue soon ... its vry intresting! :)

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Sej

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Posted: 14 years ago

#137

hey dear awesome update plz write more soon and thnx for the pm :D

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Stuti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#138

thank you every1!!! updating shortly!

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Stuti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#139

-Link To Part 3-

PART 4

after paying,naitik and akshara head towards the car... before starting their walk...naitik keeps his left hand on his waist. akshi locks her right hand around his left hand.
naitik is staring at akshi. akshi stares back... eye lock😳

naitik is in a naughty mood. he holds akshis hand with his right hand.. and slowly starts moving his left hand across akshis back.. towards her waist. (i hope ull get it. imagine akshi standing on the left side of naitik)

first akshi dusnt realize naitiks movement. she is busy staring at him😆

then she feels naitiks hand moving from her right waist, across her back.. to her left waist. she panicks. adrenalin rushing through her body. her heart misses a beat. she feels a lump in her throat. she jerks, trying to push away her sweetheart using her left hand. but naitik quickly holds her hand and draws her closer towards him.

A: (whispers) naitik...
N: shhh...
A: naitik.. police...
N: (gets distracted.. looks behind. no one is der... he turns back.. akshi is laughing.. running towards the car.. naitik runs after her.. they stop near the drivers seat of the car)

akshi is leaning against the car... and naiik.. in front of her. eye lock (both in a naughty mood)

A: driverji..
N: achcha.. main pati se driver...
A: oh hello... mr.naitik.. hamari shaadi nai hui hai... maine maa se abhi "haan" nai bola hai..
N: oh.. toh aap mujhe reject karengi??
A: shayad
N: waah.. aur mujhe laga aapko Mumbai ki hava nai lagi hai..
A: yehi toh aap ki problem hai.. aapko sab kuch "lagta" hai (blinks continuosly... funnily😆)
N: jaise...
A: jaise.. aapko lagta hai main stupid hu.. main seedhi saadhi hun, gharelu hun.. mujhe driving nai aati...
N: hang on hang on hang on... aap drive kati hai:?😲
A: haan.. q? nai kar sakti?
N: nai... kar sakti hain... par I dont believe you...
aapki yeh car drive karke dikhaungi toh?
N: toh.. toh aap jo kahengi... mein woh karunga..
A: suna hua dialogue hai... naitik.. ji😉
N: aapne sharab pee hai kya? itni himmat dikha rai hai...
A: nai.. mein peeti nai...
N: achcha hai... ab aap drive kariye.. aapko jaldi hostel pahuchna hai na...

akshi sits, wears the seatbelt, adjusts the mirrors, the seat, and starts the engine...

while driving... the radio is on... uspe sab sad boring songs baj rahe hai... dats y.. she turns off the radio... tabhi naitik holds her hand...

A: chhodiye na...
N: aap gadi rokiye...
A: kyun?
N: bahes mat kijiye.. gaadi rokiye
A: akshi stops the car witha jerk(shes angry)

naitik comes out. goes to akshi. tells her to comeout.akshi comes out angrily. they walk.. come in the front of the car... and rest on the front bonnet (i gess its called bonnet only😆)
akshi gets it now y he made her stop the car.

She holds his hand, and they stand up, erect, facing towards each other. Eye lock😳

akshi comes forward, and kisses naitik on his forehead. she then moves towards his right cheek. she kisses on his right cheek, n then left cheek.

A: dekha naitik.. maine aapko haar kar bhi jita diya

naitik also leans forward, kisses on her forehead first. akshi closes her eyes...
naitik kisses on her eyelids.. one by one...
akshi hugs him tightly.

some moments pass... they both are hugging each other. suddenly, akshis phone rings... its her alarm. reminder that she has to reach the hostel in 15 mins..

they drive back... naitik drops her at her hostel, and he goes to his house.

At nite...

Akshi and naitik call their home..

Rajshri: haan akshara.. kaise lage tujhe naitikji?
A: maa... mujhe manzur hai☺️

g3: beta.. akshara kaisi hai?
N: bilkul aapki hone wali bahu jaise😳

rajshri and g3 are very happy... they call up each other..

g3: rajshri behen... munna ne haan bol di
rj: hamari taraf se bhi haan hain...
g3: toh hum kal milkar sagai ki taarikh tey kar lete hai..
rj: jaisa aap theek samjhe gayatri behen...

TO BE CONTINUED..
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please comment...

sry to spoil the romantic mood... cant make naksh smooch or go further befor marriage😔😉

-Link To Part 5-

Edited by stuti_naksh4eva - 14 years ago

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Divya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#140

me first...me first🥳😆😆

Awesome update Stuti👏👏👏

but yest toh u told me k driving wala part cancel😆😆

loved their First date a lot😃...

but dont u think k Naksh k hisaab se ye thoda ... nh nh...bahut jyada bold ho gaya hai🤣...i mean phli kissy Aksh ne ki woh bhi bina shadi fix hue😆😆😆

aur yahi speed rahi toh tu kya ye khud hi shaadi k phle SMp kar lenge😳🤣

p.s.: thnx 4 d PM😊

Edited by divi4u - 14 years ago