My First FF::: Pyaar Hua... Chupke Se, part 15,122

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nahtani88

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Posted: 14 years ago

#101

amazing
cont soon
thanks for the pm

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shriya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#102

wohooo stuti convo is really gud yaa n w8ng 4 d scene 😉

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Sej

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Posted: 14 years ago

#103

Hey stuit :) sejal here lovely ff i'm also a huge fan of Naksh:)

lovely ff plz write more soon and thnx for the pm waiting for yr next pm so update sooooon :)

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rock8

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Posted: 14 years ago

#104

gr8 job bestie

luv it

keep it up

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Stuti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#105

-Link To Part 2-

PART 3-- FIRST DATE☺️

naitik comes out of the car and opens the passenger seat, opens the door for akshi. akshi smiles. naitik puts out is hand before akshi. akshi blushes (looking down). softly, she puts her hand over naitik. naitik folds his hand along with akshis.(their first ever touch). she comes out. they walk together... hand in hand.. towards the hotel lounge.

akshi is still looking down, blushin, of course. naitik staring constantly at akshi. wondering how beautiful a person could be.wondering whether he is dreaming or not..!!!

very soon they enter the lounge. akshi cudnt c any1 der so she rightly guessed that her naitik had buked the entire lounge for themselves. she was awestruck and overwhelmed by this thought. akshi is surprised to see a beautiful circular white table laid in centre of the lounge. covered with beautiful red rose petals and with a candle in its centre, it looked like a perfect setting for their first date. (they yet had to know a lot about each other. they hadn't fallen in love, but yes, maybe a few steps away from it).

naitik pulled the chair for akshi to sit. akshi sat delicately on the chair. her flowing dupatta flew on naitiks face. mesmerized by her beauty, he removed it from his face, and sat on the opposite chair...
akshi was feeling uncomfortable. her hands, one upon the other.. on the table.
naitik was still staring at akshi... wen the waiter comes and gives the menu card to both of them..

N: aapko kya pasand hai?
A: chinese.. aur aapko?
N: mujhe italian pasand hai...
A: oh.. achcha, toh hum italian order karte hai...
N: nai nai akshara.. itni chhoti chhoti baaton ke liye aapko adjust karne ki koi jarurat nai hai... mujhe lagta hai k sabka apna jeene ka ek dhang hota hai... sabki kuch lyks hoti hai, kuch dislyks hoti hai... hum ek dusre k liye apni dislyks ko lyks mein badal sakte hain, par lyks ko dislyks mein bdalna nai chahiye😆
A: (thinking) yeh kitne achche hai... understanding hai.. decent hain... kya yeh hi mere sapno k rajkumar hai>
N: aap kin khyaalon mein kho gayi?
A: nai... bas soch rai thi ki aap hi mere sapno k rajkumaar hai...
N: startes laughing... achcha 😆 toh aapka sapno ka rajkumar kaisa hai?
A: aisa... jo mujhe hamesha pyaar kare...
N: yeh toh aasaan hai...
A: jo understanding ho.. decent ho... harworking ho... kisipar dependant naa ho... aur.. aur jo mere alava kisi se waisa wala pyaar na kare!
N: waisa waala matlab?
A: aapko sab malum hai... aap fir q puch rahe ho?
N: qki mujhe aapke muh se se sunna hai...
A: pati patni wala pyaar☺️
N: (also bluiashes) smiles. he calls the waiter politely , and orders chinese food...

(waiter goes away)..

N: toh akshara... aap koi bhi social networking site pe hai?
A: haan, main hun... main facebook pe hun... aur aap bhi hai... mujhe pata hai... meine aapklo facebook pe friend request bheji hai...!!!
N: oh.. maine dekha nai... chalo.. aap mere se kisi kaam mein to pehle hai...
A: matlab (her face with a question mark on it)
N: pehle conversation meine shuru li... pehli datek liye maine pucha... pehli date naine arrange ki... aur dekh lena... pehli kiss bhi main hi karunga!!
A: achcha ji... date k liye tayyar hona pehle maine shuru kiya, aapke liye intezaar pehle maine kiya, frnd req pehle meine bheji.. aur dekh lena kiss bhi pehle...
N: aap nai karengi...
A: achcha.. dekh lenge!! main haar kar bhi jeet jaungi...
N: woh kaise...????
A: kyunki aap jab mujhe pehli baar kiss karenge, tab pehli baar aapke honth toh mujhe hi feel honge naa... (gives a triumphant look to naitik)
N:(is about to say sumthin, wen the waiter gets the food)

they talk further while eating... after finishing their dinner, the waiter comes to clear the table...
N: hmm... toh aap call centre mein bhi kaam karti hai?
A: haan.. sirf saturdays ko... unko weekends pe jyaada employees chaahiye... mera bhi time pass ho jaata hai...

meanwhile... the waiter gives the bill... naitik pays.. and then they leave for the car...

TO BE CONTINUED...
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-Link To Part 4-

Edited by stuti_naksh4eva - 14 years ago

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Adhervika

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Posted: 14 years ago

#106

wooow stuti ...👍🏼
Great Imagination👏👏

.Wait karna hoga ki pehli kiss kaun karega......Akshara ya Naitik

Akshara ne pehle requset bhej di great......Waise serial mein toh abhi tak use computer chalan bhi nahi aata tha....

anyways good part......👏👏

Edited by Adhervika - 14 years ago