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Hello guys….🤗 My next poem is on Akshi's favorite... i.e., Compromise… although we hate her every time she's doing it for her family's sake but in reality its indeed one of her priorities…😕 she had to struggle a lot and pay a heavy price to keep her life and family happy and sustain…😡 but each time with a hope in her heart and a willpower to perform i think she had surely prove everyone wrong in the end…👏


Compromising with life,

Akshi has realized her only option…

This time round, there's no way out,

Stuck in the ring of fire, the fire's burning her out…

She wanted to run away from many things,

Wanted to give wings to her unborn dreams…

Wanted to go out and see,

If she could carve a niche for herself in the people filled sea…

The view from the top was great,

But, something else was decided for her, by fate…

New dreams came her way,

But as it was decided, they came crashing down,

In the very first days…

Freedom of choice is very important,

Though at times life does not offer much choice…

Sometimes in life, you can't say much,

Just hang around and bear the brunt…

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Posted: 14 years ago
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me first..me first.. hey vini finally u come..missed u yaar.. Ur poem is too good as always.. Really akshes fav topic n ours hated.. 😆 i hope that 2nd stanza cms true very soon, 😉
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Once again very nice poem vinita after such a long time its very nice continoue writting poems like this
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Posted: 14 years ago
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vry nice👏 suits akshi vry well😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice one Vini..😃 Akshara ke liye toh yeh sach hai.....but aaj i am into a different world altogether....ekdum dreamland....😍 😍 Naksh kuch aur sochne hi nahi de rahe hai yaar...😳 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tafseer

nice one Vini..😃 Akshara ke liye toh yeh sach hai.....but aaj i am into a different world altogether....ekdum dreamland....😍 😍 Naksh kuch aur sochne hi nahi de rahe hai yaar...😳 😳


thanks taffy...😃 i known yaar since yesterday night i'm just blushing for no reason... 😳u known wat today morning also i was laughing n my mom was like kya hua itna muskura kyun rahi ho??😆 n suddenly i remember ur message.. 😉 😆
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Originally posted by: saman.17

vry nice👏 suits akshi vry well😆


thanks samanvitha...😆 haan yaar akshi ko dhyaan main rakhkar hi banaya hai...😉
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Originally posted by: pari1508

me first..me first.. hey vini finally u come..missed u yaar.. Ur poem is too good as always.. Really akshes fav topic n ours hated.. 😆 i hope that 2nd stanza cms true very soon, 😉


ohh thanks pari..🤗 haan yaar even i HOPE atleast one day it shld come out true for her..😍 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: RACHANA_M

Once again very nice poem vinita after such a long time its very nice continoue writting poems like this


thanks rachana... 😃 actually college projects main busy ho gayi thi ... 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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sry di.. thoda late ho gyi..
but u r too gud.. bolne ki zarurat hi nhi hai humein.!!!

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