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shriya

@-.Shriya.-

Sparkler

Posted: 15 years ago

#11

superb mahii itss too gud...
n awsomeeee...😃 tu to waise hi awsome writer he ab OS bhi..
sab OS bana rahe he.. keep it up gallzz👏👏👏
n thannxx 4 pm... its too guddd
i no dictionary nikalni padegi lollzzz😆😆
luvvv uu my sis... too guudd n congraatzz..😊

Edited by shriya_naksh - 15 years ago

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priya

@pankhi

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#12

Superbbbbbbbbbbbbbb up[date my sweet angel friend .

Its super one shot. our AKSHI's B'day..let me also bring the cake....

Now let me start my bhaashan.......😆

Superb..fantastic chap dear. Loved it. ALL SCENES R GR88. FROM THE STARING 2 ENDDD.😳

When AKSHI woke up at misdnight and did not get him ........she became sad...and KARAn NAITIk toh use bhi le jaata hai. And after that IMAGE DRAMA...poor ASKHi haunt like helll .

But when he came and said HAPPY BIRTHDAY....OMG such abeautifull scene😳 And when NAITIK brought her 2 the terrace...where cake was arranged...and NAITK's gift was placed with KARAN's gift.....

I m sorry but cutie KARAN overshadowed to both of them😃😃😃. Loved each & every part of cake cutting sceen. especially when NAITIK opened his moyuth and KARAN gave tight kick😆 and he said JAB TUMNE KISS KIYA TOH MAINE MANAA KIYA KYA..MERE WAQT TUMHE BAHUT JALAN HO RAHI HAI..KABAAB MEIN HADDI🤣🤣🤣.

And also HUT idae was cute. U r too gr888 daer. frankly I cant imagine something like that.

KARAn's each & evry action was cute..when he smile...when kick on NAITIk's arm...when he clap.......wow sucha a cute baby😳😳 such a cute family...... 😍. And after all TERRACE scene where heart shape flower fall....glitter falll and cute dance ..sky view.....was tremendous. Each & every dance moves & NAKSH action which u explained with song was apprecuiable...Bcoz i know its raelly hard to explain moves & emotions😳

Gr88 job dear

A big jhappi 2 u.......

super shot dear.... Keep rocking.............

But our baby KARAN is bestttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt Smiley baby rattle

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naitikanksha

@naitikankshaaaa

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#13

out of d world👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏.......just awesome👏👏👏👏........aaj tak ka sabse acha one shot hai ye😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳.......i just lovedddddd it................so simple nd beautiful...............just wonderful👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

only one thing 4 dis "SUPERBBBBBB"👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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@--Pravz--

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#14

awwwwwwwww! ...ma honeeeeyy ...1st of all i jz wanna hug u n tell datz wt i call d mind blowing updatee!🤗.🤗🤗🤗

it ws pleasure reading diz ! ..um ttly lost into naksh world ..n wasie u anmed der kid as karan😆😆 ..fatherz name is pretty young ..n sonz name is old ..😆😆...btw i jz loved it ..

um outta wrds noww! ..jz amazingg! ..mwahh!😳😳.

i wonder y i ws blushing while readin ur update! ..😆😆 ..look at ma concentration levels wen um reading diz! ....ttly involvement! ..😆..n after diz one shot or urs ..i ttly consider to b d shmeless LP😆..
n d most romantic one! ..now temme huz romantic?😉😉..

thnxx a lot for dedicating it ! ..n akshiz bday is surely a amzing bday evr evr! ..jzz lovelyy! ..n d comedy btw karan n naitik is also soo good! ..notty gurl 😆..

ovr all ..wt i cn say abt diz is😉 ....its a flawless.😃.freaking😃..rawking😃..mind blowing😛..awesum .😊😊.prettyy😃...beautifull ..😃.n d wy u created d environment is ttly romancticc! ..hatz of mahi ..😍..😍

wid lods of love ..urz pravz! 😃❤️

Edited by pravz_me - 15 years ago

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..Akaisha..

@..Akaisha..

Stunner

Posted: 15 years ago

#15

ohh goddd mahii diiiiiiiiiiiiiiii...........it was a awesome upate noooo words...........sooo beautifully described really very awesome luved itt....thanks for the pm...luv u sooooooooo muchhh..muahh

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Bhavya

@VivaciousBhavya

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#16

honeeeyyyyy !!!! my sweetheart 🤗🤗🤗

no wrds 2 describe hw much i lyked it !!!

luved each n every wrd frm beginning 2 end

it ws freaking awesome dear

splly i luv ur way of explaining each n everything so simply n easily

Naksh ka toh bs kya kehna 😍😍😍

n Karan !!! hayeeeeeeeee.......u toh knw na hw much i luv d name KARAN

it ws damnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn gud !!!!!

u simply rock my sweetheart 🤗🤗🤗🤗

luv u shoooooooooooooooooo muchhhhhhhh

thnxxxxxx alottttt 4 dedicating it 2 us

Edited by VivaciousBhavya - 15 years ago

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-SnowKid-

@-SnowKid-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#17

just AWESOME........................no wards...........👏👏.........................thnx for pm.................................
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black.swan

@black.swan

Navigator

Posted: 15 years ago

#18

Awwww mahiiiiii🤗❤️🤗❤️
superb....
fantastic...
im SPEECHLESS...........
its tooo good
sooooooo ROMANTIC.......and tooo cute
LOVE YOU MAHI....🤗
U r an awesome writer.....keep writing oneshots like this....
sorry for commenting late....
luv
fatima