--pyaar ya dosthi-- naksh ff new part 2 up

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HI!!! everyone. shwetha here again with another fan fiction.
hope u all enjoy reading it.. please ignore the spelling mistakesšŸ˜†
comments and criticism are welcomed.

note: this story is an adaption of a malayalam film



character sketch

rajshekar singhania-
a man of principles, a doting husband and loving father he is the owner of a vast business group spread around the world.he lives in the pink city of jaipur along with his son naitik singhania and his loving wife gayatri singhania.
gayatri singhania-
the wife of rajshekar singhania. she supports her husband in all his decisions like an ideal wife.her husband and son completes her world.
naitik singhania-
the one and only son of rajshekar singhania .tall and handsome he is a playful guy in his twenties , curently studying in excel college for his MBA.he is the captain of his college football team. he owns a yamaha FZ BIKE.

vishambar nath maheshwari-
a loving father who pampers his daughter and leaves no stone unturned to satisfy her wishes. a caring husband. he is the owner of a business consultancy firm( B stars) spread around the world.
lives with his wife rajshri maheshwari and daughter akshara maheshwari.
rajshri maheshwari-
the wife of vishamabar nath maheshwari she is a dutiful wife and a carign mother. she is a relegious person , loves to spend time with her husband and daughter.

akshara maheshwari-
the daughter of vishamr nath maheshwari .a ravishing beauty in her twenties. she is currently studyign in excel cllege for her MBA.acting and aisnging are her pasions and she takes part in the various competitions held at her college.she owns a scooty streak

PROLOGUE
rajshekar singhania and vishambar nath maheshwari were friends from childhood, they studied in the same school in the same class. they graduated from the same college and got married on the same day to their respective lovers. they stay in the same compound
.
ie their houses are not seperated by a wall in the middle but they have two gates for the compound wich lead to their houses.
their balcony's face each other . their children were born on the same day too.
their children too followed the path of their fathers and went to school together wore matching clothes and grew up together. they r now attending college.naitik and akshara share a special bond with each other . they used to share each others things and used to exchange their things. for eg if both of them got a pen then they would eachnage it such atha akshara's pen would be with naitik and naitik's pen with akshara.
if they buy clothes they buy it of the same colour ( eg. red tee and blue jeans for naitik then red top and blue jeans for akshara)
their friends and family knew of it and so they took great care to buy matching things for both of them .

so here goes the story of naitik and akshara.....


part 1
the alrm clock goes of simultaneously in naitik's and akshara's room. both were sleeping peacefully and are annoyed by the alarm's noise. both naitik and akshara shout out in their respective rooms still c.
naiyik:akshara we'll studdy well according to our fathers wishes. we'll get up at six and study our lessons.
akshara: yes naitik u said the right thing we'll make them happy by studying well.
naitik:akshara what are u doing now??
akshara :im going to brush my teeth. what ru doing naitik??
naitik:i started brushing


rajshekar and vishambar are in thier track suits . rajshekar shouts out munna enough of shouting don't waste ur energy shouting out.šŸ˜†šŸ˜ƒ
they both go for their morning walk.
naitik's room
his room neat and clean with posters of bikes and his favourite football stars.naitik suddenly remembers something and gets up suddenly..he rubs his yes sitting ont the bed . its 6 o clock in the morning.he goes to the washroom for a quick wash and is greeted by his mother who had come to give him his bed tea. she was surprised to see naitik awake since usually she had to coax him out of the bed.
naitik greeted her"good morning mamma" and took the tea from her.
he took out his notes and went to the balcony ad sat on his chair.

akshara's room

rajshri comes with akshara's bed tea and sees her sleeping peacefully with the balnket covering her head.rajshri" very god akshara, u were shouting out that u will get up and study everyday and u are sleeping peacefully here.šŸ˜†šŸ˜ƒ be like naitik look how he is studying. akshara" no mamma we made this plan together yesterday he also will be sleeping now.
rajshri: just look at their balcony and see how's he is going thorugh his lessons.
akshara:WHAT??
she gets up suddenly and goes to her balcony. she sees naitik sitting on his chair and reading his notes.
akshara: naitik, ye tu ne kya kiya?? so u were fooling me ryt and u became a good boy ....

it was den she noticed naitik sneaking glances to their neighbour's balcony. she looks over there and sees a girl studying there. naitik was straining to get a look of that girl and in turn he loses his balance and his book goes flying down and falls in the artificial pond in their garden.šŸ˜†šŸ˜ƒšŸ˜†
akshara laughs out loud. he he .. naitk that serves u ryt for fooling me...

naitik is angry but laughs at his own plight.


hope u all liked the above post.😊
waiting for ur comments
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-- Update Index--


chapter 1 -page 1
chapter 2-page 3
Edited by nasco - 15 years ago
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Finally, finally , finallyšŸ‘

you are backk.... waohhhh..

cos we all know you are such a brilliant, awesome, fab writer..

& Me, all & our Forum missed you shooooo mchhhhhhhhhhhhhhh


welcome back sweety....!!šŸ¤—

& Its Dosti for me & you for suree



& Pyaar for our NaKsh


So Its Pyaar & Dosti for mee..!!

Awesome Concept n ideaa.... waitin for moree....thnxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx😃




Edited by starry.phoenix - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey sethušŸ¤—....hws u dear

where were u frm sooooooo long ???
v all missed u shoooooooooo much yaar
well abt d FF.....its amazing
i luved d concept......totally diff. frm show
d starting ws awesomeeeee.....waiting 4 more
do cont. soon
Edited by VivaciousBhavya - 15 years ago
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wow its too good... i luvd da concept... it really very very nyc.. Cont soon..
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wooww...really fab startšŸ‘...loved the intro😃....looking forward the next parts....its really interesting...keep it up!šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ¼

Edited by sia.k_1 - 15 years ago
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wow...iam a fan of ur ffs...and now a new one.....nice start buddyšŸ‘šŸ¼....hmmm.........dosthi se pyaar.......imagine g3 n rbs love storyšŸ˜†...........b/w shwetha,are u a malayali??
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hey nasco

so u r back in action😊😊
i loved d intro n prologuešŸ‘
n d start was awesome.......naksh living in adjescent housesšŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘
n naitik staring at girl next balconyšŸ˜³šŸ˜³šŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰
juzz loved it yaar
m a fan of ur FFs n was missing u😃😃😃
plz PM me next time u updatešŸ˜›šŸ¤—
ALL THE BESTšŸ‘šŸ¼
Edited by divi4u - 15 years ago
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heyyy! ...nyc one ..do continueee!...w8ting 4 more updatezz! ..itz really gud! ..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey shwetha,
naitik as kunjako n akshara as shalini
niram isnt it??
r u a malayalee??

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