Tum Dena Saath Mera-Naksh FF part 13 @ pg 47..

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Nice Update
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hii guys..😃

im FINALLY back with my FF.. this time on special request from lakshmi di.. sorry di.. thoda sa late ho gyi.. actually i was about to update it on saturday itself, but i had to go to school for some project work.. n subah se i had my classes to main ab online aayi hu..😆😆 par dekho.. iss baar sirf aapke kehne par update kar rhi hu.. otherwise ye fir latak jaata..😊 so here i go with 13th part..😃

Part 13 :

Naitik and akshara both get ready and come to the dining hall for breakfast.. they both are late, but g3 doesn't say anything to them..😲😲 she's totally OK with the fact ki bahu der tak soti rhi..😉 so the singhania's have their breakfast, with general discussion going on.. after the breakfast, dj asks naitik to come to the office soon.. as he has to get a work done from him..

in naksh room :

naitik is getting ready.. akshara is providing him with socks, handkerchief, his watch and his wallet.. because she knows.. naitik khud kuch nhi kar sakte..😆😆

Naitik : chahe kuch bhi ho jaaye.. aap kabhi mujhe mera saamaan dena nhi bhulti.. aisa kyon akshara.??

Akshara : kyon ka kya matlab hai naitik.?? ye to mera kaam hai.. main nhi karungi aapke liye ye sab to kaun karega..

Naitik : main khud kar lunga..

Akshara : kyon aap khud kar lenge.?? jab tak main aapke saath hu.. tab tak main hi karungi.. mujhe accha lagta hai.. aap to bus office ka kaam sambhaliye.. ghar ke kaam aur khud ke kaam rehne dijiye.. unn sab ke liye main hu..😃

Naitik : accha.. thik hai.. office se mujhe yaad aaya.. daddaji ne jaldi bulaya hai.. nhi pahucha to daant padegi.. bye akshara.. (and hurriedly leaves)

akshara notices that he has left his handkerchief behind.. but naitik has reached downstairs, and she never calls him from behind.. so she phones him.. naitik is shocked to see her phonecall.. turns back.. and akshara from upstairs, gestures him to come back..

Naitik : kya akshara.. roz main kuch na kuch bhul jaata hu.. aur har baar aap mujhe phone kar ke upar bulati hai.. jabki main neeche hi hota hu..

Akshara : rehne dijiye naitik.. aap ye sab jaan boojh kar karte hai mujhe sab pta hai.. roz apna rumal yahi chod dete hai taki main aapko vapis upar bulau..

Naitik : accha mera to samajh aata hai.. aap kyon mujhe phone karti hai.. aise hi kyon nhi awaz deti.??

Akshara : pta nhi hai aapko.. apshagun hota hai jaate hue ko peeche se bulana..

Naitik : kya apshagun akshara.??

Akshara : bus baatein to inse karao.. ab late nhi ho rhe aap.??

Naitik : oh ha akshara.. accha aa kar baat karunga aapse.. abhi chalta hu..

Akshara : accha naitik.. aur naitik.. mujhe phone karna mat bhuliega..

Naitik : ha akshara.. muje pta hai.. office pahunchte hi phone karna hai mujhe aapko.. aur ek bar office se nikalte hi.. kar lunga phone.. tension mat lijiye.. accha ab main late ho rha hu.. bye!! i love u..😳

Akshara : bye naitik.. i love u too..😳 (n she sees him go.. satisfied that she has done her duty whole-heartedly)

a while later.. naitik ka phone nhi aaya abhi tak.. akshara's is tensed.. though she;s busy with some kitchen work.. her mind is still wondering why hasn't naitik called her till now.. she calls his mobile.. but he doesn;t pick it up.. she calls his office landline.. it's busy.. she's worried.. what might have happened with him.. but putting her negative thoughts away.. she finally calls reception of the office.. only to come to know that naitik has reached the office safely but won't be able to talk to her now, coz he's just too busy.. akshara's fine with it.. as long as naitik is safe and sound..😃😃

to be continued..

sorry for the delay in this part.. was just busy with my studies..

next part also (or i should say as usual😛) will be late because im busy with my half yearlies..😊

so anyways..

comments, complains and suggestions are always welcome..😃

warm regards..

Edited by moonlight08 - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

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im not sure about the PM list..

so if u want the PM please hit the like button and add me to ur buddy list.. otherwise PM nhi aaega aap logo ke paas..😛

thanks..😊

P.S. @nahtani88

thanks for liking the previous part.. did not et time to thank before..😛 apologies for being late..😊

Edited by moonlight08 - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

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diii vryy nyc part..!😃

small bt vryy cutee part it is..!😊

thanks for d pm!

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nasreen

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Posted: 14 years ago

#335

before ur pm come i already read yaar

nice part chota tha par sweet and cute part tha kamudi

i love akshara tension about naitik

thanks for pm

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Originally posted by: fazeel
before ur pm come i already read yaar
nice part chota tha par sweet and cute part tha kamudi

i love akshara tension about naitik

thanks for pm

thanks nasreen di..

thoda chota hi likha hai iss baar.. actually agle part mein jo dikhana tha vo yaha aaega to sara maza kharab ho jaaega.. isliye isko chota kar diya.. next part (jab bhi aaega) lamba hoga hi hoga.. for sure..😊

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pvlaks

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Posted: 14 years ago

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moon light diii 😃 🤗 🤗 🤗
thanku so much dear for the update 😛 loved ur update...actually speaking mere do aadat akshara ko bhi hai...mein bhi hubby ko peeche se aawaz nahi deti 😛 and mein ne unhe kaha hai ki ofc pahunchte hi mujhe call karne ko😛so emotionally attatched to this part...loved it kaumudi😊
whenever u get time pls update ok 😊
All the best for ur studies 😃

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Apoorva_22

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Yeh saare parts itne short kyun hote hai...?😕 Koi nah...Studies are more important na...! U took time to update...yehi badi baat hai..😊🤗

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: pvlaks
moon light diii 😃 🤗 🤗 🤗
thanku so much dear for the update 😛 loved ur update...actually speaking mere do aadat akshara ko bhi hai...mein bhi hubby ko peeche se aawaz nahi deti 😛 and mein ne unhe kaha hai ki ofc pahunchte hi mujhe call karne ko😛so emotionally attatched to this part...loved it kaumudi😊
whenever u get time pls update ok 😊
All the best for ur studies 😃

dii..

im so relieved aapko ye part pasand aaya.. main to soch rhi thi aapko pasand nhi aaya to..😕 thaks for appreciation di..

aap logo ki wajah se hi to ye FF abhi tak zinda hai.. varna kabka antim sanskaar ho chuka hota iska..😆😆

those habits.. i see my mum doing that di.. that's why i incorporated it in here..😊

thanks di for ur blessings.. i promise to try really hard to live upto all ur expectations..😊

Edited by moonlight08 - 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: Apoorva_22
Yeh saare parts itne short kyun hote hai...?😕 Koi nah...Studies are more important na...! U took time to update...yehi badi baat hai..😊🤗

aww thanks's for understanding di..🤗

next part aapke liye hoga.. aur pakka bada likhungi..😊