A poem on NAKSH b4 deir patchup

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Hello every1 Its rare 4 me 2 WRITE SUMTHING but I regularly reads ur posts. Dis time I've written a poem on NAKSH bt the problem is dat I wrote it in January end so its little bit sad. Iwas trying 2 find my diary dat time but I was unsuccessful. So yesterday only I've found my diary so want 2 post dis poem I've changed last paras they r quite interesting. Hope U'll lke dat.

HERE IT IS....

Every day at the computer I gaze
Besotted with this Naksh craze
Forced to watch scenes from the days gone by
Where did my Naksh go, every time I cry?
Oh my friends I have a confession to make
There is only so much a poor girl can take
My longing for Naksh scenes grows astronomically
And the CVs insist on showing Naksh economically
Come on CVs we know it is the recession
But please understand our dire situation
We are entirely and totally Naksh possessed
With Naksh we are collectively obsessed.


I miss the days when Akshara tripped
Naitik's arms to balance she gripped
He gazed at her with such intensity and longing
To see them interact was just plain amazing.

They used to strike sparks of each other
Now we have to make do just seeing them together
Their stolen glances added an air of mystery
Please tell us all that is not history.
You have some constraints we understand
But more Naksh scenes we do demand
This gharelu angle is right now an open sore
Less Naksh is like sprinkling salt and it hurts even more

May I be forthright and give you some advice
Some mechanism you must device
To give us Naksh holics our daily fix
We don't care if Naksh and this track just don't mix
Ideas if you need we will provide
Read the many FFs and you will delight
We look forward to seeing more of Naksh
If not a lot of us may have to say tata
Let it not come to that ' a few scenes a day is all we ask
Come on really is that really such a hard task?


We are yet to see any scene that makes us sappy
You are showing them fighting
I think it is time to show some loving
I think they have earned a honeymoon, don't you agree
I think it is high time they both broke free
Of the family constraints that keep them bound
Stop smirking, hey you know this idea is sound
Please, get them to take a trip together
A business trip at least if not for pleasure.

Let them escape to some romantic destination
Spend a few moments in quiet contemplation
Get to know each other again minus the secrets and the pain
What have you to lose, you have everything to gain
What could they do? How could they the time spend?
We would love to see Naitik play the loving husband
Who woos Akshara with flowers and chocolates
Takes her out on really romantic dates
We would love to see Akshara make him dinner
But this time Naitik eats the food and appreciates her.
Dancing to music and long moonlight walks
In between this they find the time for talks
To each other their hearts they will finally bare
To show each other how much they actually care

Now my friends let us give these people some ideas
honeymoon locations and beautiful spots
where would you like Naksh to go?
what would you like to see Naksh do?

So how was it. Plz be free to tell its my IInd post. Plz haan...

VARUNI


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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey!Varuni................that was really very nice..............keep writing more.................. 😊 👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow...very impressive 👍🏼.
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it's too gud yaar......👏👏👏👏👏
👏👏i really lykd it........

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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome varuni!!!!!!!!!! tooo good!!!!!!
do cont. writing more and more............
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👍🏼 👍🏼 very nice.... 😊
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ya veryyyyyyyyyyyyyy nice👏
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