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Posted: 15 years ago
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When only a doom was about to strike, when only my foolhardiness and folly were about to be made public, when the injuries of my dearer ones were about to be made a subject of social gossip, You appeared!

You arrived shielding and shoring up my world on verge of disintegration. Each of your graceful and mellow steps were lifting my spirits, soothing the self inflicted bruises and yet this welling up of remorse.

You appeared to uphold the honour of my elders and to restore the happiness of the younger ones. I can see the relief and blessings in the eyes and hearts of the elders and delight in the eyes of my younger. You arrived to complete me in front of my Lord where I stood incomplete before.

You appeared, in the shimmering blue lifting the tassels of yellow flowers and my life was restored which I have so foolishly banished on my own. And there stood, beside me, a face with a glow of pristine morning light on it and diffusing her inner serenity in the entire surrounding.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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I have no words but a loud round of applause for such woderful script of the feelings U could write
but ----------------
i wish even naitrik had the same words to say to aksh
the way he is behaving from the precap, seems he is not yet ready to forget & forgive
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: sanw

I have no words but a loud round of applause for such woderful script of the feelings U could write

but ----------------
i wish even naitrik had the same words to say to aksh
the way he is behaving from the precap, seems he is not yet ready to forget & forgive

he will say very soon when he will break his egoz
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hello Friends,

This is the first time that I had posted in this forum though active in other one. This particular scene and its restrained beauty has touched me and hence the urge to write this article. This is providing me with an opportunity to interact in another wonderful IF Forum and I greet you all here.

In the morning I have written rather hurriedly. I posted here and went away to my work. On return I noticed that some points were not conveying what I wanted. So I have edited a few things and hence apology to past readers. Though you must have noticed some grammatical liberties I thank you for indulging me in ignoring them.

A forum is providing us with a wonderful medium of making friends and discusses the topics of mutual interests. I will thank all those who have taken time to read this article and request them to enrich me with their views with reply posts or if not inclined then pressing the like button in the main post if they enjoyed it. This has an added advantage of recognizing the passing of the friends in absence.

I will be replying separately to those encouraging replies already posted .

Thanks again.

Samarth_050

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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow this is so nice iloved it
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@mahi_06

@yrk_fn

@-LifeRocks-

@moonlight08

@ mayurpremmer

Friends, thanks for your encouraging words.

@ sanw

Thanks for visiting again.

i wish even naitrik had the same words to say to aksh…..

sanw, Here is the advantage of a forum. We can have own imaginations and put the words or action in the scripting of our own liking, ignoring the creatives for the moment.

Cheers.

Samarth
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome.................👏.........i wish ur thoughts are transformed into naitik s mind😃............but awesome wordings!!!!! welcome here!!!!! hope u have gr8 fun here!!!😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: karandeewani

awesome.................👏.........i wish ur thoughts are transformed into naitik s mind😃............but awesome wordings!!!!! welcome here!!!!! hope u have gr8 fun here!!!😊

@karandeewani

Belated double thanks for your encouragement and welcome both, as I was away.

All of us would have more fun if the emotions, motives and possible courses are discussed or the mischiefs of the creatives are parodied with relish.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesum.........great work.......👍🏼
👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesum...ths is fantastic... soo truly suits naksh..👏

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