Jaadu ye kya chal gaya(part 16@pg 65 updated) - Page 30

Originally posted by: pankhi

Sorry 4 being unavailabel. Actually i ahd short of time. And forget to read your FF. Sorrry hope u will not punish me 😳😃😃😃😃. Sorry dear. KAan pakad ke sorry😃😃😃😃

~*~ chapter 9 ~*~

Very sweeet. After reading your chap I thought that how can i miss it.😕

NAKSH's cute fighting was gr888. But NAITIK OMG......only kiss kiss kisss. His calculation is too much funny. 5 kisses.....😆Aur us apr ye naya tax system. i think he is inspired from INDIAN GOVT😉😉. But AKSHI si also not so fool. Kya ghumaati ahi baato se. Poor NAITIK ke paas option hi nahi bachta hai. But when he said that AAPSE ACHCHHI TOH SARA HAI. i got shocked. Who is that girl in story???? But AKSHI....she was more shocked thanh me. Afterall hona bhi chahiye uske pyaare hubby ka jo sawaal. HAi. She was shocked completely. asking who is she? when? how? where? 😆😆😆. But NAITIK was too good said AKSHARA ki short form SHARA😉😃😆😳.

But faaling scene was damn cute. I acn imagine when NAITIK holded her in his arm (while sleeping form stairs)😍.

So sweet scenes .

And game rules was mindblowing...ab toh NAITIK ki saari wish puri hogi

Loved your update dear. Awsome job.

~*~ Chapter 10 ~*~

Again super sweet update... But Kya question hai....mindblowing. And score toh usase bhi jyada awsome........😆. AKSHI ke sahi jawaab par NAITIK ko kisssss ....1 kiss toh store bhi ho gaye😆

What?? NAITIK ne bhi sahi answer de diya....???? CAnt expect. But maano ay na maano faayda toh isme NAITIK ak hi hai sabse jyada....(he wil get more & more opportunity )😳

Ye toh wahi baat ho gayi CHITT BHI MERI AUR PATT BHI MERI.........sabse pyaari gift ...watch anhi kISS hai😳. but how AKSHI can say watch...samjhana chahiye na everytime NAITIK demands KISS so what will be correct answer😉 (AKSHI use your brain neither NAITIK will ........ 🤣🤣🤣🤣)

NAITIk's next question was too much. last kab ROMANTIc huyi thi???OMG...roamnce is in NAITIK's blood/ Par AKSHI ne bhi thik hi kaha. Romance toh durr ki baat ahi aap toh ladte hi rehte hai mujhse hamesa. But NAITIK said it is wrong answerrrrr but 4 me its correct😆😳.

Fianlly AKSHI agve up and denied to continue it. PAr NAITIK......OMG....kabhi sudhar nahi sakta. When AKSHI asid mera bhi 1 score hai...how quickly he kissed her...😕😕

he was so fastttttttt . But AKSHI very sweetly give him a kiss...but gain ANITIK ......demanding a kiss on mouth😳😆 .

He always try to shower his love palntssssss . Finally they both decided to retunr hotel.

I loved your upadate. Gr88 job

~*~ Chapter 11 ~*~

Very funny starting dear. Start with reamaing 3 kiss's demand😳😆 Poor AKSHI....😆 Again INTERSET ak dhamki😆. AKSHI said it beautifully ACHCHA THIK AHISOTE RAHIYE....BTW what is surprise gift.

NAKSH's cute fight was sos weet. AAP MERI TAARIF KAB KARTE HAI...SURAJ AAJ KAHA SE NIKLA HAI...&when NAITIk said....HAMESA HI TOH KARTA HU.....was niceeeeeee .

AAP MUJHE TAIYAAR KIJIYE...said by NAITIK........uff he is too muchh. totally besharam😳😆😆😆

OMG..again towel drama.......he is too much yaar. Par AKSHI bhi samajhdaar ho gayi hai....kaha MAIN BAAHR JA RAHI HU AAP KHUD HI LE LIJIYE.......😆 I loved it........😳😳😳

So sweet upadate dear. Gr88 job

This is for u

Hats off to u for your commendable job

Very soon I will read your rest of chaps and give my comment. hope u will not mind and understand my problem😃😳😳😳

Originally posted by: DaZzLiNgShReYa

thanks a lot priya..🤗..i jus luv ur comments🥱.....aur next parts bhi jaldi se kar dena......😉apke comments to meri update se bhi badi hoti hai.......😆😆😆...

~*~ Chapter 12 ~*~

for u

~*~ Chapter 13 ~*~

OMG..very sweet and funny update dear😳😆😆. Really its too funny. I cant control my laughs. NAITIK is not only 2 muchh he is 3,4,5,6.......1000..... much. Uff inka toh petrol hi khatm ho gayaaa. And what is PETROL....???/ KISS.

But when AKSHI cross questioned him...AAJ TAK KITNI LADKI KO UTHAYA HAI.........???/ then he said BAHUT KO UTHAYA HAI.....KATRINA KO SABSE JYADA UTHAYA HAI SAPNO mein

But he is sweet also. Finally AKSHI ne PETROL de hi diy😆😆😆.

Its not fair . I hope he will surprise her gain....but itne sare surprises POOR AKSHI need time 2 cope up from shock of NAITIK's surprises.

Good work

Originally posted by: cute_luv

luvly update dear..!!! do cont soon

Originally posted by: Fan of Juhi

Awesome part dear loved it👏👏👏

Gr888 job👏👏👏

Luv Annie

😉

Originally posted by: moonlight44

awesome dear

Originally posted by: rose_e

Awesome update dear😳Naksh part was very awsomeeeee☺️

wow it was really different the update was very nice, mindblowing, superbbbbbbbbbbbbb👏 keep it on👍🏼 love it 😍 plzz update soon..😃

Originally posted by: sinak

Loved the update