Jaadu ye kya chal gaya(part 16@pg 65 updated)

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ananya_krish

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Posted: 15 years ago

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amamzing shreya:) sorry for posting late...

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Posted: 15 years ago

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wow shreya read all the 12 parts all wer awesome👏

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Sorry for commenting late par I've read it again from the first part n its awesome mindblowin. Really well done and thanx for the PM. 👏

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Shreya

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: sia.k_1
heyyyyy shreya, im replying late..sorry for tht😃
Awesome part yaar...it was fab..n naksh😛

amazing

writing...keep up the gud work !!👏

THANKS SIA........🤗

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Originally posted by: varuniverma
Sorry for commenting late par I've read it again from the first part n its awesome mindblowin. Really well done and thanx for the PM. 👏

THANK U.......

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Posted: 15 years ago

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hey guys.............thats the next part....and thank u all for ur nice response in the previous part..........

PART-13

naitik:par usse pehle akshara......ap ek bahut important chiz bhul rahi hai......😉.
akshara:acha vo kya......😲
naitik:ap bhul rahi hai muje kuch dena.....vahi to mera petrol hai......
akshara:ap koi gaddi hai jo apko petrol chahiye..........vaise bhi muje samaj a gaqaya hai ki apko kya chahiye.....
naitik:acha bataiye.......kya chahiye muje......
akshara:ap rehne dijiye......apko aisa kuch bhi nahi milega jo ap chahte hai........
naitik:nahi muje vo chahiye.....ap janti hai kitni mehnat lagti hai........mai apko hotel se yaha tak apko kande par uthate hue aya hu......meri halat sochiye....vaise bhi ap bahut bhari hai...........mera to sara petrol apko uthane me hi lag gaya......apse bhari ladki ko maine ajtak nahi uthaya...............😉
akshara:oh to ap abhi tak kitni ladkiyo ko utha chuke hai...........🤓
naitik:bahut sari........sabse jyada to maine katrina kalf ko uthaya hua hai apne sapno me......😳
akshara:oh yahi mai sochu ki ap apne sapno me pata nai kya bolte rehte hai........
naitik:acha apko kaise pata ap puri rat muje hi dekhte rehti hai.......mai itna sunder jo hu........
akshara:aisa kuch nahi hai mai to rat ko apne sath hritik roshan ko dekhti hu........
naitik:bas hogaya akshara.....mera bas chale to mai us hritik roshan ka murder hi kar du.............
akshara:acha.........karke to dikhayi..........mai apko nahi chodungi........😡
naitik:maf kijiye modern patni .............pehle to bhartiye patniya apne patiyo ke pair daabati thi aur ap........😭
akshara:naitik apko yad ho to ap muje koi surprise dene wale the.............
naitik:are ha akshara...ap bhi na ..........sadak ke bich me hi shuru ho jati hai.........par pehle muje kiss dijiye varna....😲
akshara:varna.............
naitik:varna mai.............akele vapas chala jaunga ap yaha rahiyega apne hritik roshan ke sath......aur fir akele hi trolley me vapas jaiyega......🥱
akshara:nahi nahi naitik vo tolley duniya ki sabse daravani chiz hai............mai deti hu na..par ankhe band kijiye.......muje sharam ati hai.......😳
naitik:(closing his eyes)oh......thik hai...........
akshara:(kissing him onhis cheek):bas hogayaa.............
naitik:par muje to yaha chahiye thi.......
akshara:abi isi se kam chalaiye.........baki bad me.........bich sadak me hi shuru ho jate hai.......
naitik:thik hai........ab chale...........😳

they both enter the L.P........
akshara:wowwwwwwww..........naitik ye sab kitna sunder hai.......
naitik:ha akshara...........
akshara:par naitik yaha koi bhi nahi hai ..........aisa kyo........
naitik:aisa isliye kyonki...maine ye pura ka pura apke liye buk kiya hua hai........ab ye sab chodiye aur apni ankhe band kijiye............
akshara:par kyo......😲..
naitik:kariye na........
akshara:ok...........😊

they move for a certain distance....
after sometime.........

akshara:naitik mai ankhe khol lu...........
she gets no answer ..............
akshara:(becoming tensed)naitik....naitik.........😔

hope u all like it .........do post comments and pess the like button........
the next part will be full of naksh romance.........

Edited by DaZzLiNgShReYa - 15 years ago

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preksha

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Posted: 15 years ago

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wow shreya awesome wonderfulllllllll😳

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Shreya

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: preksha_naksh
wow shreya awesome wonderfulllllllll😳

thanks pree......

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priya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#279

Sorry 4 being unavailabel. Actually i ahd short of time. And forget to read your FF. Sorrry hope u will not punish me 😳😃😃😃😃. Sorry dear. KAan pakad ke sorry😃😃😃😃

~*~ chapter 9 ~*~

Very sweeet. After reading your chap I thought that how can i miss it.😕

NAKSH's cute fighting was gr888. But NAITIK OMG......only kiss kiss kisss Love Gaze

. His calculation is too much funny. 5 kisses.....😆Aur us apr ye naya tax system. i think he is inspired from INDIAN GOVT😉😉. But AKSHI si also not so fool. Kya ghumaati ahi baato se. Poor NAITIK ke paas option hi nahi bachta hai. But when he said that AAPSE ACHCHHI TOH SARA HAI. i got shocked. Who is that girl in story???? But AKSHI....she was more shocked thanh me. Afterall hona bhi chahiye uske pyaare hubby ka jo sawaal. HAi. She was shocked completely. asking who is she? when? how? where? 😆😆😆. But NAITIK was too good said AKSHARA ki short form SHARA😉😃😆😳.

But faaling scene was damn cute. I acn imagine when NAITIK holded her in his arm (while sleeping form stairs)😍.

So sweet scenes .

And game rules was mindblowing...ab toh NAITIK ki saari wish puri hogi Love You

Loved your update dear. Awsome job.

~*~ Chapter 10 ~*~

Again super sweet update... But Kya question hai....mindblowing. And score toh usase bhi jyada awsome........😆. AKSHI ke sahi jawaab par NAITIK ko kisssss ....1 kiss toh store bhi ho gaye😆

What?? NAITIK ne bhi sahi answer de diya....???? CAnt expect. But maano ay na maano faayda toh isme NAITIK ak hi hai sabse jyada....(he wil get more & more opportunity ) Blow Kiss

😳

Ye toh wahi baat ho gayi CHITT BHI MERI AUR PATT BHI MERI.........sabse pyaari gift ...watch anhi kISS hai😳. but how AKSHI can say watch...samjhana chahiye na everytime NAITIK demands KISS so what will be correct answer😉 (AKSHI use your brain neither NAITIK will ........ 🤣🤣🤣🤣)

NAITIk's next question was too much. last kab ROMANTIc huyi thi???OMG...roamnce is in NAITIK's blood/ Par AKSHI ne bhi thik hi kaha. Romance toh durr ki baat ahi aap toh ladte hi rehte hai mujhse hamesa. But NAITIK said it is wrong answerrrrr but 4 me its correct😆😳.

Fianlly AKSHI agve up and denied to continue it. PAr NAITIK......OMG....kabhi sudhar nahi sakta. When AKSHI asid mera bhi 1 score hai...how quickly he kissed her...😕😕

he was so fastttttttt . But AKSHI very sweetly give him a kiss...but gain ANITIK ......demanding a kiss on mouth😳😆 .

He always try to shower his love palntssssss Valentine heart plant

. Finally they both decided to retunr hotel.

I loved your upadate. Gr88 job

~*~ Chapter 11 ~*~

Very funny starting dear. Start with reamaing 3 kiss's demand😳😆 Poor AKSHI....😆 Again INTERSET ak dhamki😆. AKSHI said it beautifully ACHCHA THIK AHISOTE RAHIYE....BTW what is surprise gift.

NAKSH's cute fight was sos weet. AAP MERI TAARIF KAB KARTE HAI...SURAJ AAJ KAHA SE NIKLA HAI...&when NAITIk said....HAMESA HI TOH KARTA HU.....was niceeeeeee .

AAP MUJHE TAIYAAR KIJIYE...said by NAITIK........uff he is too muchh. totally besharam😳😆😆😆

OMG..again towel drama.......he is too much yaar. Par AKSHI bhi samajhdaar ho gayi hai....kaha MAIN BAAHR JA RAHI HU AAP KHUD HI LE LIJIYE.......😆 I loved it........😳😳😳

So sweet upadate dear. Gr88 job

This is for u

Hats off to u for your commendable job

Very soon I will read your rest of chaps and give my comment. hope u will not mind and understand my problem😃😳😳😳