NAKSH HM IN SWITZERLAND(Updated details on pg1) - Page 7

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Posted: 15 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: A-N-S-H-I-K-A

hey man...just read all d parts...
dey wer amazing!!!
well...in d last part...i really luvd the ending scene!!!
pls cont. soon...
nd add me 2 ur pm list!!!

nd ya, to pm many members altogether, u can do if dey r in ur frend list...
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all the best...

pls cont soon
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anshika!!!

Thanks Anshika! your feedback is very encouraging.
I will definitely view your ff give you feedback.
Also, please do check my other, post here only, "thank god kaka......" IT IS SURE TO KEEP YOU IN SPLITS
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Posted: 15 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: rsk2fan

Thanks Anshika! your feedback is very encouraging.
I will definitely view your ff give you feedback.
Also, please do check my other, post here only, "thank god kaka......" IT IS SURE TO KEEP YOU IN SPLITS



welcum
nd i'll be w8ing 4 ur feedback!!!
i'll also search 4 ur post...so keep w8ing!!!


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sent buddy request...
now pls do pm me!! if u needed!

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Posted: 15 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: rsk2fan

I agree with you. I am also highly senti, you know.
By the way, my name is Renu


hi renu
my name is shikha
nice to meet u
& plz add me as ur buddy in ur buddy list
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Posted: 15 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: SD_SHIKHA


hi renu
my name is shikha
nice to meet u
& plz add me as ur buddy in ur buddy list


thanx to add me as ur buddy
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Posted: 15 years ago
#65
renu ur ff is just awesu,...maine to aaj hi padhe hai all d three parts...i m speechless i just luv it...aapne to jaise phir se hum sab logo main jaan la di...yrkkh to itna boring chal raha hai ki...i waz so unhaapy bt after reading ur ff...i just cant say...luvd it 2 core...plz continue and continue lyk dis...aftr a long tym kuch aacha lag raha hai..waise feelings aa rahein hai...
hope aisa kuch yrkkkh main jaldi dikhayeeeeeeee....
u rokk renu...keep it up!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: skfan

renu ur ff is just awesu,...maine to aaj hi padhe hai all d three parts...i m speechless i just luv it...aapne to jaise phir se hum sab logo main jaan la di...yrkkh to itna boring chal raha hai ki...i waz so unhaapy bt after reading ur ff...i just cant say...luvd it 2 core...plz continue and continue lyk dis...aftr a long tym kuch aacha lag raha hai..waise feelings aa rahein hai...

hope aisa kuch yrkkkh main jaldi dikhayeeeeeeee....
u rokk renu...keep it up!!!

AAPNE 3 hi parts padhen hain ?
4th part is also posted and i am about to post the 5th part also.
PLEASE TELL ME YOUR FAV SCENE OR DIALOGUE FROM EACH PART
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Posted: 15 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: rsk2fan

AAPNE 3 hi parts padhen hain ?
4th part is also posted and i am about to post the 5th part also.
PLEASE TELL ME YOUR FAV SCENE OR DIALOGUE FROM EACH PART


to soch kya rahe plz post kar dijiye
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Posted: 15 years ago
#68

PART 5

NAKSH HM:DAY 2:❤️❤️

Naksh are enjoying the beautiful scenic beauty of Zurich, walking through the streets, holding each others hands, completely and totally lost in each other, laughing and smiling all the way. ❤️

They stop outside some shops, whisper into each others ears, and move on. They do some shopping, and then stop for ice creams. They each pick up a scoop and then, Naitik, very smartly, when Akshara was momentarily looking away, drops his scoop purposely on the ground!

N: Oh no! Meri to icecream gayi! Jaane dijiye, ab doosri icecream lene jayenge to hamen city tour ke liye late ho jayega.

A: Chaliye, koi baat nahi, ab aap meri ice cream se share kar lijiye…

N: Okay, aap kehti hain to.…..theek hai… vaise aapko bata doon….aaj tak maine kisi ke saath bhi ice cream share nahi ki hai…..lekin aapke saath….you know, I don't mind……

He then gives Akshara a very naughty look and Akshara, as usual blushes…and smiles…and both lovingly have a bite alternately…..They start walking away, when suddenly Naitik turns around and gives us viewers a knowing wink!........

They then embark on the city tour and thoroughly enjoy themselves. They click lots of pictures of themselves, of the sights, and of course Naitik, throughout the tour, cannot keep his hands off Akshara.

A: Naitik, aap please…public mein to….Naitik, behave yourself….dekhiye aap aise karenge to kal se main aap ke saath ghoomne nahi aaoongi!

N:Oh really….yeh aapne mujhe pehle kyon nahi bataya?.........Wow……kal poora din……phir to mujhe apne worst behaviour par aana hi padega……………

Naitik looks at her mischievously, and as usual Akshara is left speechless, blushing, angry……all in one……and Akshara promises herself that she will teach Naitik a lesson soon!

Naksh are returning to their hotel, and Akshara holds Naitik's hand and whispers into his ear, "Naitik, aaj jab aap us French aadmi ke saath baatein kar rahe the na, to maine bhi aapke liye ek gift kharida hai. Aap bhi mere saath wahi deal….karenge?"❤️

Naitik cannot believe his ears nor his luck, and says: "Arre deal done! Akshara, you are simply great! Deal finalized! Aur main to bina rone ke hi aapko 10 ke 20 de doonga! Aap kahen to abhi dene shuru kar doon?"❤️

A: Nahin, nahin, Naitik, aaram se. Deal ke anusaar hi chalet hai na…..Aap pehle use kariye aur phir…..woh 10…….theek hai…..tabhi to maza aata hai na……

N: Of course, of course…..oh god…..I just cannot wait…….Akshara, I love you……….really…..

Akshara turns back and winks at us viewers!

They enter their suite and Naitik can barely contain his excitement…..Akshara, please, jaldi dijiye naa… Pleaeaease!

Akshara comes upto him with her gift, romantically cuddles upto him, and says in a sensuous voice-Naitik, yeh mere liye bahut hi special moment hai…….I hope aapko mera gift pasand aaye aur…..aap ise abhi use karenge naa?❤️

Naitik-Ofcourse, Akshara, aap pehli baar mujhe gift de rahi hain aur who bhi itne pyaar se…….I know I will love it and of course I will use it…..(Naitik becomes a little emotional…and slowly he unwraps it……)❤️

He finds a heart shaped red box with a fragrant aroma emerging from it…….he looks deeply into Akshara's eyes and slowly opens the box….he pushes the red petals aside and finds a white t-shirt neatly folded.

N- Oh wow! My favourite colour, aap jaanti thi?

A- Sachcha pyaar karne waale sab pata laga hi lete hain……

Naitik is overwhelmed and slowly unfolds the T-shirt…..and slowly his expressions change from complete baffledness….to bewilderment…..to disbelief….he looks at Akshara……then back to the unfolded t-shirt……

Once again, back to Akshara……who by now is barely able to contain her laughter, and is in splits…… The t-shirt has written over it in bold letters

I am a Gorgeous Adorable Youngie(GAY)
His expressions continue to change from disbelief….to finally a smile…and he hears Akshara, who has by now run far away from him, say- Ab aap promise kijiye ki public mein ab theek se behave karenge……

Naitik-- usse pehle mujhe aapko kuchch prove karna jaroori hai………….(He starts walking towards her menacingly…)…yeh t-shirt mujhe use karna chahiye ki nahin…..yeh aap ab se 2-3 ghante baad bataiyega….okay?......(Now, Akshara is bewildered and ……runs away from him……Naitik runs after her……..)

A—Naitik….please…..I'm sorry…….Naitik………

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Posted: 15 years ago
#69
wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!it was amazing...plssss keep on posting.....the part i loved d most was:

Naksh are returning to their hotel, and Akshara holds Naitik's hand and whispers into his ear, "Naitik, aaj jab aap us French aadmi ke saath baatein kar rahe the na, to maine bhi aapke liye ek gift kharida hai. Aap bhi mere saath wahi deal….karenge?"
Naitik cannot believe his ears nor his luck, and says: "Arre deal done! Akshara, you are simply great! Deal finalized! Aur main to bina rone ke hi aapko 10 ke 20 de doonga! Aap kahen to abhi dene shuru kar doon?"
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Posted: 15 years ago
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part 4 & 5 was waesome..Naksh are returning to their hotel, and Akshara holds Naitik's hand and whispers into his ear, "Naitik, aaj jab aap us French aadmi ke saath baatein kar rahe the na, to maine bhi aapke liye ek gift kharida hai. Aap bhi mere saath wahi deal….karenge?"
Naitik cannot believe his ears nor his luck, and says: "Arre deal done! Akshara, you are simply great! Deal finalized! Aur main to bina rone ke hi aapko 10 ke 20 de doonga! Aap kahen to abhi dene shuru kar doon?"
A: Nahin, nahin, Naitik, aaram se. Deal ke anusaar hi chalet hai na…..Aap pehle use kariye aur phir…..woh 10…….theek hai…..tabhi to maza aata hai na……
N: Of course, of course…..oh god…..I just cannot wait…….Akshara, I love you……….really….liked this scene..and continue soon

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