NAKSH HM IN SWITZERLAND(Updated details on pg1)

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BS999

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Posted: 15 years ago

#101

Part 5

N: Okay, aap kehti hain to.…..theek hai… vaise aapko bata doon….aaj tak maine kisi ke saath bhi ice cream share nahi ki hai…..lekin aapke saath….you know, I don't mind……

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Renu

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Posted: 15 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: BS999
Part 5
N: Okay, aap kehti hain to.?..theek hai? vaise aapko bata doon?.aaj tak maine kisi ke saath bhi ice cream share nahi ki hai?..lekin aapke saath?.you know, I don't mind??

Thanks buddy! aapne bahut sincerely feedback diye hain. I really appreciate that!

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Renu

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Posted: 15 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: SD_SHIKHA

MUJHE TO NAKSH KE LIYE DIABETES BHI MANJOOR HAI

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shikha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: rsk2fan

MUJHE TO NAKSH KE LIYE DIABETES BHI MANJOOR HAI

ok now bye dear
i have to go for sleep
so bye

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Renu

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Posted: 15 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: SD_SHIKHA

ok now bye dear
i have to go for sleep
so bye

GOOD-NIGHT! SWEET DREAMS OF NAKSHLAND!

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ekta

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Posted: 15 years ago

#106

N: woh kya hai Akshara, har kisi ko apne fayde ke bare main sochne ka hak hai na?

A: Achcha, to mujhe rulakar aapka kya fayda hota hai, main bhi to suno Mr. Naitik Singhania?

N: Well,….. sabse pehle to 10 ke 20 ho jaate hain….aur phir…..aur phir…..beautiful Akshara ka transformation passionate Akshara main ho jata hai ……jaise kal raat ko hua ……to maine socha……

Akshara's jaw falls open…….she is blushing….mad….crimson red…..furious…..all in one go and picks up a pillow to punch Naitik…. And then a pillow fight ensues….. with jadoo in the background….and they both finally laughingly collapse onto the bed…….and……………….❤️

one of my very favourite dialogue renu....keep doing d gr8 job...u r dng gr8 job...

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ekta

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Posted: 15 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: SD_SHIKHA

me to yaar
plz update next part very soon
once again hats off & thanks allot

mujhe to har scene aacha lagt hai..i m completely lost in ur ff..plz keep on posting..

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ekta

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Posted: 15 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: BS999
Best from Part 4

A: Achcha, main bhi to sunu, aap ka dil mujhse kya kehna chahta hai? Aur aisa kya banaya hai aapne?

The most precious possession that can ever come
To a man in this world
Is a woman's heart

To me'., my Akshara's heart❤️

My love for Akshara is as boundless as the sea,
The more I give to her,
The more I have,
For both are infinite'❤️
Best of best love you Akshara, I love but only you,
With a love that shall not die
Till the sun grows cold
And the stars grow old
That is Naitik's promise to Akshara,

The love of my life.❤️
: Achcha, to mujhe rulakar aapka kya fayda hota hai, main bhi to suno Mr. Naitik Singhania?
N: Well,'.. sabse pehle to 10 ke 20 ho jaate hain'.aur phir'..aur phir'..beautiful Akshara ka transformation passionate Akshara main ho jata hai ''jaise kal raat ko hua ''to maine socha''

dis is my personal fav even...luv dis part.....amazing lines...

yaar in lines ne to """dil ko chuu liya hai"""....

plz zzz...post d nxt part sson...itna bhi wait karaon humein like d creatives of yrkkh...plzzz..

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Richa

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Posted: 15 years ago

#109

hey renu dear i started reading from part2 aur main padhti gayi padhti gayi , parts khatam ho gaye lekin man nahi bhara .

it was so REALISTIC , AWESOME , LOVELY , MIND-BLOWING, BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN :)

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Renu

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Posted: 15 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: skfan

N: woh kya hai Akshara, har kisi ko apne fayde ke bare main sochne ka hak hai na?

A: Achcha, to mujhe rulakar aapka kya fayda hota hai, main bhi to suno Mr. Naitik Singhania?

N: Well,?.. sabse pehle to 10 ke 20 ho jaate hain?.aur phir?..aur phir?..beautiful Akshara ka transformation passionate Akshara main ho jata hai ??jaise kal raat ko hua ??to maine socha??Akshara's jaw falls open??.she is blushing?.mad?.crimson red?..furious?..all in one go and picks up a pillow to punch Naitik?. And then a pillow fight ensues?.. with jadoo in the background?.and they both finally laughingly collapse onto the bed??.and??????.❤️
one of my very favourite dialogue renu....keep doing d gr8 job...u r dng gr8 job...

Thanks so much for your lovely feedback. It keeps me going. Otherwise the rotlu Maheshwaris are so putting off, you know!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!