LAMHO KI GUZARISH HEIN YEH..PASS AA JAYE!!!!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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😳 😳 ...OK GUYS THIS IS MY VRY FIRST

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HOPE U LIKE IT...(AND PLZ DO COMMENT)...(SO DAT I CAN IMPROVE)



NAITIK AND AKSHARA ARE RETURNING FROM SOMEWHERE.THE MOMENT THEY REACH HOME,IT STARTS RAINING LIGHTLY...AND AKSHARA SAYS 'MEIN CHALTI HU...AAP PARK KARKE ANDAR JALDI AAIYE'..AND SMILES..AND THE MOMENT SHE GETS DOWN IT STARTS RAINING CATS AND DOGS.AND AKSHARA BACKS OFF IN HER SIT,A BIT SAD SAYS,'AAB??KAISE JAUN?'...NAITIK WHO WAS WATCHING AKSHARA FOR SO LONG,SMILES AT HER NAUGHTILY..AKSHARA LOOKS OUUTA WINDOW OF HER SIDE,AND WHEN SHE AGAIN LOOKS AT NAITIK SEES A BLANK DRIVING SIT..AND GETS TENSED AND SAYS ' AAB YEH KAHA CHALE GAYE?'..AND CALLS OUT..'NAITIK!!'AND SUDDENLY NOTICES NAITIK GETTING A SHOWER IN THIS HEAVY RAIN!!!(HEHE..GHAR MEIN TO BATHROOM HEIN NAHI..!!)..AND AKSHARA GETS TENSED AND SAYS SITTING IN THE CAR..'AA TO INKO BUKHAAR AA JAYEGA!!'..NAITIK LOOKS AT AKSHARA FROM THE LAWN AND TELLS HER TO JOIN HIM..BUT AKSHARA IS ADAMANT..SHE WON'T GO..SO NAITIK BHI TO KAAM NAHI HEIN...HE COMES HIMSELF...AND OPENS THE DOOR OF THE CAR OF AKSHI'S SYD..AND USO GODI MEIN UTHA LETA HEIN..AND AKSHARA LOOKS AT HIM WITH BIG BIG EYES..(SHE IS AMAZED WITHIN HERSLF)...NAITIK TAKES HER TO THE LAWN..AND THEN THEN LET AKSHARA GET DOWN.AT THAT VRY MOMENT THUNDER STRIKES WITH FEARY NIOSE..AND AKSHI CLOSES HER EYES T8LY AND HUGS NAITIK T8LY TOO...AND THEN SHE SLOWLY LOOKS AT NAITIK..AND BOTH KEEPS LOOKING A EACH ODR WITHOUT ANY PALAK JHAPAKNA(!!SHO SHWEEET!! 😳 😳)(BG..LAMHO KI GUZARISH HEIN YEH PAAS AA KJAYE..HUM TUM..HUMTUM!!).THEY BRK APART...AND WHEN FINALY THERE EYE CNTCT BRKS... 😉 ..AKSHARA LOOKS DOWN AND BLUSHES..AND THEN LOKS AT NAITIK AND SAYS(SMYLING)..'AAB ANDAR CHALE?..WARNA..'...NAITIK SNEEZES..TWICE..AND AKSHARA(WHO'S HYPERTENSIVE AS HER MOTHER)..SAYS..'DEKHIYE...AAPTO CHIKNE BHI LAGI HEIN..PHIR TO BUKHAAR AA JAYEGI!!!'..NAITIK SAYS(SMYLING)..'CHALE?'..AND THEY START WALKING...THEIR HANDS GET SO CLOSE THAT NAITIK SLOWLY GRIPS TWO FINGERS OF AKSHRA..AND AKSHI LOOKS AT HIM WID AMAZAMENT AND BLUSHES HEAVILY!!(BG..HUM RAHE NA AAB TO HUM ...KHO GAYE HEIN TUJHME SANAM..JANE KYA KASHISH HEIN TERE PYAAR MEIN)

(4 SM REASON NO ONE WAS AT HME THAT DAY)

AT ROOM:

NAITIK,INFRNT OF HIS DRESSING TABLE TRIES TO WIPE HIS HAIR WITH A TOWEL,BUT AS HE CNTINIOUSLY SNEEZES..HE CAN'T WIPE HIS HAIR..AKSHRA NOTICES THIS,AND COMES TOWARDS HIM AND TAKES HIS TOWEL..SO THAT SHE CAN WIPE HIS HAIR..BUT AS SHE LOOKS AT HIM...SHE STARTS LAUGHING...AS NAITIK'S NOSE WAS AS RED AS JOKER'S..AND SAYS'AAP TO BILKOOL JOKER LAGRAHE HEIN!!HAHAHAHAHA'...AND NAITIK IS NOTHING LES...HE ACTS THAT HE IS TOO ANGRY...AND SITS ON THE BED WITH AN ANGRY GESTURE... 😆 ..AKSHARA GETS ON THE BED BEHIND NAITIK ON HER KNEES..AND TRIES TO WIPE HIS HAIR..AND NAITIK DOESN'T LET HER..AND CNTINUOUSLY REMOVES HER HAND..AND AKSHARA GOES ON PLAYING WID HIS HAIR..AND SUDDENLY NAITIK GETS AND IDEA OF GETTING HIS ONLY LOVING WIFE AUR PAAS(AS HE GETS FEW CHANCES.. 😭 😭)..NAITIK SUDDENLY HOLDS HER HAND..AND GIVES HER A HEAVY BLOW..AND AKSHARA FALLS ON HIS LAP!!!!! 😳
SLOWLY NAITIK GETS AKSHARAS BODY ALONG WID HIS ON THE BED...AND SAYS'KYA KAHA THA AAPNE??...JOKER LAGRAHA HU NA?'..AKSHARA SMYLS AND NODS..AND NAITIK COMES CLOSE..AND NAITIK SAYS'PHIR SE KAHIYE..'...AKSHARA BLUSHES A LITTLE AND SAYS ' JOKER'..AND NAITIK COMES CLOSER..AND SAYS AAGAIN 'PHIR SE...'..AKSHI SAYS 'JOKER'...THIS CNTINUES UNTIL THEIR FACE IS ONE CM APART!!!..AND THEN AKSHARA LOOSES HERSELF IN HER BELOVED..AND SAYS 'MERA JOKER'..PULLS HIS NOSE...AND NAITIK COMES SO CLOE THAT UNKI BEECH SAAB DURIYA KAHATM HO GAYI!!!...AND AKSHI CLOSED HER EYES..AND SURRENDERED HERSLF TO HER AND ONLY HER JOKER,NAITIK...



GUYS...I KWN IT WAS LONG...BUT I COULDN;T SHORTEN IT...GUYS PLZ DO FEEL FREE TO CMMNT!!!
I NID TO IMPROVE...AND IF U LYK IT PLZ PRESS THE LIKE BUITTN AND PLZZ COMMENT...AND ABVE ALL..PLZ READ!!!!!!! 😉

LOVE-

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Posted: 16 years ago
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guys plzz....shama kaar dena yaro...as i am nt dat gud at hindi...as um a bangladeshi!!!!!! 😳

and plzzzzz comment!!!!!
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is it dat bad?????????
no cmmnt??? 😭
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Posted: 16 years ago
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it was really good....write soon

and can u write in simple letters😊

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Originally posted by: yusra12

it was really good....write soon

and can u write in simple letters😊




i didn't get...simple letters???

and thnx!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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omg.....dat was damn romantic.........it was awesome!!!!!!!...u shld really write more dear....keep up d gd work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Originally posted by: ArchanaSub

omg.....dat was damn romantic.........it was awesome!!!!!!!...u shld really write more dear....keep up d gd work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



thank u...thnk u sooo much...i'll try me best to give naksh writings to u! 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Please try to avoid posting in all caps as it is considered shouting on the net. Thank you.
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Originally posted by: -Ami-

Please try to avoid posting in all caps as it is considered shouting on the net. Thank you.



sorry..actually mujhe yeh bataa tha...but still i wrote it in caps...as i had sm prbs wid the keyboard of mine!! 😕 😕 😕

sorry!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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ok....i give up....

see i couldn't attract any1 by my writing!

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