FF:PART 2 updated on pg 1~*~*~*FF of NAKASH~*~*~

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey guyz dis is a new ff of naitik and akshara, and this will be starting at where it left off well almost where it left off, where ever1 is mad at their so called "beti"

1st PART

A= Akshara

N= Naitik

A standing alone, and crying😭

A: I neva thought dat telling the truth will be so harmful' ever1 is mad at me main kasey yeh fix karo gi? I just wanted a fresh start with me saas and I thought that she will be veri happy knowing that her bahu doesn't lie'

A leaves to her room crying and sees N on the bed lying with his back towards A

A: {in her heart} I thought that from ever1 else N would understand me bt I guess I was wrong

A sits on the bed crying 😭more and goes to sleep.

Next day'

N gets up b4 A

N:{saying this in his heart} last nite wot happened should have nt happened, why didn't A listen to me, mayb she was rite on her side that she wanted to start fresh wid ma widout any lies, bt she should hve thought about the outcomes this is so bad😕

A gets up and sees N worried

A: N'

N is about to go without listening to A, when'

A: N, plz listen to me

N: wot is it A

A: look N wot happened last nite'

N: just leave it, wot had to happen has happened now no one can do anything about it

A: bt N plz listen to me, if u think that wot I did was veri worng then yell at me scream at me bt plz don't keep to silence, your silence is killing me'

A starts crying, N goes to her

N: look A plz don't cry, I know wot u did was rite, you wanted a fresh start without any lies

A: then N why are you acting so rudely with me

N: becuz I stupid and I'm sori for my behavior👏

A: it okay, u don't know how much beta I feel

A has a tear drop on her check and N wipes her tear off saying

N: very since u hve came to this house you hve been crying and crying I'm such a bad person

A blushes😳 and says its okay and then they have a cute '👏

And then G ma sees them hugging and thinks that my son doesn't care me or my feeling any more and leaves crying'.

Hope u guyz like it, promise to write if I get a gud response,, and plz plz tell me how u left about it wheater it was good or bad plz leave commentsss
And guyz if you have any sugesstions of a tittle for this ff plz leave it in your comments...😛
Edited by Mina H - 15 years ago

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Posted: 15 years ago
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dat was awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.........it was beautifully written n d scenes wer portrayed v.well.....plz do cont soon....im waitin n waitin n waitin nwaitin....
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2end PART
G ma in her room thinking: my own son changed in days after marriage, he doesn't care for my feeling, and now he doesn't like the stuff that I give him'

Back A&N's room

N&A r still hugging

A: thanks N for everything'and break their hug

N: no problem A and once again I'm sori for acting the way I did

A: it okay, I think that we should go to G ma and say sori

N: yes lets get changed and then we go

A takes out a saree and puts it on the bed

N: A are u going to wear this

A: yes, why

N: oh'ummm

A: anything wrong

N: no its just dat'

A: wot N

N: I don't like it much

A: oh' then which one should I wear?

N goes to their closet and starts to look around and takes out a beautiful baby pink saree and tells her to wear

A: oh N its beautiful, bt I don't remember this saree

N: yes actually I bought it b4 our marriage and I wanted to give it to you, bt always sumthing would cum up

A: oh thank you N it's lovely, I'll get ready now'

N: okay

A: I going to get ready now

N: okay A I got it the 1st time

A: I mean can u go out side'

N: oh' do I have to'

A: yes

N: bt then wot will evr1 think?

A: then N how can I change my clothes?

N: I promise I won't turn around

A: bt N

N goes close to A and puts his finger on her lips

N: sshhhh I promise nt to turn around A

A: yea bt I---

N: shh go and change, and by me staying in the room I'll get to see you

A moves back

A: wot u just said that you wouldn't look

N: well I'll have to look

A: bt u said that u promised

N laughs

N: oh I mean I'll get to see you 1st in that saree dat I got

A blushes

A: oh I'll change....
Hope u guyz like it, and i hope to get more comments this timeee 😛
Edited by Mina H - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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2nd part isnt nice..!i'm so sorrie!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey its rlly nice...pls continue soon
lovely...lol such suspense and innocent romance....woww..
falling in love with it...:)..pls update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey nice reaaly and cute part..continue soon..
Edited by zummi03 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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oh datz was very beautiful dear......continue lik dis plz....update soon.......it was very sweet of naitik 2 get her a saree n teasin aks......im waitin eagerly 4 ure next update........
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey really a good part..........continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#9
it was amazing pls continue writing it was very good...pls update d next part soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice update yaar!!
really lovely ff.

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