Hey guys,
feel the way this RR problem has been dragged and Naitik has been treating aks has drived us all insane!Atleast me for sure!I for the first time am dreading yeh rishta today as instead of getting better its getting worse and worse😡Anyway I thought of an idea of Naksh patch up today while jogging!I swear one hour when i was jogging all i was thinking of was NAKSH!anywayhere i have written down my idea.Its totally my imagination!(Before anyone wants to bash me up after todays epi)Anyway Im continuing after yesterdays epi!
Naitik enters his room angrily and throws everything on the floor.His laptop falls on the floor and Aksharas picture breaks on the screen.He goes and picks it up and stares at it.She looks so happy in it.This was taken before their engagment and he cant stop himself from gazing into her eyes filled with love.He then remembers all their moments -The hug,the lat scene,him kissing her,the engagement scene,the mandir scene.He then remembers what RR said and their last convo about RR where she lied to him.Now he wonders whether that love in her eyes was for him or RR?😕In confusion he leaves his laptop and gets up in frustration.
His mother Gayatri enters and asks him whats wrong?Why did he leave the mehendi like that?
Naitik-Ma I dont want to talk about it
Gayatir -Beta tell me,,I have never seen u so stressed before..Do u not wanna get married to akshara?
Naitik-Ma I dont want to talk about it
Gaya-Beta tell me did aks do somehing?
Naitik-Ma Akshara and RR's wedding was almost finalised.
Gaya SHOCKED and then she puts her hand on his shoulder and aks him that all?
Naitik looks up stunned at her reaction and says thats all?I mean dint u hear me right?
Gaya-Munna,Relationships are made by god.RR's mother told me about some rishta for which the3y had come to udiapur but dint specify whos.Their rishtadnt work out and they rejected aks due tosoem misunderstaing.Even RR's mom told me that Aks is a very good girl.It was just a misunderstanding.Do u want to punish her for something thats not even her fault?
Naitik doesnt reply.
Gaya-Munna,im talking to u.Forget her ur punishing urself.Dont u love her?Tell me honeslty?
Naitik remembering all naksh moments.
Naitik -I love her mom but..
Gaya interupts so then what?when u love her and she loves u then why should her paste a problem?
Naitik-How do u she loves me?
Gayatri -Myabe u havent read her eyes but i did.
Gayatri-I feel u both need to talk.
Naitik-- will she talk to me now?After i behaved with that way?I hurt her so badly.(Remebers the mehendi scene)
Gayatri -Ask her only
Naitik confused.
Aks enters the Naitiks room in her mehendi lehenga with the mehendi.She still has tears.
Naitik is stunned.Gaya tells him she saw aks crying and when he left that way she understood so she got her here so they could talk.
Naitik -what about the function?
Gayatri-all that we will handle u talk now.When ul are done we will go back.
Gaya smiles at them and leaves.
Aks walks towards Naitik.They stare at each other.
I have put the edited part in PINK.so its easier to continue!
Akshara walks towards naitik and stand in front of him.Tears roll down her cheeks.
Naitik tries to say something but Aks puts her hand in front of his mouth and starts speaking.
Aks-Naitikji hw could u even think that I wont talk to u?
Naitik-Aksharaji I hurt u today..Im responsible for the tears in ur eyes.
Aks-You are also responsible fr many other things naitikji.Now that ur talking about responsibilty let me tell u.Your responsible for me smiling for no reason,me thinking about u when im supposed to be studying,me suddenly being obsessed with the phone,me believeing in things i never did,me falling in love with love songs,my heart beats increasing whenever i hear ur name,my heart skipping beats whenever u come near and...(stops midway staring intohis eyes)
Naitik-Aur?aksharaji why did u stop?
Akshara-why do you care?You toh always say what u have to and leave.Never wait for for what i have to say.
Naitik-Im waiting now
aks(blushing)-You know what i want to say.
Naitik-really what?
Aks-our wedding is trw naitikji .i want a happy wedding.Its a girls dream that she has the perfect wedding and I dont want to ruin ours.I want to clear everything.
Naitik -Did u like rr?
Aks-Yes I did but it was a mild crush.But at that time it seemed huge as i never liked anyone like that before besides Hrithik.But now I realise...
Naitik-realise what aksharaji?
Aks-What love is..I love u naitikji LIKE i have never loved anyone before.Yes I did like RR but that was before i met u.After i have met u all i think about is you.
Naitik smiles and remembers all their moments.He gazes into aks 's eyes and wonders how he could ever hurt her.he wipes her tears and hugs her.
Naitik-I love you aksharaji.Im sorry in my love for u i was so blind i couldnt see the truth.
Aks-Its ok naitikji.All that matters is tomorrows our wedding now everyhing is fine so Im happy.
Naitik-everything is not done yet.
Aks comesout from his embrace shocked.
Naitik-U still havent showed me ur mehendi.
Aks (blushes)-Oh that.She lifts her hands to show her dark mehendi.
Naitik-did u find ur N?
Aks-I fond my naitikji and my smile today.
She looks up at him and smiles
Aks-I havent seen my mehendi that closely yet.
Naitik -then we must
he takes aks hands in his hands..
They spot an N.
She blushes and says she knows that even if they dint find it he was her only soulmate.
Naitik-You know what girls say that if the mehendi is dark ur husband will love u..Yours is so dark.
Aks-I dont need the mehendi to tell me that.I know that😳
She blushes.
Aks-since when do u know what girls say?i thought u find it funny
Naitik-Nt since i fell in love with u.
They both stare at each other.Jadoo yeh kya plays.he is still holding her hands.
Rashmi coughs.
They both turn and see her smiling.She says sorry to interupt but only one day left then no interrupotion!Mehendi function for now!Naniji must be driving everyone mad!Aks and naitik realise they must leave.But when they leave this time together to go its different.The both are holdign hands and smiling .
Do comment!Its a bit bold towards the end!but neverthe less!
Sanjana
Edited by angelonearth - 16 years ago
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