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Posted: 16 years ago
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well this oneshot is dedicated to ilovenaksh
thnx for ur wonderful comments.

akshara and naitik r married and they go for a party thrown up by naitik's friends including mohit.
akshara was dressed in a white and blue colour saree with matching jewellery . naitik's heart skiped a bet when he saw akshara coming down the stairs. he stood staring at her and was brought back to his senses by reshmi.he changed the topic and naitik complimented his mom for her saree selection.reshmi teased them that they all understood that he liked the seelction from the long stare he gave akshara.
akshara blushed and her face turned pink☺️
gayatri asked them when wuld they come back and naitik told that they would be pretty late and he tells them that he'll use the spare key to open the door and she doesn't have to wait fort hem.
naksha was welcomed in a grand way. after exchanging the greetings all the couples were invited to dance and especially naksha.akshara could not refuse when naitik looked at her so cutely. she agreed and they both moved to the dance floor.
naitik took akshara's hands and placed it on his shoulder and he put his hand on her waist. they dancd to a slow music and was apllauded by them all. it was really late when the party got over and they were driving back when the car abruptly stopped. naitik got out to check the problem.they had a falat tyre . fortunately they had a spare one with them. naitik changed the tyre with the help of akshara.they were abt to get into the car when it started raining.naitik was abt to get into the car when he saw akshara enjoying the rain. he went to her.he hugged her as they were alone and he kissed her neck.akshara hgged him back and after sometime they break the hug and suddenly it dawns to them that f they stand in the rain like this both of them would be down with fever so they get into the car and drive back home.
they quietly go to their room and naitik closed the door he immediately goes to change.while akshara stood in front of the mirror thinking about what happened tday.she felt so happy. she hadn't seen naitik come out of the bathrrom clothed in atowel. he saw her standing in front of the mirror .he came up behind her and hugged her. he asked her if she neded help in changing and she blushed.but before she culd resist he caught her pallu and she culdn't resist she felt herself going weak.he lifted her and placed her on the bed. he kissed her lips and she reciprocated it.he kissed her neck and started kissing her down.she lost herself to her man and they made their mariage true in all senses
hope u all liked this oneshot.😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesome Mindblowing👏👏👏
It was shooooooooo cute
specially deir roomscene 😍
I hiope u dont mind
I love ur ff nd ur one shots but I think some of ur scenes dont get proper ebding dey start off very well either dey lose deir pace in middle or at d end not all only few I think soo
oderwise I simply love ur work
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Posted: 16 years ago
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it was really nice!!!just too good!!!i always loved ur work and will keep loving it!!please dont stop writing and post the update to ur ff soon or write ur oneshot!!i really like them a lot!!thankyou so much
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sanayaa

awesome Mindblowing👏👏👏
It was shooooooooo cute
specially deir roomscene 😍
I hiope u dont mind
I love ur ff nd ur one shots but I think some of ur scenes dont get proper ebding dey start off very well either dey lose deir pace in middle or at d end not all only few I think soo
oderwise I simply love ur work


well thnx for telling me!
ill try giving everything a proper ending.will rectify this in my coming oneshots and ff's😊
i din't mind it at all!!👍🏼
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: nasco


well thnx for telling me! Well shweety thanks for giving us such nice ff nd one shots😊
ill try giving everything a proper ending.will rectify this in my coming oneshots and ff's😊
i din't mind it at all!!👍🏼


Keep up d good work😊
Edited by Sanayaa - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thankyou so much nasco for dedicating it to me!!i rlly love ur ffs and oneshots!! ssrsly!! im glad u like my comments and srsly they are all true!!thankyou
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Posted: 16 years ago
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the bed rum scene was jus too gud...........keep it up:)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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oh awesome great job i am always waiting for ur naksh scenes by the way when r u gonna write next coz i am really despirate.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey nice one yar.............👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: ahana2009

the bed rum scene was jus too gud...........keep it up:)


im happy that u liked it.😊

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