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Posted: 16 years ago
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Really sorry for continuing as late as this!😕😛 bt hre i am......... updatingg the nxt part fr u all 😃
Part 2

"Akshara.... akshara.... darling get up..... dekho pooja ki tayyari karni hai...... aur tu abhi tak sorahi hai!?"
Akshi's mom called out.... nd then went into the kitchen for the rest of the preparations.
Akshara is still sleepingg.....
and yeah instead... now she has her pillow in her arms while layingg.... as if hugging sum1.... and a deep smile on her face. Her blanket coveringg almost the whole of her face... bt v cud still c da smile..... the smile which was direct from the heart.... not a gloomy 1.... infact...... it seemed she was shy aswell....
Which points to a fact that she was dreaming about sum1........
But who was tht sum1 she was dreaming r thinkingg about??
Maybe she herself did not know!
"uff yeh larki bhii naa.................... - arey Dhaniya... jaa dekh kar aa akshara uthi k nhii.."
Lata tells Dhaniya..
"Ji abhi dekh kar aate hain.."
Dhaniya calls off while goingg 2 akshara's room.
"Haye mori mayya!.... akshara didi aap abhi tak nhi uthi....... ab tho bari maa bht naraaz ho jayengi uth jaiye akshara didi" Dhaniya is tryingg hard 2 wake akshara up....
"haan haan Dhaniya.... uth gayee tu bhi naa..."
She gets irritated a little bt then smiles at dhaniya... and leaves for the toilet.
Dhaniya smiles... and goes down.
"arey Varsha tu! :]" Lata calls out, after seeing varsha at the door.
"Ji woh, maa ne bola aaj pooja hai tho mien thori madad kardoon jaldi aake.... Akshi uthi nhii kiya ??"
Varsha asks noticing the quite atmosphere and noticing that akshi wasnt 2 b seen anywhere here.
"Arey nahi beta... pata nahi kal raat ko shayad der se soi thi,..... abhi bheja hai dhaniya ko ussey uthaaney..."
She is still talking when varsha interrepts...
"Loh!... Finally!" and smiles...
Lata looks behind 2 c as 2 what was Varsha reffering to...
and it was Akshara.... The Majesty hehe.... coming down the stairs with a BIG GRIN on her face..
"VARSHAAAA" she comes and runs 2 varsha...
whilst she is going into a hug with Varsha.... her mom beats her lightly on the back of her head..
"Akshara tujhe sharam nhii aari? ... pagli waqt dekh....... itni der hogayee hai....."
"Acha naa maa..." she ignores and embraces Varsha...
Varsha smiles... and hugs her tighter.
"Chalo.... ab tum dono aao madat karne naashtey ke baad mandir jana hai... aur pooja k liye kuch saamaan bhi laana hai..." Lata informs them.
Throughout Varsha's eyes are luking for sum1...
Akshara is surprised...
"oye Varsha... mien tho yahan hoon... tho tujhe talaash kiski hai??"
She asks.... casually...
"umm.. wohh... mjhe?? nhii tho.... mera matlab..."
Her tongue twists nd she gets all ruffled...
"Acha khair chor.... sun.... tu yehi pehenri hai Pooja mien??"
Akshara asks Varsha..
"Haan.... kyun theek nhii hain?"
Varsha asks a little tensed and sad..
"Arey nhii pagli bauhat acha hai... mien issliye poochri thi k phir mien bhi tere jaisa colour pehnoongi"
Akshara tells her.... keeping her hand on varsha's dress.
"Ohh acha :]"
Varsha smiles and so soes Akshara.
POOJA
The guests have started coming.
Lata asks Vishambharnath...
"suniye... yeh ladka kahan reh gaya...... sab log aana shuroo hogaye hain!"
"Zaroor koi zaroori kaam hoga... aata hi hoga.... tum Mrs. Saxena k paas jao woh aapko dhoondrahi theen"
He tells her
"Ji achaa.."
Akshara and Varsha are settingg sum plates and flowers....
Shaurya is still not at home.
Varsha's eyes r continously lukingg fr Shaurya as she dznt kno dat hes gone out.....
Akshara sees this and smiles.
She comes to Varsha.
"kiya baat hai varsha?,,,,,are u lukingg fr sumthingg??"
"umm no.."
sayingg dis...she slips....nd is gonna fall down bt....bt sum1 catches her......
yaar,.... here....
well.... i know... its a lil boringg abhi bhi...
bt im sure when its goingg with the flow...
the next parts... u'll surely find ineterestingg...
Comments..Suggestions and Criticism is all welcm :]
i'll try making it as interestingg as i can and also... will try satisfying both NaKsh nd ShaVa fans... :]
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Posted: 16 years ago
#52
kwl...the...intro starts great...i really like the story line to it cant wait to hear about the story more
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: zumra03

it was good...continue soon....

thnxx sweety
sure i will!
Keep Readngg!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: premsONLYmine

kwl...the...intro starts great...i really like the story line to it cant wait to hear about the story more

aawh thnxx a lott Miss Baddy 😉
hehe
sure.... will cont asap!
thnxx fr readingg nd commentingg 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
#55
great going yaar......

please continue writing......


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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: -RAiNA-

great going yaar......

please continue writing......


thnxx a lott Raina!!!
Keep Readingg
😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
#57
nice part................
cont. a bit faster plzzz...................................
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: shristi sarda

nice part................
cont. a bit faster plzzz...................................

thnxx
LOL
yaar im really bzy...
nd hve 2 manage a cpl of FFz nd other things aswell..
bt will surely try!
thnxx
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Posted: 16 years ago
#59
Hai mori maiya itna late update
never mind d part was rocking nd interesting too
Akshi nd Varsha wearing dresses of same colour will lokk so cute ind show
Varsha is continuously looking for Shaurya so sweet
Witing for d next part nd hope to see Naitik also nd Shava romance also
Awesome update


Thanks for d pm
Take ur time to update
Edited by Sanayaa - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#60
hey Reeno..nice part..n i dint noe u used 2 rite FF's b4 too..!
Akshara is just lyk most of us..wakin up late..😛..n Varsha is totally in <3 wid Shaurya..n wans 2 b wid him awl d time..n Akshara & Varsha seem 2 d damn gud frnds..same as d show..
Shaurya catches hold of Varsha..how sweet..😳
i'm lukn fwd 2 Naitik's entry
Srry 4 d shrt comment
Update soon
-Aish

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