Piya Bawri-Rituraj and Akshara-Ch 3

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POOJA

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Posted: 16 years ago

😳 FF on the Love Story of Rituraj andAkshara😳

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I really love the pair of Rituraj and Akshara and it's really sad to know that rituraj's role is over.So,I have tried to resurrect him through my FF.I hope all the fans of this adorable jodi will love this ff.

The story begins from the point when Shaurya and Varsha have got married and Akshara hears about the denial of the marriage proposal by Rituraj's family.

😳CHAPTER ONE😳

Akshara is all heart broken and all her dreams and desires crumble down in a rubble of pain and sorrow.The words of Shankari Tai echo in her ears making her all the more sad.She rushes to her room in all tears and barricades herself there far from the functions taking place in the house.She sits on the floor with her head resting on the bed and tears gushed out of her melancholic eyes.She looked up and saw her reflection in the mirror and Rituraj stood there smiling at her.She forgets all her pain and gets lost in his loving eyes.He walks towards her and holds out his hand to her.She looks up at him and shyly lifts her hand towards his hand,but before he could her hand,he disappears leaving her shocked.She comes back to reality and throws her bangle at the mirror which shatters into a million pieces just like her innocent heart.On hearing the shattering sound her mum comes running into her room and shuts the door behind her secretly.She runs towards Akshara.

"Akshara,beta what happened?What have you done?OMG😲did you hurt yourself?" she looks at her frantically and hugs her.😭

"Ma..." she too hugs her tightly crying out her heart.😭

"Meri bachi...chup ho ja...you've heard everything? OMG😭😭Why has this happened to my child?"

Akshara is all shattered and her mum can't ber to see her in this plight.

"Ma...why has this happened to me?...kya mein itni buri hoon..."😭😭😭

"No,no my child,calm down...they don't know your worth...he was not meant for you...maybe God wants you to get married to the best boy in this world,and one who rejects my princess is definitely not the best boy..."she smiles😊 "Maybe the right thing happened.Forget him my child .Now,co'mmon wipe your tears and come down.All the guests are waiting down to see you,after all it's your dadu's wedding.If they don't see you,they'll be sceptical."😕😕

"Ma..." she's still crying.😭😭😭

After a few minutes...

Rajshri brings Akshara down and they both attend the function with others.Soon after the functions get over and Shaurya and Varsha are sent into their room,the news of Akshara's rejection breaks out to the entire family.Akshara stands petrified as if all life was sucked out of her,except for the tears rolling down her cheeks.😭😭😭

Edited by poohtarang - 16 years ago

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Piya

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Posted: 16 years ago

Oh it's great but when I first read the title I was like eh? what about me?? 😆

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😳CHAPTER TWO😳

The news is out and Vishambar Nath is furious at Rituraj's family's decision.

He asks Rajshri,"Did Shankari Tai tell you the reason?This is so ridiculous.I want to talk to them right now...give me the phone.😡😡😡"

"Calm down please...it's not right to call them now at this time.We'll call them tomorrow morning.Please calm down...Shaurya and Varsha are going to start a new life and if they come to know of this they will be very sad."

"Yeah,you are right.I'll call them tomorrow...they better give me a valid reason or all our family ties would turn into feud😡😡"He sits down and suddenly asks "Where's Akshara?"

"She's in her room,she's greatly disturbed...my poor child...why has Mata Rani done this to her?I can't tolerate tears in her eyes.She has almost become a stone."

"It's our fault,we shouldn't have given so much of importance to the proposal.We all forced her to knit dreams and she started dreaming about her new family.It's all our fault.I feel so guilty...I should have examined the proposal correctly before confirming it."

"Please don't lose hope...So what if this proposal has not worked,our Akshara will get better guys than him."

"Yes...I know that.My daughter is one in a million."😭😳😳

Meanwhile in the room Akshara is lying on her bed and she's not asleep.Her eyes are all wet with tears and she stares at the roof lifelessly.Suddenly a flash of Rituraj's image comes to her mind and she gets up and rushes to her idol of Lord Krishna😳.

"O lord,What wrong have i done that you are tormenting me like this...I just want to forget him😭...He was nothing to me,noone to me,no one...please remove him from my thoughts ,my heart..."😭

At Rituraj's place

Rituraj is not at his home.He's gone out of India for some business trip.

His parents get a call in the morning from Vishambar Nath.They look terrified😕😕.

Vish asks, "I've been told by Shankari Tai that you are not interested in this proposal.Why didn't you tell us straight away then.You've hurt my daughter's heart and i will never forgive you for this."

"Err...rr...😕Vishambar ji...we are extremely sorry,we wanted to inform you directly but we didn't had the courage to tell you this,since we have a friendly relationship.The problem is in the Kundali...Her kundali doesn't match with Rituraj's kundali...There are many Doshas in her kundali.Our pandit told us if they both got married Rituraj would die...Now you only tell me what could have we done?We are his parents after all.😕😕"

Vishambar Nath sighs ,"I'm sorry for being so irrational...I am a daughter's father afterall and i can't see tears in my daughter's eyes that is why i lost my temper...I hope we're still friends."

"Ofcourse,but 'am extremely sad to know that we can't be relatives.Anyways,Akshara will get a good husband.She's a very nice girl."

Edited by poohtarang - 16 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago

Thank you all for liking the story.i'll try to update soon.

Love PJ😃

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CHAPTER THREE

As time passed by,everyone tried to cope up with the disturbing truth.They were coming in terms to it slowly,but it was very hard for Akshara to forget Rituraj, afterall she had given him a place in her heart.He was her first love.😳

Rituraj returns back to India after his trip and is highly infuriated and heartbroken when the news is broken to him by his parents.😕

"Ma..Baba...you both lied to me that you had confirmed the proposal...how could you do this to me,your own son?😡"

His parents try to pacify him and describe to him the consequences of the marriage.

He turns to them angrily😡,

"What's wrong with you people?You didn't even think it right to talk to me first and know what i want before breaking off the proposal.Dad,this is wrong...I need to talk to them."

"No,you won't we've already informed them about the kundali dosh and they've accepted it."

"Ma...they might have accepted it...but what about Akshara??Huh!!"

"What about her?She will listen to what her family tells her that's it..now just forget about all these things and start afresh."

"It's so easy for you to say START AFRESH...but you know what I LOVE HER and I have given her hope...i have lighted the lamp of love in her heart and i can't betray her...She can never forget me,and me neither...So,Baba either you come with me to their home or i'll go and tell them my decision."

"Beta...the kundali never lies...it says that you'll die if you marry her..." sobs his mum.😭😭

"I don't care Ma...i just don't care...I just know that i love her and i can't leave her in the middle of the way to a life which i promised to her."

"You are defying the customs...and.."

"Baba...I believe in god and not in these superstitions...if i am to die after marrying her...i'd rather prefer to die than betraying her...These superstitions can't stop me from loving her, you both know that"

He goes out angrily😡...

At Akshara's house...

There was noone at her house..everyone had gone to the Shiva temple to perform a MAHAMRITYUNJAY YAGYA to remove all the doshas and negative energy from their family.Only Dhaniya and Bhola were at home along with Akshara who wasn't well and so couldn't go to the temple.Varsha was with her but Shaurya brought her to the temple some time ago.

Akshara was in her room arranging her wardrobe...She pulled out a blue duppatta from beneath a pile of her neatly arranged dresses and remembered...

The last time they met at the hotel when Varsha took her to meet him...He gave her this duppatta...

"I wanted to give this to you,but i didn't know how...but luckily you are here and i got a chance to give this to you..."😳

"No..no...i can't take this.." fumbled Akshara nervously...😕

but he held her hand and placed it into her hand...She blushed and withdrew her hand😳😳

"Akshara...I'm sorry...I called your name...i hope it's okay...I..."

"It's very late now...today is Varsha's engagement...we have to go..." and she turns to leave...when he pulls her duppatta...and she halts nervously,her heart leaps and her face becomes scarlet😳😳

"You know this duppatta was an excuse..to see you,and i guess God too wants us to be together that is why we both have met..."

She stands there blushing and feeling happy in her heart.😳😳😳

"Leave me please...i need to go."

He leaves her duppatta...and she turns and looks at him...He smiles at her and gestures her to go...She too blushes and runs away...😳

He shouts from behind...

"I'll see you soon...but next time i won't let you go..."😳

Akshara's heart bubbles with love...love had blossomed in her innocent heart.She was in love with him...

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