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Mahi

@Mannmohanaa

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Posted: 7 years ago

#21

I swear I was missing this story ever since yesterday Sid Purva happened

I was gonna find it and ping you

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Mahi

@Mannmohanaa

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Posted: 7 years ago

#22

OMG

😭

I was so absorbed into this

I cannot express the level of love I have for your writing.

It is so so so overwhelming

This just had me so emotional. Sacchhiii!!!

Damn, how much he loves these two 😭

Karthik Sid was just wow!

It was mesmerising. I couldn't hold back from reading this and I'll give a much more detailed review soon

But most importantly, you rock girl

Every bit mean this. Extraordinary writing and bang on emotions

You just create a world of your own in which I get lost and it keeps getting better!!!!

Muahhh

Edited by ..AjabdeBaisa.. - 7 years ago

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Paridhi

@heart321

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Posted: 7 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: ..AjabdeBaisa..
OMG
😭

I was so absorbed into this
I cannot express the level of love I have for your writing.
It is so so so overwhelming
This just had me so emotional. Sacchhiii!!!

Damn, how much he loves these two 😭

Karthik Sid was just wow!

It was mesmerising. I couldn't hold back from reading this and I'll give a much more detailed review soon

But most importantly, you rock girl
Every bit mean this. Extraordinary writing and bang on emotions
You just create a world of your own in which I get lost and it keeps getting better!!!!

Muahhh

Mahiii 🤗

You are too kind to me!😭😭😭 You make me so emotional everytime!

Thank you so so so much! ❤️

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Namitsgirl

@Namitsgirl

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Posted: 7 years ago

#24

Thanks for pm paridhi

loved the update.

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Namitsgirl

@Namitsgirl

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: ..AjabdeBaisa..
OMG
😭

I was so absorbed into this
I cannot express the level of love I have for your writing.
It is so so so overwhelming
This just had me so emotional. Sacchhiii!!!

Damn, how much he loves these two 😭

Karthik Sid was just wow!

It was mesmerising. I couldn't hold back from reading this and I'll give a much more detailed review soon

But most importantly, you rock girl
Every bit mean this. Extraordinary writing and bang on emotions
You just create a world of your own in which I get lost and it keeps getting better!!!!

Muahhh

mahi i love reading your reviews as much as i love her stories 😆

makes me interpret story better, will wait for detailed review

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Mahi

@Mannmohanaa

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Posted: 7 years ago

#26

Lemme start.

Sid sees her crying

Awww

He's bound to be mad, ain't it!

Full backlash on Purva who was rather rude. Even I was like girl control but she was sorry so that's okay 😆

I really loved that argument. In character, sticking to plot yet complex. Brilliant 👏

And finally she gives it back in full force.😭

He is sooo hurt. Awww

This really made me emotional. I can't take his pain 😭

I was getting worried that Purva might've gone cold inside out but thank God. She's the same girl inside. And trust me, I'm relieved when she calls him bhai.😳

He's reflective, self critical. Very relatable!

He's hurt a d feels he's bad. Awww poor boy. I want to hug him there!

And finally, the most welcomed surprise. Karthik!

I LOVED that joke of his. So so relieving 😆

I LOVED how he doesn't hate him. And this line -

How important are you to the two ladies of my life

Dil le liya 😳

Purva and Anushka truly love him Yaa! How can they not!!!

And him thanking Karthik for his support to Purva. OMG ☺️

And Karthik tells him how much they love him still!😃

Yippee!!!😆

And now, the breath taking Sidushka scene. Oh my GOD.

He offers to drop her, parallels 😆

And he lets his heart out! I knew Anushka would never take anything against Siddhant, even if it's from his own mouth 😆

And finally, they are talking it out and HOW!

When she stops the car. I was a bit sceptical

But nooo. Anushka can never deviate otherwise 😆

Alright so they're in the park and talking ❤️

She consoles him. AWWW.

THE WAY SHE EXPLAINS IT TO HIM HOW SHE CANNOT STOP LOVING HIM!!!

I knew it. 😳

Prabhakar's reference ⭐️

Well done

OMG. That park thing was so so so adorable and neatly written

The spark is totally sent across. And she hugs and caresses him

They're together now!!! Yayyy!!!

Team Sidushka 🥳

Yuhhooo

In between,ab aaya samajhmein

He takes the Russia deal. Eeeks, Gayatri is dead 😭

Now I understand her anger. Poor Purva!

I'm glad Karthik was there with her. And now Anushka with him!!!

Perfection 😃

Your Karva is so much better than the show 😳

Amazing, smashing, gorgeous chapter

Absolutely touched me 😳

Cheers and appreciation 🤗

You are AWESOME

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Mahi

@Mannmohanaa

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Posted: 7 years ago

#27

Aww @Namitsgirl

This is amusing 😆

Cannot control when it comes to her writing.

As good as the show ❤️

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Mahi

@Mannmohanaa

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Posted: 7 years ago

#28

Bump

Cause this story should be read by all

Pushing it up😃

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war_is_peace

@war_is_peace

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Posted: 7 years ago

#29

comment for chapter 2

i had thot sid anu r married but they arent! woah! good one there 👏

and then karthik's talk with purva was so adorable 😳

anu is very comfortable with purva and goes to talk to her head on. and poor girl's wounds get fresh

i love the karthik sid, sid purva, sid anu, purva anu, karthik anu relationship platonics...really tangled 👏

u r such a brilliant writer paridhi..i love reading your stories ❤️

- Hiya 🤗

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war_is_peace

@war_is_peace

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Posted: 7 years ago

#30

ps - i unresd on pg one long back...dont know if u have read it

comment for chapter 3

OMG! i loved the chapter...wanted to say so many things but i got so emotional after reading the sidushka scene where sid puts accross his side of the story that i forgot everything ...

this poor boy is regretting that he ever left. and then he couldn't even meet his mom in her last days or attend her funeral 😭

and now purva is understandably hurt and angry.

and anu confessed to him that she still loves him but cant be with him...omg 😭

but she is atleast there to lisn to him and console him 👏

the karthik sid talk was so well written and so smart 👏⭐️

kuch nahi kaha par sab kuch keh diya karthik ne 👏

waiting to read more

loved it! ❤️ 👏

- Hiya 🤗