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-RadhaRani-

@-RadhaRani-

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: Doc.love

Hahaha... sangat ka asar... 😆😆
The link to that OS is here:
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4877065

i forgot this i read already this one...Mukhi ji and his koot koot harkate😳
but now koot se kaam nahi chalega now we want hot mukhi ji Doc😉

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Carry

@Doc.love

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: kit0kat
We need to see 50 shades of Mukhi...

😆😆 no no.. i cant even imagine our Mukhiji going the BDSM way... 😃 Hes such a gentleman for that.. 😆😆😆

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Carry

@Doc.love

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: dushturain
Atlasttt...i read it finally...when i should be the first one to read and comment. ...kher choro..

Ayeshu babe...what a chupa rustam...u hv a hand for writing romance..not only romance but even erotica if u remember what i mean...you are awesome awesome awesome at writing and describing such scenes...

Loved it...it was heart wrenching at the beginning... Mukhijis pain and then their coming together was beautiful...akhir tumne mukhiji ka dhoti utar hi diya...

It felt so good to read this...like a dream coming true...

Pls ayeshu write some more like this...

Awesome, mindblowing, epic!historic...( not trying to copy HR but these are the words coming to my mind reading this gem)

Awww.. 😊 I was missing your review my buddy. I wanted you to be the first but i told you naa that the other night, I wrote it directly in IF, didnt even use word, didnt even get it proof read or edited by you... Even after posting,I hated it soo much that I thought of deleting it.. 😕😆 Praise coming from an excellent writer like yourself is something big. But I honestly feel ashamed to even put it out in front of such amazing people on this forum.. I feel like EL James in front of Jane Austen! 🤣

Yar you know it was a spur of the moment thing. I dont think I can write this type of stuff more. Even if I try, I will keep repeating the same things, I am sure.. They are all JM inspired, and you know that.. 😆

Kher... lets see.. I may or may not try my hand on this genre again. If i do, then i will plan it wisely and will get it properly edited by you before posting.. 🤔😊

Ugggh HR.. 🤢

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Carry

@Doc.love

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: -RadhaRani-

i forgot this i read already this one...Mukhi ji and his koot koot harkate😳
but now koot se kaam nahi chalega now we want hot mukhi ji Doc😉

Hahaha.. Radharaniii.. I always told ya that hes hot and hes going to be a bomb in bed! 😆😆 but i cant write the exact nature of his explosiveness.. 😉

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SymphonyStar

@SymphonyStar

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Nice os Love .Aru ko dhoti kholne ki badi jaldi thi.Ahaa sudden leap of desire in Mukhiji. 😆

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Carry

@Doc.love

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: SymphonyStar
Nice os Love .Aru ko dhoti kholne ki badi jaldi thi.Ahaa sudden leap of desire in Mukhiji. 😆

😆😆 I guess Aru se ziada humien jaldi thy unki dhoti utarrne ki..

Sudden leap if desire.. 😉 yes.. poor soul had been trying to control for sooo long naa.. 😆

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Piu Chatterjee

@Transference

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#37

⭐️Haila!! How did I miss this?

My dil garden garden , reading our Tarzen Tarzen😆

Loved it.

After that Maha-Sanitised SR , I had sanskarri ansu flowing from my eyes. They took the Swachha Amboli Abhiyan, a far too seriously😡

But this one, it made my paapi atma tript!!⭐️⭐️

Thanks Ayesha for this Super Paapi OS 😳 Must say loved every bit of it😛

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Carry

@Doc.love

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: manzilmukul
⭐️Haila!! How did I miss this?
My dil garden garden , reading our Tarzen Tarzen😆
Loved it.
After that Maha-Sanitised SR , I had sanskarri ansu flowing from my eyes. They took the Swachha Amboli Abhiyan, a far too seriously😡
But this one, it made my paapi atma tript!!⭐️⭐️
Thanks Ayesha for this Super Paapi OS 😳 Must say loved every bit of it😛

😃 thank you Piu.. A writer like yourself praising my work is making me go gaga now... 😆 I am glad you liked it and i hope k kuch tou aansu thamay honge unn sab loagon ke jo beqarari se nihayat ashleel SR ka wait ker rahay thay.. 😆😆

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SymphonyStar

@SymphonyStar

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#39

Hey Love you are a good writer.Liked flow of words.LOL I think it cant be called ashleel.Its Physical touch of Pavitra rishta of ArMu.

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Carry

@Doc.love

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: SymphonyStar
Hey Love you are a good writer.Liked flow of words.LOL I think it cant be called ashleel.Its Physical touch of Pavitra rishta of ArMu.

Hey SymponyStar...thank you so much.. 😊😊

Lol.. kuch ziada hi Pavitra rishta tha humare ArMu ka..their SR was the most pavitra SR i have ever seen in any serial... 😆 Compared to THAT, my OS can be termed as Ashleel! 😆😆

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