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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part-3…..Pooja:do u no how 2 cut vegetables?
Ashmit:no
P shouts;no?
A:yes,I no.i'll cut
P smiles:ok,then cut it
A tries 2 cut it with gr8 effort.P laughs:if u cut like
this,u'll take this whole hour 2 finish this.giv it 2
me.i'll cut it
A was embarrassed
P:r u getting bored?
A:no
P puts on the tape recorder.A song :pehla nasha….
A was surprised.A thinks:my poem
P:this is written by my my husband's best friend .how is
it?
A:nice
P:but I did'nt like it
A was embarrassed
Suddenly Ronit enters the house.R was surprised 2 see
A.they hug each other with joy.P smiles
P:ronit,I fooled ur friend .so funny
R:really?
A:ya,I got tensed
R laughs:she's naughty

Ronit asks Ashmit:is this enuff?don't u need a girl in
ur life?
A was dull:plz ronit.don't speak about it

Ronit,pooja,Ashmit,sujal,kashish hav dinner 2gether


In the nite,Ronit asks Pooja:how do u like ashmit?
P:2 b frank,I did'nt like ur friend.so boring.if we
crack jokes also,he does'nt laugh
R:he was a laugh pot.but I told u about his gf no.after
he lost her,he became like this.don't ask him about it
ok
P:ok

The next day,Ronit was going 4 work.Pooja calls him
back:Ronit…
R:ya
P:u 4got 2 giv me the gift which u used 2 giv b4 going
out?now u need only ur friend?
P was angry.R smiles.He goes & kisses P's cheecks.Ashmit
smiles & turns face.P kisses him back.
R:bye

P:ashmit,u were shy seeing me & ronit…?
A smiles.A tries 2 change the topic:I liked the name of
this house.RAINBOW
P:really?its my choice.this house is beautiful &
colourful as a rainbow with our life
A smiles:when ronit goes our,u get bored without seeing
him?
P:who told that I can't see angad?I see him always
P takes him a room.There was a big curtain.
P:did u see that curtain.i can see Ronit on it.
P imagines R there.P feels that R is offered icecream by
a foreign lady
P:ronit,did'nt I tell u not 2 talk 2 girls
unnecessarily?
P feels that R refuses the icecream
P:gud boy
P gives flying kisses.A smiles.A looks at the curtain
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Posted: 19 years ago
#12
sorry three time i hit post reply. 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: tafarruz

As long as Pooja-Ronit has goody goody scenes....GO AHEAD! 😃

😆😆 Besharm!!!!!!!!!😉

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Posted: 19 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: No Angel

😆😆 Besharm!!!!!!!!!😉



OYE.......ASHMIT'S EX WIFE....main besharam nahi hoon...ur Ashmit's a besharamm....2 ladkion ke saath..........RAAAAAAAAM RAAAAAAAAAAM RAAAAAAAMMMM 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
#15
Part-4…..Ashmit sees Poornima there.A's eyes fill up with
tears
Pooja:Whats that girl's name?
A:which girl?
P:ur beloved
A becomes dull:Poornima
P:how does she look like?
A:she was very pretty
P:how was her character?
A:she was very naughty
P:like me?
A:ya
P:tell sumthing more about her

A recalls:A & P r sitting outside
P:ashmit,if I die what'll u do?
A:what question u r asking?
P:plz tell ashmit
A becomes emotional:if u r not there,I won't b there
P:so shame.u no what I'll do if u die?I'll find out ur
humshakal & wil marry him
A was shocked:what?
P:like that u shud find a girl like me if I die.promise…

A:no way
P:if u love me,u must
A:ok promise
P:so sweet…

Ashmit proposes 2 P:poornima,wil u marry me?
P laughs:marry u?so funny.u were that serious?I was in
luv with u 4 a time pass.i can't marry ashmit.
A was shattered.P goes

Pooja:poornima was a cheater?
A:no..my poornima was loving.i heard that she got admitted
in the hospital.I went there.then I came 2 no that she
was suffering from cancer

A goes near P's bed.A cries:is this the reason why u
said that u don't luv me?that's why u told me 2 find
another girl?
P cries. A:but still I want 2 marry u.atleast 4 1
day,I want 2 b ur husband
P was surprised.A hugs P.A's shirt becomes red with
blood.A looks at P.She was dead.
A screams:Poornimaaaaaaa


Pooja's eyes rose hearing his tragic story
A was very emotional:I lost my poornima…
P was tensed seeing him that upset

Pooja was sitting simply.Ronit cums near her:why r u dull
pooja?
P:I'm not
R:don't lie.i can understand ur each feeling even if
I'm away from u.now tell me.what happened?






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Posted: 19 years ago
#16
cool i like it.

ashmit and poornima 😉 what a grate cople. 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: No Angel

😆😆 Besharm!!!!!!!!!😉

😆😆😆right😆😆

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Posted: 19 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Part-4…..Ashmit sees Poornima there.A's eyes fill up with
&nbs p; tears
&nbs p; Pooja:Whats that girl's name?
&nbs p; A:which girl?
&nbs p; P:ur beloved
&nbs p; A becomes dull:Poornima
&nbs p; P:how does she look like?
&nbs p; A:she was very pretty
&nbs p; P:how was her character?
&nbs p; A:she was very naughty
&nbs p; P:like me?
&nbs p; A:ya
&nbs p; P:tell sumthing more about her

&nbs p; A recalls:A & P r sitting outside
&nbs p; P:ashmit,if I die what'll u do?
&nbs p; A:what question u r asking?
&nbs p; P:plz tell ashmit
&nbs p; A becomes emotional:if u r not there,I won't b there
&nbs p; P:so shame.u no what I'll do if u die?I'll find out ur
&nbs p; humshakal & wil marry him
&nbs p; A was shocked:what?
&nbs p; P:like that u shud find a girl like me if I die.promise…

&nbs p; A:no way
&nbs p; P:if u love me,u must
&nbs p; A:ok promise
&nbs p; P:so sweet…

&nbs p; Ashmit proposes 2 P:poornima,wil u marry me?
&nbs p; P laughs:marry u?so funny.u were that serious?I was in
&nbs p; luv with u 4 a time pass.i can't marry ashmit.
&nbs p; A was shattered.P goes

&nbs p; Pooja:poornima was a cheater?
&nbs p; A:no..my poornima was loving.i heard that she got admitted
&nbs p; in the hospital.I went there.then I came 2 no that she
&nbs p; was suffering from cancer

&nbs p; A goes near P's bed.A cries:is this the reason why u
&nbs p; said that u don't luv me?that's why u told me 2 find
&nbs p; another girl?
&nbs p; P cries. A:but still I want 2 marry u.atleast 4 1
&nbs p; day,I want 2 b ur husband
&nbs p; P was surprised.A hugs P.A's shirt becomes red with
&nbs p; blood.A looks at P.She was dead.
&nbs p; A screams:Poornimaaaaaaa


&nbs p; Pooja's eyes rose hearing his tragic story
&nbs p; A was very emotional:I lost my poornima…
&nbs p; P was tensed seeing him that upset

&nbs p; Pooja was sitting simply.Ronit cums near her:why r u dull
&nbs p; pooja?
&nbs p; P:I'm not
&nbs p; R:don't lie.i can understand ur each feeling even if
&nbs p; I'm away from u.now tell me.what happened?


&nbs p;




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Posted: 19 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: tafarruz



OYE.......ASHMIT'S EX WIFE....main besharam nahi hoon...ur Ashmit's a besharamm....2 ladkion ke saath..........RAAAAAAAAM RAAAAAAAAAAM RAAAAAAAMMMM 😆

how mean taffy.....

jasminerahul : i luved ure tere lie fantic, its great!!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: Poonampatel16

cool i like it.

ashmit and poornima 😉 what a grate cople. 😆

ugly couple eva!! i ashmit and pooja 2gather, not poornima in the middle!! yuck!!

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