Lafzoon Main Ke Na Sakoo-Updated 12/22/05 - Page 9

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Posted: 19 years ago
#81
hi

one thing that i really like about ur fanfic is that its not a typical love triangle but its an love rectangle as there are 3 guys after one girl an not 2 😆 😆 😆
love ur work
can't wait 4 the nxt epi


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Posted: 19 years ago
#82
thanx, don't worry, right now i'm concentrating on pooja and ronit and then i'll show poornima and bubbles and all those people
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Ronit- Pooja tumhara ghaar agaya

Pooja- Ronit, agar tum mind nahi karo toh tum mujhe Ashmit ke ghaar chordengo plz

Ronit- Teekh hai Pooja, main tumhe college main milengo

Pooja goes inside

Pooja- Ashmit, ashmit

Ashmit isn't there Pooja goes to his room

She gets bored and finds a picure of her and ashmit when they were young she remembers

Pooja- Ashmit mujhe ice cream chaye hai

Ashmit- Main kya karu

Pooja- Apni ice cream do

Ashmit- Yeh loh mera loh

Pooja gives Ashmit a kiss and takes the ice cream and starts laughing


Pooja starts reading Ashmit's diary and sees her name all over

Just then Ashmit comes in
Pooja understands everything now, she is in tears
Ashmit Pooja tum roh rahe hai
Pooja- Nahi toh aak main kachra tha

Ashmit looks at Pooja

Pooja- Ashmit, tumne kabhi mujhe bolha nahi k tum

Ashmit- Looks at his diary, Ashmit takes a breath

Pooja- Ke tum mujse pyaar karte ho

Ashmi- Dekho Pooja, main samjha tha ke tumhe muhse bhi

Pooja- umne mjhe kabhibataya nahi

Ashmit- Main tumhe kal batane waala tha lekin tum to Ronit

Pooja- Pata hai Ashmit tum duniya ke sabse pyaari aur ache dost ho

Ashmit- Lekin haamsafar nahi

Pooja- Main aur onit ek doosre se bohut pyaar karte hain, mine kabhi socha nahi tha ke tum...

Ashmit- Eh, hum log dost the dost hain aur hamesha rahenge

Pooja- Promise

Ashmit- Paka promise

Both hug each other just then Ronit comes in and brings Pooja's purse she fogot

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Posted: 19 years ago
#84
WOW Gurriya!! Zabardast!! I read first 7 episodes. and they are simply great!! Keep writing!! and I will keep reading!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
#85
continue plzzzzzzzz me dieing
lol

Eman
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Posted: 19 years ago
#86
hi
cum on prettyquria wen u gonna rite some more epi's i'm waitin eagerly, ur fanfic is much better than the actual serial. i look foward to readin ur epi's more than wochin the real show 😆
so plz hurry
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Posted: 19 years ago
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😆 alight alright 😃

Ronit is in tears and goes away, Pooja hears soething and tells Ashmit she has to go

Pooja goes outside and sees Ronit leaving

Pooja calls Ronit and Ronit isn't picking up

Pooja goes to college and sees Ronit wih another girl

Pooja takes Ronit to anoher side- Ronit, mujhe pata tha ke tumhare jaisie patar insaan kabhi bhi kisi se sacha pya nahi kar sakte

Ronit- Looks at her face, Pooja tum toh Ashmit ke saath hi aur main abhi iske saath tumhara proble kya hai

Pooja- Ronit, tum, tum samaj kyun nahi hai ro, main Ashmit ke saathsab clarify kar rahe thi

Ronit- Acha, main toh tumhe Ashmit ke aath hug karte dekha

Pooja- Woh isiliye kyunki woh hamera baath ko accept kar liya aur mujhe bohut guilt mahsoos horaha tha aur tum, tum yeh samje bethe ke POoj walks away Ronit is mad and is gonna try some way to console her

Pooja goes in the classroom

Ronit follows her

Vikram- Hum log din min GOA jane wale hai ye hai apki permission slip

All students are excited


Pooja- Sir kya muhe regrouping ka chance mil sakta hai

Sir- Nahi Pooja, abhi nahi, shauld, bat main

Pooja goes home, and she gets a letter wih flowers,
Letter says- Pooja, sorry- Ronit

Poo rolls her eyes

Pooja goes to hr room and her room is full of flowers and cards, she smiles and opens er wiow and there she sees, Ronit

Ronit in front- I'm sorry Pooja mujhe maf kar do

Pooja is laughing, apko jhuka huki karna parega

Ronit holds his ears and goes down and comes up, like that 20 times so far

Pooja gos downstairs and goes to Ronit and starts walking up to him and laughs, Roni starts to laugh too and both hug and veryone outside cheers

Ronit- Mujhe nahi pata tha ke tum flowers aur mere sorry se man jayegi

Pooja- Mujh bhi nahi, mujhe tumhari phool aur sorry sain maf nahi kar balke tumhari sachai aur pyaar dekhe, woh bhi saacha

Roni and Pooja smile




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Posted: 19 years ago
#88
Next Day

Pooja at breakfast wid family

Pooja- Papa, kya main Goa jaa sakti hoon

Rasik- Kyun?

Pooja- College ke liye hai

Rasik- Nahi

Pooja- Kyun?

Rasik- Tumhe kuch bana hai toh lawyer ya doctor bano, lekin film director kabhi nahi

Pooja- Papa plz

Rasik- Teekh hai, par yeh akre dafa

Rasik signs on it and Pooja is happy

Pooja is leaving and gonna open the door, she turns around and looks at her father and says

"Apko garv ho ya na ho lekin ek din bohut hoga"

Pooja gives her perission slip to her professor someone tells Pooja Ronit is sick

Pooja is shocked and decides to go and visit him she rings the bell, Maya opens it

Maya- Pooja, what a pleasant srprise, achanak

Pooja- Hi Aunty, main Reema aur Ronit ko milne aye thi

Maya- Chalo main tumhe Ronit ke kamre main lekhar jati hoon

Ronit is pretending to be sick an Pooja comes in and he starts actig sick and looking sick

Pooja- Ronit, tum teekh ho

Ronit- Yeh kaisa sawaal hain, of course main teekh nahi

Pooja- Ronit, tumhe kuch chaye hai

Ronit- Nahi, haan pani

Pooja- Main lekhar ati hoon

Pooja goes to the kitchen and sees Ronit's dadi- Aap Ronit ke dadi ho, hai na

Dadi- Haan Puthar, unfortunantely hoon

Pooja laughs

Dadi- Tum kan ho beti

Pooja- Main

Dadi- Tum Pooja ho

Pooja- Apko kaisie pata

Dadi- Ronit tumhara hamesha tarif karta hai, ke tum kitna intelligent aur unique aur khoobsurat ho

Pooja blushes

Dadi- Lekin tum yaha

Pooja- Dadi, mujh college se pata chala hai ke Ronit ko bukhar ho gaya hai

Dadi- Kya, mere puthar ko bukhar

Pooja- Haan apko pata nahi tha

Dadi- Mujhe nahi pata tha kunki Ronit ko bukhar bhi nahi hai

Pooja- Kya

Dadi- Haan, wo tumhe uloo ban diya

Pooja- Usko pani chaa tha toh main sko khoob pani pilange, Dadi apke paas bucket hai

Dadi smiles- Haan hai

Pooja fills up the bucket and goes to Ronit's room

Ronit turns around and starts coughing

Pooja- Ronit tumhara pani agaya

Ronit is coughing

Pooja- Acha ek kaam karo main tumhe pani pilati hoon tum apne aak band kar do

Ronit is happy as he is getting what he wants

Pooja smiles- 1...2...3 she pours th whole bucket on Ronit's head and runs away

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Posted: 19 years ago
#89
thnx God u have updated the next part other wise i was goin 2 die without it good job i loveeeeeeeeeee it

Eman
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Posted: 19 years ago
#90
😆 last thing i want is police coming to my house to report someoneiis ded and it my fault

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