Masoom (The Innocent) RuSha SS - Page 5

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Posted: 11 months ago
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Good that Preesha took Sunny with her. Feeling sad for the kids. Song sequence was funny and emotional. Wonder what nightmare is Bunty facing. Reema would definitely be happy. Perfect pics, waiting for next

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Posted: 11 months ago
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Thank you for the pm


Part 6

Captivating update... elegantly written

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Posted: 11 months ago
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very nice update

your msg too short

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Posted: 11 months ago
#44

Masoom(The innocent)Part 7

Thank you for the edits Salley.

Bunty rang up Reema.

Bunty:Reema,do you remember me?I am Bunty.

Reema was shocked.

Reema:You are the only one who knows about my dark secret.I can never forget you.

Bunty:I rang you up to inform you something.Like you wished,Rudraksh took Sunny's responsibility.Right?

Reema:Yes.

Bunty:His wife Preesha came to know that Sunny is Rudraksh's son.So she has put an end to their married life.

Reema was shocked.

She was in tears:What?

Reema:Because of my selfishness to save my marriage,I destroyed Rudraksh's married life unknowingly.I can't let it happen.But how can I save their marriage?

Bunty:You can save their marriage if you come here and talk to Preesha.Tell your husband that your friend needs you now and come here.

Reema nodded tearfully:Yes.




Bunty picked up Reema from the airport.

Reema:Will Preesha believe me?Will Preesha believe the fact that Rudraksh was not lying and only recently he came to know about the one night stand and Sunny?

Bunty:Preesha will believe it if we tell her what exactly happened that night.

Reema:I did'nt understand.

Bunty:Reema,that night it was not Rudraksh,but I was the one who was with you.

Reema was shocked:What?

Bunty:In the morning when I woke up only I realised that I got intimate with you under the drug's effect.I was not ready to commit to a person with whom I was not in love.But I was scared of your reaction when you come to know about the one night stand which we both had.I decided to run away.That time I saw Rudraksh who was lying on the floor unconscious.He was regaining consciousness slowly.But when he tried to get up,without any balance he began to fall down.So I caught him and placed him on the other side of the bed where you were sleeping.My only intention was his safety.I did'nt think of the consequences.But that time you woke up and found Rudraksh near you and you assumed that with Rudraksh you had one night stand.You were ashamed to face me thinking that I saw you both together.I could have corrected you by saying the truth.But thinking of the consequences I hid the truth from you.

Suddenly Reema slapped him.

Reema:Because of you I misunderstood an innocent person like Rudraksh.Because of both of us,Rudraksh lost his family.

Bunty was upset.

Bunty:I know that.I never thought that because of me,my best friend will lose everything.But I won't let it happen.I want Rudraksh to get everything back.For that I need your help Reema.

Reema:I hate you Bunty.But I am with you in this only for Rudraksh.

Bunty was relieved.



Preesha reached a place.She was shocked to see Rudraksh there.He was also shocked to see him there.Bunty and Reema came there.Rudraksh was stunned to see Reema with Bunty.

Preesha:Bunty,did you call me here to unite with Rudra?Then I am going back.

Bunty:Please don't go Preesha.I told you that I have an important matter to share.

Preesha:Say fast.

Reema:Preesha,I am Reema.

Preesha got irritated.

Preesha:You are Rudra's girl friend.Right?How dare you come in front of me?If you and Rudra have the plan to stay together as a family with Sunny,I will not let Sunny live with 2 cheaters like you both.

Rudraksh and Reema got hurt.

Rudraksh:Reema,why have you come here with Bunty?You are creating more misunderstandings between me and Preesha.

Reema became upset.

Bunty:Please listen to me patiently.Rudra..you asked me why I have nightmare and why i don't have peace of mind anywhere.The answer is...because I am the real sinner.

Reema:Yes,today only Bunty revealed the truth to me.

Rudraksh:What are you both talking about?

Bunty told them the truth.Rudraksh and Preesha were shattered.

Reema:I am sorry.If I had known the truth before,I would not have asked you to look after Sunny.

Rudraksh was in tears.

Rudraksh:We were best friends Bunty.How could you hide this from me?

Bunty wept:I did'nt expect the things to go this worse.I am really sorry.Trust me...I never wanted anything bad to happen to you Rudra.

Rudraksh:I know that.Otherwise you would not told us the truth now.

Bunty:You forgave me Rudra?

Rudraksh nodded:Yes.

Bunty was relieved.

Bunty:Preesha....please don't leave Rudra.He loves you and the children very much.

Preesha burst into tears.

Preesha:I am ashamed of myself for not understanding you Rudra.You tried to explain to me.But I did'nt believe you at all.I don't deserve you.

Rudraksh became upset and held her hand.

Rudraksh:Don't blame yourself Preesha.Anyone in your place will react in the same way.

I myself did not know the truth.Then how will you know?

Preesha:Please forgive me Rudra.

Rudraksh wiped her tears.

Rudraksh:Not when you are crying.Because your tears give pain to my heart.

They embraced each other emotionally.

bahut dilanashii.n hai.n ha.Nsii kii ye la.Diyaa.n

ye motii magar yuu.N naa bikharaayaa kiije

u.Daakar na le jaaye jho.nkaa havaa kaa

lachakataa badan yuu.N naa laharaayaa kiije

huzuur is kadar bhii na itaraa ke chaliye

Reema and Bunty smiled.

They broke their embrace.

Reema:I will take Sunny with me.I don't care of my husband leaves me.

Bunty:No Reema.You have a happy family life.Don't spoil it.I am single and I have nothing to worry about.So I will take Sunny's responsibility.The sin which I did was giving me nightmares all these years.But I now I feel relieved after sharing the truth to you all as if I got rid of a burden.By doing a good thing,I can correct my past mistake.

Preesha-Rudraksh were stunned.

Preesha:I am sorry Bunty.But we can't let you take Sunny.

Bunty and Reema were shocked.

Preesha:Because Sunny is a part of our family now.He is our son.Without him,our family is incomplete and unhappy.We don't want to lose Sunny.Please try to understand.

Bunty and Reema smiled emotional.

Rudraksh:I am proud of you Preesha.You are my luck.Only a few people have a golden heart like you.

Rudraksh embraced Preesha happily.

bahut khuubasuurat hai har baat lekin

agar dil bhii hotaa to kyaa baat hotii

likhii jaatii phir daastaan-e-muhabbat

ek afasaane jaise mulaaqaat hotii

huzuur is kadar bhii na itaraa ke chaliye

(Masoom).


Preesha reached home.

Preesha:Children...get ready fast.We are going back to your papa.

The kids were surprised and happy.

Preesha's parents became happy and smiled.


Preesha reached home with the children.Rudraksh and the kids ran towards each other.They hugged each other cheerfully.All were very happy.

Saransh-Ruhi:We are so happy now.

Sunny:We were really upset before.I was very happy to get a family.But when the separation happened,I got scared whether I will lose my family

Rudraksh-Preesha became sad and looked at him painfully.

Sunny:But now I am happy uncle and aunty.

(Thank you Salley for this sweet edit).

Preesha:Not aunty and uncle beta.We are your parents.Call us papa and mumma.

Sunny's face blossomed and became very happy.

Sunny:Papa...mumma...

Rudraksh and Preesha smiled emotionally and kissed Sunny.

Saransh and Ruhi became very happy.

They lived together happily.

The end



Thank you friends for supporting this SS.Please give a detailed comment on this part.Please write your favourite scenes,favourite character and why you liked that character the most.

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Posted: 11 months ago
#45

Part 7

Exceptional update.... commendably written

thanks for the pm

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Posted: 11 months ago
#46

Good that Reema agreed. I m shocked it was Bunty. Happy to see RuSha reconcile. It's nice to see they r not willing to give away Sunny. Finally he called them mumma papa. Perfect pics. Favorite scene is Ruhi Saransh accepting Sunny whole heartedly, favorite character is Reema that she felt sad for RuSha and told everything.

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Posted: 11 months ago
#47

Beautiful end of a wonderful journey ❤️

Just loved it dear 😘

Thanks for the PM ☺️

Keep writing ✍️

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Posted: 11 months ago
#48

Part 7


Amazingly Awesome Part

I truly enjoyed this update

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Posted: 11 months ago
#49

part 5 and 6

Looks like a twist is coming upsmiley3 I think Sunny is not really his son.

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Posted: 10 months ago
#50

Rudraksh is a good father. He is trying his best to give them what they need.

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