Aapke hai kaun hum? SS - Page 2

Thank u.No,there is no suspense.It ended with Avneil eye lock.

Originally posted by: salley145

Haha Harish is such a foodie

Ab kahan dekhne milegi Rishi Kapoor ki acting future mein 😭

Avantika and Harish conversation on sweets was hilarious

Sameer and Naina's first meeting was cute and romantic

AvNeil scenes were romantic

Sameer and Naina are so cute

Whats with the last scene? Is it a suspense?

Well it was cute

Waiting for next

You are my friend dear so will always support you...and coming to the update ....OMG....what an awesome update I started to read it for samaina..but now loving neil and avni as well.....Harish is too funny yaar...and samaina overhearing their convo was good....avnoi and neil's romantic talk was good....waiting for the next update..lets see whats in store for them...

Part 1

fascinating update. well written.

Harish and Avantika seem nice

happy for Avni and Neil

Sameer teases Naina

update soon

Part 1

A Fantastic Start

Hi mast mast update dear.

😘

Congrats on ur new story...

The story line is very good...

So continue writing...

All the best for your work...

Keep going...

Thank u so much all of u 4 the lovely comments

Aapke hai kaun hum Part 2

Neil Avni's engagement date got fixed.

Naina thought:On the engagement day I should give a sweet surprise to Avni jeeji.But what?

Suddenly an idea clicked on her mind:Yes got it.But will it work?

Sameer thought:I want to ask Naina if she can be my dance partner for Neil bhaiyya's engagement.But she will she agree?

Sameer rang up Naina.

Naina thought:I was thinking of calling Sameer now.He called me now.Long life time you are having Sameer.

NAINA:Tell me why did you call me?

SAMEER:Do you know to dance?

NAINA:How dare you ask me this question?I always dance for college festivals and I have won prizes too.

SAMEER:Ok ok.You could have told that peacefully.Why are you yelling at me?

Anyways thank God you know dance.

NAINA:By the way Jeeji was telling me that you are crazy about dancing.

SAMEER:Yes.It is my passion.Can you dance with me for Neil bhaiyya and Avni bhabhi's engagement function?

Naina was surprised.She thought:He is asking me what I want to ask him.

NAINA:Why?

SAMEER:Because I thought it would be nice if we give them a surprise by dancing.

NAINA:Cool idea.To be frank even I wanted to ask you this question.

SAMEER:Really?That means we have 2 bodies and one mind?

NAINA:Are you crazy?

Sameer laughed.

NAINA:The dance which we do should have good standard.

SAMEER:Don't worry about that.I have a choreographer named Vivek who choreographs when I do dance shows.

NAINA:I hope it will turn out to be good.

SAMEER:Sure ...it will be good if you dance well.

NAINA:What about you?

SAMEER:I will dance well for sure.But I am doubtful about you.

NAINA:How dare you!I will prove my dancing talent.

He giggled.

Sameer and Naina followed Vivek's instruction and rehearsed well.

Neil and Avni's engagement...

They exchanged rings.

Harish:Guys you both are officially engaged.Now why don't you guys dance?

Avantika:Of course.Put music.

Neil:No no.I can't dance.I am a pathetic dancer unlike Sameer who is an excellent dancer.

Avni:Even I can't dance.

Rano:Avni was always shy to dance.

Avantika:Without programmes the function will be so boring.

She stared at Harish:For some people just food is enough as an entertainment for functions.

Harish was embarrassed.

H:I don't need any entertainment as I myself is an entertainment.

Everyone laughed.

Mohit:That is true Harish.You are really an entertainment.

Rano:Avantika is lucky.There is someone who can entertain you continuously.

Avantika smiled.

Naina thought:Where did this Sameer disappear?It's time for us to surprise Jeeji and jeejaji.

Naina tried to ring up Sameer.Sameer did'nt pick up the call.

NAINA:Sameer...pick up the call.It's getting delayed.

Suddenly they a heard Sameer's voice.

"Don't worry about not having any entertainment.We are here to entertain you all."

The spotlight fell on Sameer.

They all were surprised including Naina.

Sameer started shaking his legs to music.

Waha waha ramjee, jodi kya banayee
Bhaiya aur bhabhi ko, badhayee ho badhayee
Sab rasmo se badee hai jag me, dil se dil kee sagayee

Naina joined him and started dancing.

Aapkee kripa se yeh, shubh ghadee aai
Jiji aur jija ko, badhayee ho badhayee
Sab rasmo se badee hai jag me, dil se dil kee sagayee

They all were surprised.

Mere bhaiya jo, chup baithe hain
Dekho bhabhi yeh, kaise aithe hain
Aise bade hi bhale hain

Aise bade hi bhale hain, mana thode manchale hain
Par aap ke siva, kahi bhi naa phisle hain

Dekho dekho khud pe, chu chu, chu chu
Jiji itrayi,
Bhaiya aur bhabhi ko, chu chu, chu chu
Badhayi ho badhayi, chu chu, chu chu
Sab rasmo se badi hai jag mein,
Dil se dil ki sagayi

Waha waha ramji, chu chu, chu chu
Arae waha waha ramji, chu chu, chu chu
Waha waha ramji

Suno jijaji, aji aapke liye
Meri jiji ne, bade tap hain kiye
Mandiro mein kiye phere

Mandiro mein kiye phere, puja sanjh sawere
Tin lok taintis, devo ko yeh rahi ghere
Jaisi maine mangi thi, chu chu, chu chu
Waisi bhabhi pai,
Jiji aur jija ko, chu chu, chu chu
Badhayi ho badhayi, chu chu, chu chu

Sab rasmo se badi hai jag mein,
Dil se dil ki sagayi

Waha waha ramji, chu chu, chu chu
Arae waha waha ramji, chu chu, chu chu

Waha waha ramji.(HAHK)

After the dance performance they all hugged Naina and Sameer.

Avni:Loved your surprise my sweet sis.

Neil:Sameer...you made my day.

Harish:Once again Sameer proved that he is my son.Truly an entertainment.

Avantika:Excuse me..he is my son too.

H:Yes.But he got the entertainment quality from me.He is not at all serious like you.

Avantika:Forget it.

Sameer:Now Neil bhaiyya and Avni bhabhi have to dance.

Neil:Sameer..you know that I can't dance like you.

Avni:Even I can't.

Naina:But this is your day.So no excuse.

They pushed Neil and Avni to each other.Neil and Avni held each other.

They started dancing to music.

Tu safar mera

Hai tu hi meri manzil

Tere bina guzara

Ae dil hai mushkil

Tu mera khuda

Tu hi duaa mein shaamil

Tere bina guzara

Ae dil hai mushkil

Mujhe aazmaati hai teri kami

Meri har kami ko hai tu laazmi

Junoon hai mera

Banoon main tere qaabil

Tere bina guzaara

Ae Dil Hai Mushkil

Yeh rooh bhi meri

Yeh jism bhi mera

Utna mera nahi

Jitna hua tera

Tune diya hai jo

Woh dard hi sahi

Tujhse mila hai toh

Inaam hai mera

Mera aasmaan dhoondhe teri zameen

Meri har kami ko hai tu laazmi

Zameen pe na sahi

Toh aasmaan mein aa mil

Tere bina guzara

Ae dil hai mushkil

Maana ki teri maujoodgi se

Ye zindagani mehroom hai

Jeene ka koi dooja tareeka

Na mere dil ko maaloom hai

Tujhko main kitni

Shiddat se chaahun

Chaahe toh rehna tu be-khabar

Mohtaaj manzil ka toh nahi hai

Ye ek tarfa mera safar, safar

Khoobsurat hai manzil se bhi

Meri har kami ko hai tu laazmi

Adhura hoke bhi

Hai ishq mera kaamil

Tere bina guzara

Ae dil hai mushkil(ADHM).

Suddenly a girl appeared.

"Sameerrrrrrrrrrr".

She embraced Sameer.

Naina was shocked.

NAINA:How can she hug Sameer publicly?Shameless creature.

Sameer looked at Naina with a naughty smile and winked at her.

She:I am so sorry.I became late.

Avantika:No problem beta.

This is Preeti.My friend's daughter.Where are your parents Preeti?

Preeti:They could'nt come as they are busy.So I came on their behalf.

Naina:Why is this Preeti always holding Sameer's hand?

Naina moved away.

NAINA:She is standing close to Sameer as if she is stuck up to him with fevicol.

Suddenly she heard someone's footsteps and turned back.It was Sameer.

SAMEER:Why are you standing alone here?

NAINA:Why?I can't stand alone?

SAMEER:You can.

NAINA:Then why have you come here?Go to Preeti.She needs you very badly.

SAMEER:Why are you so insecure seeing me with Preeti?Are you jealous?

NAINA:Jealous?Why should I be jealous?

SAMEER:Anyways even if you are jealous you don't have to be jealous as we are just friends.

Unknowingly a smile appeared on her face.They smiled at each other.

She tried to walk away.He held her hand.

She stared at Sameer:Why did you hold my hand?

SAMEER:Your forehead lace has fallen down.

She saw her forehead lace on the floor.Sameer took it.Naina tried to take it with him.

SAMEER:I will put it for you.

Naina could'nt resist.His fingers moved towards her to put the lace.She became shy.

He put the lace on her forehead.

NAINA:Thank you.

He smiled:No mention.

Giving him a smile Naina walked away.

Sameer went towards Neil.

SAMEER:What is this bhaiyya?You guys were dating.Still you did'nt even touch her.Now you guys are officially engaged.Still distance between you and bhabhi?

Neil:What should I do?

SAMEER:At least give her a kiss.

NEIL:No no.I am against liplocks in films.

SAMEER:Ok fine.But this is your life.In real life also you are not planning for any liplock?So unromantic.I am telling you.Avni bhabhi will find you boring.I don't know how you guys dated each other without no romance.

NEIL:Oh no...I don't want to be boring.What should I do to be romantic Sameer?

SAMEER:Give her a kiss.Now you have the right to do that.She is your fiancee.

Neil was tensed.

As Sameer advised Neil took Avni to an isolated area.

Neil embraced Avni.

Suddenly he realized that it was his imagination.

He thought:Oh my God!What kind of dream was this!It's so difficult to make it real.

Avni:Why did you bring me here Neil?

Neil said romantically:Just to say that you are looking very beautiful.I can't say that in front of others.Right?

Avni blushed.

Sameer who was standing at the door way showed some hand actions to kiss Avni.

Neil gathered all his courage and moved closer to Avni to kiss her cheek.

Avni who felt his breath on her skin blushed.

Suddenly they heard Rano's voice:Avni!

Avni:Mom!

Avni ran out.

Rano:Where were you?

Avni:I went to the washroom.

Neil:Oh no...

Sameer came inside:Bhaiyya...you are very unlucky.When you got a chance your mother in law became an obstacle.

Neil was embarrassed.

NEIL:By the way why were you watching us?To see us Kiss.Shameless boy.

Neil pinched Sameer's ear.Sameer smiled.

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Part 2

terrific update...

Sameera and Naina plan to surprise Avni and Neil.

nice performance.

Naina jealous seeing Sameer and Preeti hug

update soon

Part 2

Fabulous and so Awesome Part

Awesome update once againa and am liked it to the core...pics were also good...avni and neil romantic scene was good...and even i got irritated by the interruption of avni's mom...samaina as usual...their bond is too good...Naina jealous preeti..haha...nice update..excited on the next