Samaina OS: Phir Mohabbat - Page 3

Hi Prachi,

You have beautifully penned it. If its was your first OS then I must say it didn't look like that. ❤️

The song is beautiful and lyrics so well written .The way you have brought the feelings of Sameer and Naina along with the lyrics is commendable👏.

I have watched the break up track and I had cried then and here too you have put forth the emotions so well. The conflict between the heart and mind of Sameer , the helpness of Naina is so well written. How sometimes we ignore what we really feel is conveyed so beautifully.

They realized their love for eachother without any intervention and finally love won

You must continue this story . 😊

Love
Sajida

Loved it...keep writing..

Originally posted by: Di23

You write so beautifully. Please make it an SS. Would love reading it. ❤️

Thank you so much 😃. It won't be possible for me to make it an SS because of my studies and less ideas. However, I will give a sequel of this OS if I get time. But ut really means a lot to me that you would have read the story if I had made it a SS. 😳

Keep smiling,

Prachi 😃

Originally posted by: Tellurium

Prachi your first story ................. So excited to read it

But give me some time

Fursat se padhungi aur accha sa review karungi

I will wait for you review Tehreem. 😳

Keep smiling,

Prachi 😃

Originally posted by: Albelipari

Beautiful it is ..

Your story took me back to the most intense track of our show effortlessly .. Could very well feel the inner termoil going inside samaina .. Beautifully written it was you should come up with more work

Love

Laalchi reader

Thank you so much Manisha di 😳. I will definitely try to write more. I am glad I could take you back to the Breakup track.

Keep smiling,

Prachi 😃

Originally posted by: Veenapain

Beautiful OS, loved it .

Thank you so much 😳. I am happy that you liked my first attempt.

Keep smiling,

Prachi 😃

Prachi ! it's wonderful

Sachme I enjoyed to the core. 💝

Everything is okay in the end and if it's not okay it's not the End. Your os is the perfect example of these lines.

You've their thoughts so well I could visualize everything in front of my eyes. It's a Dil le lo for me..........

Song idea fits well but I didn't sing as I was not knowing the tune.This song is the most suited for the Sameer' s state.

Tumne Naina ka haath kata diya😢

I really liked how you've given the separation track a lovely twist. Well done .👍

So glad it had nothing involving Shoe- naina. 😝

Hadn't you mentioned it no one would believe this is your first writing.

keep writing dear behena.

Love you

Originally posted by: TheGirlWhoLived

Thank you so much for your detailed review. It made my day. And I will try to fulfill your wish as soon as possible.

Keep smiling,

Prachi 😃

You're just a 15 year old and you wrote so well!! You are gifted indeed. Will be looking forward to a sequel, if you plan to write it🤗