SamAina OS :Mending her - Page 2

I loved the concept the very first time I read the os... and knew that very moment that it would be the out of the box os for sure....

Once again Congratulations on winning it dii

It was different and unique......

Sameer's love is always so true, pure. No words for his love...I loved the way Naina surrendered herself to his love and told him to take her away... She belongs to him and no one can change that

And the last part. Samaina, their love and the symbol of their love.... Just perfect❤️

Oh my god !!

What a wonderful piece of writing with great imagination .. First of all take a bow girl your story took me to a different world where I was very clearly and strongly was feeling Samaina's condition

When you mentioned sameer was came with his nanu to see a girl and how he was spellbound seeing a girl draped in simple yellow colour saari I assumed this os to be a very sweet and simple arranged marriage os but then sunaina's entry proved mW wrong and how !! 👏 this was one of those rare stories keeps you on edge throughout till the ending

Poor naina was literally living in a hell where their was nobody whom she could call as her family they all were so brutal and inhuman towards her .. My heart broke seeing her miserable state where she was getting punished for no reason Ohbai reminded me of brutal saas of old Hindi films and I was imagining her as one

I possible I fell in love with sameer Even more reading this os .. This boy fell in love with her at the mere first sight and was ready to move mountains to have her in his life .. His love is what we say as " true love " the little moment of happiness he felt when she showed care for his life by asking him to leave .. It was so beautiful his determination didn't lessened a bit seeing the inhuman sight in front of his eyes rather he felt the urgent need of taking hwe with him and protecting her

Even his failed attempts didn't made him give up on her .. I became so emotional reading everyday he used to come and wait for her in the garden if this is not selfless love than I don't know what is my happiness knew no bounds when she finally said yes to showed the courage of leaving and breaking all the ties and go with him to start a new life with him

A story like this is quite difficult to handle as it can easily go overboard but you handelled it very well and the beautiful ending made the story " complete " this story is indeed out of the box very well deserve to win

I had read the story in the contest thread but didn't knew that it's by you .. Congratulations for winning and you are very good at bribing 😆 now eagerly waiting for Monday 😉

Love

Laalchi reader

Lovely story Su👏

It definitely deserves Out of the box thinking title. It is different and beautiful. Naina wearing sameer's shirt reminded me that cvs missed to give us such scene after SR. How much we looked forward to a morning after scene. Anyway tumhari story ne woh kami poori kar di.

Lovely story!! The main idea of the story was very unique!!! Naina being a widow and Shoe being Taiji's daughter!! Bohot ache wali setting hai😂😂 venom-venom pairing😂😂 suits them both😂

Coming to the main plot... Naina is a sweetheart❤ even without knowing much about Sameer she wanted to save him.... and her dil ki achaiyon ne Sameer ka dil jeetliya😇😇 and Sameer being very patiently waiting for Naina😍😍 was the showstealer!! Tai-Tau are real villans!!😈😈

The overall storyline was unique and different!! Very well written.

I had read it before but phir pdhke bhi acha Laga 😘

Iss OS Mai old movies Mai stories Hoti thi , uski feel aati hai 😂

Keep writing 😊

It was really beautiful and I loved the concept

It really deserved out of box award

congratulations on that.

Sameer the knight in shining armour came and took naina out of the hell

Naresh and Beena and sunaina together were so harsh on her

It was better she moved on from them and she took courage from sameer and his love and agreed to start a new life with him.

I thoroughly loved reading it.

This one was the most beautiful OS I have read su

I have no words literally

A very good theme is explored here

Beautiful os, loved it.

Mai ye teen pages ko 4 baar search kr chuki hu ki kidhr hai mera res post kidhr hai mera res post lekin vo hai ki milne ka naam hi nahi le raha tha....

Fir finally maine deicde kiya ki ab direct response hoga ... Res post ji shyd aap is OS pr nahi hai to is waqt mujhe aapki zarurat nahi hai !!!!!😛

Now coming to this OS

Suhaniiiii diiiii you truly are one of the talented writers of the forum! I remember when during the time of voting the moment i finished reading this OS only one sentence came in my mind🤪

YE TO OUT OF THE BOX HAI!!!!! Whoever is the writer will surely win🥳

And see who won you my pyaari su diii i was super duper elated that you got the title of out of the box thinking title ... Congratulations diiii🤗

Now coming to the OS this is really a very unique concept .... Widow naina sameer falling for the innocent soul then the combination of o BAiii shoenaina and tauji ufffff isse jyada aur kya khatarnaak cheez ho sakti h... But but but we have sameer as well... The youngest business tycoon with a pure heart and open mind.... I just loved it how he hold on to her and never let her go.... It was surely a delight to read ...

While reading the entire OS i felt like i was watching a movie surely a blockbuster one with awesome dialogues, Scenes , settings , plot and ofcourse the hero and heroine.... It is soooooooooooo vivid that anyone can visualize them while reading!

Love you dher saaaaaraaaaa pyaari behena

Keep smiling.

Labhya