SAMAINA OS - MAI HOON SAATH TERE - Page 2

Originally posted by: munchkinland

This was written really beautifully Fiza

I loved it to the core

The way he let go of all his fears and laid bare in front of her

wow.

Thanku su dii for your comment .. 😁😁

I am happy that you liked it

Mai bekar me apne nakhun chaba rahi thi ke kisiko pasand nahi aane wala 🤣🤣🤣

Originally posted by: Ashhii

Very beautiful Os🙂

Thank you dear 😃😃

Originally posted by: AnjaanMishra

Bahot acha likha hai , this is your first OS , aapne pahli ball pe six mara hai 😍

Congrats dear and keep writing 😊🤗

Please mujhe aap lehkar sharminda mat kijiye 😆😆

Mai bht choti hu aapse ..😆😆

Maine sixer mara . Mujhe laga meri yah ball dot hi reh jayegi 🤣🤣

Originally posted by: JaySee

Beautiful OS. Loved the emotional conversation between Sameer and Naina. There was a beauty in the way how he back hugged Naina and started breaking down. They shared all their fears and worries and assured each other that whatever happens they are not going to stay away from each other.

Indeed they will be together for the rest of their life and beyond 😁😁

I am so happy that u liked it 🙇🙇🙇😄😄

Wow Fiza🤗

Lovely os! I loved that you mentioned "bahoon mein kaid karke rakhoonga". The title was also beautiful. Onek onek sundor hoeche os ta.

Originally posted by: Rph09

Wow Fiza🤗

Lovely os! I loved that you mentioned "bahoon mein kaid karke rakhoonga". The title was also beautiful. Onek onek sundor hoeche os ta.

Amar sune khub bhalo laglo je tomar bhalo lege che

Lovely OS.You described the feelings very well.

It was beautifully written Fiza. I loved it. I loved how Sameer told Naina and they both consoled each other. It was so emotional and you narrated all the feelings so amazingly. 🤗

Originally posted by: sonushrivastava

Lovely OS.You described the feelings very well.

Thanku... For appreciating my work...

😄😄😄

Originally posted by: shwta16

It was beautifully written Fiza. I loved it. I loved how Sameer told Naina and they both consoled each other. It was so emotional and you narrated all the feelings so amazingly. 🤗

I am so happy di that you liked it and I was looking forward for your review🤗🤗😄😄😄